Ishra FF- In my every breath Pt 8 O Rabba Mein Toh Margaya Oye!- pg 30 - Page 5

pmg such a awesome start
thank u for d pm

its nice, 

Awww... loved that first glace, what an impression Ishu made on him.  Can't await for the details and see how they fall in love.  Definitely a new take on the story like you said, but the characters are just as amazing, can't wait for more. Thanks for the PM! 😊

Loved both the parts
superb...

amazing update really nice..

Part 2-

nice and fantastic...update read both the parts...its tooo good and emotional ...pls do continue ...thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ..DiVan..

Brilliant..

Thnx for the PM

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

pmg such a awesome start
thank u for d pm

Originally posted by: shinseen

its nice, 

looking forward.