Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 16

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Your writing is simply amazing! Thank you for writing this super long chapter!

I'm my eyes Khushi is a superstar ..and I loved the Bhang effect, she gave it to Arnav, it was too good!

Wish I could get a bit more of their moments! They need to open up and speak their mind...there is something unanswered always in their conversations..it's like they want to say something more.. It's like a puzzle!

Love how you end your updates.. In the most interesting way..looking forward to the next!

My comments on page 15.

Your writing is superb.

Interesting turn of events in this chapter!

This is one complicated set of characters and must be extremely difficult to write.

Khushi's blabber when she was high was the cutest I have read in a while..
You are doing an amazing job with this story :) Politics, business, and romance along with so much more..

Congrats for new thread. Off to read the new update now. :)

This was great.  So hilarious and befitting for this hugely fun crowd.   
Edited by Anamika100 - 9 years ago

It was such an awesome chapter to read. So many things cleared and many more to come. Loved it every line of the story.

school crush,chooo chweet:-)
yay,one more twist...
awsome update.

I feel I should have read this story once it was completed.. Seriously! The different emotions I go through while reading.. It is very VERY difficult to wait for the next update.. This was a very long chapter and thanks sooo much for that. Total entertainment package! Loved it to bits!