Originally posted by Wings-of-Fire Originally posted by Nisha0604 Originally posted by Wings-of-FireRosh,
I'm behind but catching up.
He's balcony resembles Aishwarya's Cannes hotel balconies and he makes pasta? Hmm.. I like him a little more now.
P.S. The distance between him and II can't be 5 or 6 feet when they are holding hands. According to height- wingspan ratio, his hands should be 28-29 inches and II's even less. So not possible to cover 60 inches between them while 10 of those inches are gone trying to hold hands!
I understand I have a M.S./Ph D Statistics, topper gold medalist? reading my first foray into writing a FLAWED romance fiction. Thank you for dissecting the tale scientifically and statistically and biologically.
I would prefer if you didnt do that ITS A STORY, in case you forgot Cheers& Happy ReadingP.S. If you MUST dissect something, I will point you towards the show its based off of
enough fodder there I hear
I apologize if it seemed critical to you. I don't dissect things to critique, it's just when I read a story I try to visualize it and the math geek jumps up in irregularities, and before I know it, I've written about it! I will not dissect your story again.
In this case the "math" is wrong, coz the distance between two people holding hands could be as MUCH as 4 to 5 feet
No offence taken Rosh
I notice you say mostly critical things only. Since this is CLEARLY my pastime I hope people will say NICE things too
I apologize for not matching up to your tough literary standards never took a class never wrote anything before... dont care to put my life on hold and take any professional training either I am sorry... I write SOLELY to amuse myself ONLY... not for any other lofty reason
Sorry if I gave you any other impression yaar
Edited by Nisha0604 - 6 years ago