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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldstar678

Fantastic fantastic fantastic,this is what exactly I want to see in the show.Neil telling Pam to shut up her mouth and then when they are alone showing his anger towards her for all this drama of fake marriage that she is portraying in front of him past two months.I can so imagine the anger and frustration.

I know Ragini loves him but sadly in a way I'm happy what she is going through now,as her Nachiket is going through the same emotions since the day Dimpy told him about the marriage.

Anyhow they both are fools who are madly in love but will continue to deny that fact in front of the world.At least Ragini shared with her mother but unfortunate there is no one in Neils life with whom he can share, don't know why they are not giving more space to karan and dimpy n mainly using them for comedy,there is so much potential in their characters too if properly utilised.

Neira ka kuch nahi ho sakta.


Hey!!
Oh my gosh, that's a huge compliment.
Thank you so much 😳😳

I have honestly cursed Neil so much for putting up with Pam's nonsense.  😆
Sadly, Ekta maa ke show mein yeh sab chalta rehta hai so I suck a lemon and keep at it lol

I totally agree with you.
Un dono ka kya hoga who knows.
Only thing we can do is create imaginary scenarios to "phusla" the heart if you know what I mean 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash41900

wao absolutely amazing ... lovely keep writing


Awwh, thank you so much!! 
Will do!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: poetic

Wow Hinal. Thanks for this beauty.

And the good news is we get some more parts I think 😉

The story is beautiful, and you have written it so beautifully.

It's what we want to see in the Show, but I doubt.

And I so want Nachiket to shut Pam up once and for all.

eagerly waiting for the next part. 


Hey!
Awwwh, thank you sooo much seriously!
Your comments always put a huge smile on my face 😃😳

I'm really glad to know you liked it!!

I'll try to have more than just two-three parts.
Who knows I might make it a SS if I find a proper story 😉

Thanks once again :D

I'll try to have the next part up as soon as I can 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alia.kapoor

it was good pls continue!!!!!!!


Thank youu! :D
Glad you liked it!!!
Will try to post the next one soon! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: d3c3nt

amazing, do continue 


Thank you :D
I'll try to have the next part up asap 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you soo much! 😳
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hinalll! Geez i just read it and its W.O.W. Seriously you have written it so beautifully man. Where were you till now?? I can't even mention my favourite parts, upar se neeche tak perfection tha dude!
But undisputedly the best part was nachiket firing pam 😆
Then he made ragini confess 😳 only he can do that! And he got those words to hear!
You played so wonderfully with the words, its just so goood!
Thankyou for writing it 🤗
Update the last part soon :)


Hey Surbhi!!
Awwwh thank you so so so much <3
That's such a huuuge compliment  😃😃 

😆  Trust me when I say I had the most fun writing that scene 😉

I'm really glad to know you liked it that much :D

Thank you for the idea though!! 😳😳

Will try to pen the next bit very soon 😃
Thank you once again 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: -Spriha-

Too good Hinal...!

Absolutely amazing...really want the misunderstandings cleared in the show as well.
Loved the way u handled this situation...👏 aaanndd loved reading it!
Update sooonnn!!


Hey!!
Thanks a lot!! :D
I'm so glad you loved it!! 😳

Will try to update very soon! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Hinal  . Your title caught my eyes and had me curious as to what it was . Glad that I opened it to learn about the flower. Loved how you linked it perfectly in context to the show.
This is a great starting and I love the way you wrote it. You really had me engrossed but it finished soon. hope to see something out soon as i am eager to see what's next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: basket_101


Heyy!!
Awwh, it was my pleasure 😳
Thank you soo much! :D
I've had a brutal month, but now I have time as I only have a couple of papers and exams to worry about :)

I'm still confused as to how exactly I want the next bit to turn out, so it may take a few days.
But I shall try my best to pen it down quick!

Thank you once again 😃



Yay! 😳
All the best for your remaining exams and great to have you back!