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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: hinusha
nice part...
naitik and sneha ki shaadi omg...
but no naksh scene... hope we get naksh scenes in near future...😃
and ha madam ji tomorrow u update next part okeiii???????🤢

thank u ji for liking it..aur kal update itni jaldi..theek hai mai try karoongi..

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
thank u ji for liking it..aur kal update itni jaldi..theek hai mai try karoongi..

yuppie update daily or atleast one in two days but not more dan dat.. okeiii?????

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

CHAPTER...4...

Naitik quickly take his hand back...sn-kya hua naitik ji...????nk( in confusion)- nothing...and then akshara came with a holi colour...and while comming her eyes are only on naitik...when vishambhar introduce her to naitik and his family...vish- ye aa gayi hamari pyaari beti akshara...akshara- radhe krishna...nandini came near her and hug her...nandini- akshara...ak-ji...nd- tum sach me bahut sundar ho...ak(smile)- thank u di...nd- thank u kis baat ka...jo sach hai maine wo kaha...bahut hi pyaari ho tum...kyu mohit...???mo-ha kyu nahi...jab badi behen itni sundar hai..toh choti bhi hogi hi naa...sneha cuts them in between...sn-ye teeka maisabko laga deti hu...she took that thaal from akshara's hand and take a pinch of colour...lagaofy on naitik's forhead...sn-happy holi...nk-happy holi to u too...she put colour on everybody's face except akshara...she was all alone standing at a corner...and naitik sees her...he came near her and says...nk-hi akshara !!!ak( smile)- hi !!!!nk- aapko rang pasand nahi..???ak-pasand hai par holi se pehle nahi...nk-ohhh !!! chaliye aapko rang holi ke din lag jayega...after finish this sentence he again went back...ak- par...after their get together...nandini- ji uncle ab hame chalna chahiye...vish- abhi kyu beta thodi der aur ruk jate...hamare pandit ji aate hi honge...wo jald se jald shadi ki date nikaal dete...nandini- nahi uncle..ye sab kaam aap hi kar dijiye...hame toh bas ab apni bhabhi ko jald se jald ghar le jana hai...kyu naitik...????nk( smile)-...he said something to nandini but silently...and she understand...nandini- uncle aunty mujhe aap dono se kuch kehna tha...rj and vish- ha beta kahiye...mo- mai batata hu..uncle wo baat hai ki...naitik sneha ko kahi bahar lekar jana chahta hai...i mean agar aapki permission ho toh..vish looked at sneha..and said- theek hai..sneha aapke saath chali jayegi...and all gets happy...naitik with nandini and mohit came outside the maheshwari house..nk-thank u di aapne mera kaam kar diya...nd-dekho naitik aaj toh maine himmat karke ye baat kar li..aage se sab kuch shadi ke baad..ok...nk-ok di..bye!!!mo-aree isee toh dekho kitni jaldi hame bhagane me laga hai...wife mil rahi hai toh apne dost ko bhool gaya..nk-tu apni bakwaas band kar...mo- theek hai theek hai..hum jate hai..tu sneha ko ghuma phira kar jaldi se ghar aa jana...nk-hmmm...by this nandini and mohit went back to their home.naitik again came in the house to take sneha with him...and she was already to go...

nk-chale...????

sn-ji ek minute...

she quickly call akshara...and with her voice akshara came from her room..

sn to ak- ready...???

ak-hmmm...

naitik became shocked to see akshara with them...

nk-kya akshara bhi..???

sn-ha akshara bhi hamare saath chalegi..hope aapko koi problem nahi hai..

nk( with fake smile )- no..its ok...

but akshara is not at all happy with this...she is just quite and ready to do everything only for sneha...

nk- ab chale..???

sneha-ya...

trio came and sit in the car...naitik on driver seat...sneha next to him..and akshara on back seat...

naitik adjust his mirror and sees akshara...but quikly turn off his eyes...

nk( st)-ye sneha ko na jane akshara ko saath lene ki kya zaroorat thi...???

sneha- chaliye naitik kya soch rahe hain...

nk-haaa...kuch nahi...

he dorve the car...and after some time they reached in a five star hotel...

trio came in the hotel...naitik offered them chair...and then both sat there...

nobody was taking to eachother...trio were in silent mode...when naitik broke the silence...

nk-ammm...aap dono kuch khayengi ya nahi...

sn( smiles)-ya...boliye aap kya khana chahte hain..hum wahi khayenge...

nk- ji nahi yaha host mai hu..isliye aap bataiye ki aap kya khana pasand karengi...

( here akshara felt herself as a kabab me haddi...ohhh my poor baby akshara...)

sn-ji nahi...

nk-ohh sorry !!!! mai bhool gaya..mai abhi order karke aata hu..

he quickly went from there...

sn- uff !!!! kitna boring hai ye naitik...hai na akshara ???

ak- nahi di..naitik ji itne boring nahi hai...

sn-ohhh..tujhe bada pata hai...ho sakta hai..par aaj toh mai phass gayi tum do bore logon ke beech me..

ak-kya di aap bhi...phass toh mai gayi..kabab me haddi...wo bhi aap dono ke beech me...

sn- chup kar tu..hamesha bakwaas karti hai...

while saying this...sneha's face suddenly brighten up...and she quickly got up and hug someone...

sn- riya...!!!! tu yaha istne saalo ke baad...wow !!!!

ri-hi !!! sneha kaisi hai tu...

sn- mai bilkul theek hu..tu bata..

ri- yaha nahi tu bas mere saath chal..hamare college ka poora gang yaha aaya hai..

sn( shockingly )- sach ????

ri-haaa... sab ke sab hai...tu bhi chal mere saath..bahut maza aayega...waise tu yaha...

sn- wo mai apni sister ke saath lunch par aayi thi...

ri-ohh...that's nice...accha ab chale sab wait kar rahe honge...

sn- ha chal naa...

she was about to go..when akshara stop her...

ak- di..aap kaha ja rahi hain ???

ri- arre mai tumhari di ko kahi bhagakar nahi le ja rahi hu...bas hum abhi aate hai...

sn- ha akshara mai jaldi se aa jaungi...

ak-par aap ja kaha rahi hain...?? aur naitik ji...

ri-hum bas second floor par ja rahe hai...ok

sn- ok akshara bye..mai aati hu...

and she went with riya...

on the way..

ri- sneha ??? btw ye naitik kaun hai ???

sn- chal abhi batati hu...

and she happily went with her...

here after some time...naitik came and sat on his chair...

nk( surprised)-ye sneha kaha gayi...???

ak- naitik ji wo...di apni friend ke saath kahi gayi hain...bas abhi aa jayengi...

nk- ohhh...!!!!...

ak-ammm...

nk-ji...aap kuch kehna chahti hain...???

ak- nahi toh...

nk-hmmm...

and they wait for sneha atleast one n hour...where atleast four time naitik send their lunch...

but akshara and naitik were silent...only waiting for sneha...

nk- na jaane kaha reh gayi hai sneha...???

ak- di abhi aati hi hongi...

nk(st)- itni der se toh yahi sun raha hu..

nk-hmmm...

akshara tried to break silence between them...

ak-waise naitik ji...

nk-ji...

ak- aapko meri di acchi toh lagi naa...

nk- hmmm...

ak- good...wo bilkul aapke type ki hain...

nk-mere type ki matlab..???

ak- aapke type ki matlab..ki wo dil ki bahut acchi hai...

nk- accha..??? aap ne mujhe itni jaldi jaan liya...

ak-ji...kabhi kabhi hum ek doosre ko ek pal me jaan lete hain...aur kabhi kabhi saari umar nahi jaan paate...

nk- aree waah !!!! aap toh bahut pyaari baate karti hain...

ak- ji meri sirf baate hi pyaari hain...baaki kuch nahi...

nk-aree aap aisa kyu keh rahi hai...aap sach me bahut acchi hain akshara...

ak- jhoot..agar aisa hota toh aap mujhe itni der tak bhooka nahi rakhte...

nk( shocked)- ohh !!!! i am really sorry akshara...mai...mai sach me bilkul pagal hu..sneha ka wait karte karte...i am really sorry...

he quickly call the waiter and ask him to serve their lunch...

akshara start eating her food..but naitik was still waiting for sneha...and akshara sees him..she quickly put her spoon on the plate..and stop eating hetr food...

nk- aree aapne khana kyu band kar diya..???

ak- mera mann nahi hai..

nk-par abhi toh aapko..

ak- bahut bhook lagi thi par ab nahi...

nk-mai samajh gaya...

ak-kya ?

nk-yahi ki aap apni di ke bagair khana nahi khati...

ak-ji aisa kuch nahi hai..par mai akele nahi khana chahti...yaha mai apna khana kha rahi hu..aur aap yu hi baithe hain..ye mujhe bilkul accha nahi lag raha...

nk-par mai abhi...

akshara cuts him in between...and put a piece of food in his mouth...

ak-ye lijiye...

and both smile on this...

nk- i am sorry akshara ji...

ak-sorry par kis liye...???

nk-sach kahu toh pehle mujhe bilkul accha nahi laga tha...ki aap hamare saath yaha aayi...aur

ak-aur ab...

nk- thanks...hamare saath...ohh sorry mere saath yaha aane ke liye...actually sirf yaha aane ke liye hi nahi balki meri life me aane ke liye...

ak( shocked)- ...

nk- ha akshara ji...aaj mujhe aapke roop me ek bahut acchi friend mili hai...thank u...

akshara's eyes filled with tears...

ak( smile)- thank u..thank u naitik ji...

nk- aaa..aaa... naitik ji nahi...sirf naitik...aaj se hum dono best friend...ok...

ak-ji naitik ji...sorry !!! naitik...par aaj se aap bhi mujhe akshara hi bulayenge...ok

nk-ok...ye sneha ji ko kuch zyada hi der nahi ho gayi...???

ak- haaa...bas wo..

nk-mai samajh gaya akshara...aap kya kehna chati hain...kya sneha hamesha se hi aisi hai ?????

ak- nahi naitik ji...bilkul nahi...di ko sabka bahut khayal rehta hai..wo..wo sabko bahut pyaar karti hai...

nk- accha...

ak-haa..sach...wo...wo subah subah jaldi bhi uth jati hain...ghar ke saare kaam bhi karti hain...aur wo toh apne friends ki bhi bahut madad karti hain..bahut simple hain di...

nk- aur...aur kya khoobiyaan hai aapki di me...

ak-har khoobi hai..agar tareef karoongi toh shayad poori life lag jaye..wo bahut acchi hai...

nk-ohhh... really nice..

ak-hmmm...

nk- akshara kya mai tumse ek baat kahu...bas sirf ek baat...

ak-haa kyu nahi...boliye...

nk- aap apne friends ko kitna maanti hai..

ak- apni jaan se jayada...

nk-toh aap apne dosto par poora bharosa bhi karti hongi...aur aap ye bhi chahti hongi ki aapke dost aap par vishwaas bhi kare

ak- haa..par ye kaise sawal hai naitik...???

nk-nahi bas aise hi...toh aap ye bataiye ki kya mai aapka dost hu..??

ak- naitik...haa kyu nahi abhi abhi toh aapne kaha ki hum dost hain...

nk-hmmm...ek dost hone ke naate aap ye nahi batayengi...( stop )

ak( worriedly )- k..ky...kya naitik ????

nk-yahi ki kal mujse milne kaun aaya tha ????

ak- na...nai..naitik ye kaisa sawal hai...???

nk- bataiye na akshara...kal wo ladki mere saath kaun thi..???

ak- sneha di...aur kaun...

nk- accha...???

ak-haa...

( while answering his question she was looking here and there...)

nk-yahi baat aap meri aankho me dekhkar bhi keh sakti hai naa...

akshara quickly got up from her chair...

ak-aapke saath di ke alawa aur kaun ho sakta hai...

she quickly about to go...but naitik hold her hand...

nk- pata hai akshara uss ladki ka chehra bhale hi mujhse chupa hua tha..par ehsaas nahi..

akshara became shocked by this...

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PRECAP- NAITIK AND SNEHA'S ENGAGEMENT...

so friends how is it...????
hope u all like it...

so pls write ur comments..or atleast hit the like button..if u really like it..

thanks for reading this...

waiting for ur comment...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Waaw sonal simple nd cutee part waiting for next part when natik meet akshra this shneha too mach naksh ek dusre k hi h 😳 pls update it tomorrow...

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ruchigarg
Waaw sonal simple nd cutee part waiting for next part when natik meet akshra this shneha too mach naksh ek dusre k hi h😳pls update it tomorrow...

thank u soo much ruchi for liking it..i will definately try to write it tomorrow

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

very interesting part waiting for their meeting in restaurant

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
very interesting part waiting for their meeting in restaurant

thank u pragati for ur sweet comment

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Sameera Badar

@sameera_naksh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

nyccc part dear welldone plz update next part soon...sorry for late reply...bcoz i m busy in sister's marriage preparations

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
nyccc part dear welldone plz update next part soon...sorry for late reply...bcoz i m busy in sister's marriage preparations

thank u so much dear for liking it..nd commenting here..
congrats to ur di..