Ishra FF- In my every breath Pt 8 O Rabba Mein Toh Margaya Oye!- pg 30 - Page 4

read this part now. it was truly beautiful. l was smiling throughout the update. so it was love at first sight. plz give us updates of ishra love life, but still I am not happy with ishita death. waiting for next update and thanx for pm

Brilliant job!! I can clearly imagine the space Roo and RKB are in after Ishu's untimely demise.. I really loved it how Raman was flat on Ishu just at first sight.. The way you weave your words.. everything is spot on.. I like to make my comments substantial and encouraging so here is a piece of advice (OBVIOUSLY if you don't mind!!!) .. do put emphasis on Roo's sentiments after her IshiMaa's demise because their attachment is too strong.. Overall, I genuinely loved your hard work .. Keep it up 😊 👏

Emotional... Period... 

Originally posted by: Anum_says

part 1 is flashback or present???

if its present then who is she... bcoz ishita died na...

nice and emotional update

Originally posted by: umeirah02

Brilliant job!! I can clearly imagine the space Roo and RKB are in after Ishu's untimely demise.. I really loved it how Raman was flat on Ishu just at first sight.. The way you weave your words.. everything is spot on.. I like to make my comments substantial and encouraging so here is a piece of advice (OBVIOUSLY if you don't mind!!!) .. do put emphasis on Roo's sentiments after her IshiMaa's demise because their attachment is too strong.. Overall, I genuinely loved your hard work .. Keep it up 😊 👏

Originally posted by: shravsss

Emotional... Period... 

But their first meeting...  Wow...  Already the flashback has started...  Wow... 

Continue soon... 

Originally posted by: aarohi26

read this part now. it was truly beautiful. l was smiling throughout the update. so it was love at first sight. plz give us updates of ishra love life, but still I am not happy with ishita death. waiting for next update and thanx for pm

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Ur prologue & 1st part has made everyone emotional..😭

Originally posted by: darlingpinks

Thanks a lot dear😊

But Ishu's demise is only the first and last part

I'll concentrate on them after Ishra meet and in the last part

And please tell me wherever I go wrong

I won't mind at all

Actually want to become a writer

So criticism is welcome

Infact, I would feel happy that I can improve my work

Thanks again

And Ishita's death has upset everyone

so, I have decided to continue it with another thread based on rebirth continuing this

Hope it would come out well

After this I will do it.

Hope you'll like it

Thanks again dear. Your comments encourage me a lot

stay blessed dear and yes I'll welcome anything you want to write.. & darling even I want to be a writer so I know how much these motivating comments matter. You DO write very well!!

Brilliant..