[PARSH] aka Sandhir New SS [PART 8] 'Commitment' - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

awesome marvelous amazing update zumi.    it was yet another cracking update.   lovely piece of writing dear. u hv penned down so beautifully that I can't able to explain how much I like it. but m disappointed by d lack of comment in Ur ff. that's d main reason hv earlier decided to quit this forum. coz one writer gets more than 100 likes n comment n others didn't get there appreciation.     members of dis forum r so biased that they ll comment only to those stories whom deu know perfectly.   otw dey don't even concider that they r also a writer.    that's y its better to stay away from these members n bttr ll b to not take part in sh forum. u don't worry zumi ur loyal viewer ll always there with u.   bbyyee take care.




Ahaa.. Sarim! First Thanks alot for the appreciation.
But I don't write for some comments. I write for myself.
See the views? People read it and that's the best part.

I'm not disappointed with the comments.
I'm happy with not having them.. As I know my capability.
And those comments I don't want them!

All of them are appreciated who give there necessary time
To comment.. And read it! πŸ‘

But you're such a sweetheart.
This topic really don't disappoint me.!! πŸ˜‰

So just chill and calm down..
Have some confidence on yourself.
People aren't commenting doesn't mean that they don't read it..
I don't care about the less comments.
If they want they will do it.. So don't worry.. And love yourself. πŸ˜† πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zumi_Vamp




Ahaa.. Sarim! First Thanks alot for the appreciation.
But I don't write for some comments. I write for myself.
See the views? People read it and that's the best part.

I'm not disappointed with the comments.
I'm happy with not having them.. As I know my capability.
And those comments I don't want them!

All of them are appreciated who give there necessary time
To comment.. And read it! πŸ‘

But you're such a sweetheart.
This topic really don't disappoint me.!! πŸ˜‰

So just chill and calm down..
Have some confidence on yourself.
People aren't commenting doesn't mean that they don't read it..
I don't care about the less comments.
If they want they will do it.. So don't worry.. And love yourself. πŸ˜† πŸ˜ƒ



sry for this outburst.    

but what I felt hv said it.   

next time ll remember ur words.

bye
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww... Soo nice Zumi ^_^
Luv it... <3 
Aww.. Param <3 
Zum, u r an awesome writer :* 
Luv it 
Post the next soonish 
Mee waiting here... 
PS :Beware of my stalking :D
Thanks for Pm 

Luv
Chandu 
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsome re...
bahot  khub...

lajawab...

πŸ‘

i loved it...

😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
           'Commitment'

Chapter - 8

'The one with the mood swings'

Away away, oh away away

Two spins he took, pause a moment to express and took a flips momentary.

This feels like the coldest day in a hurricane looking through a glass window

He runs and jumps showing off his flexibility to his shadow in the mirror.

And ya screaming to the top of yours lungs, and the bells done rung

He turned around and tap his steps on the ground to connect the feelings within him.

the crowd can't hear you
And all that i can see is a building burning


He sensed her. He felt her presence. He felt her eyes on him. He closed his eyes and drawned his mind and soul into his dance.

I Just gotta rescue my baby
But you don't even recognize me


Floats his body in the air and swayed his hips with the beats.

And even though the feeling's been gone i just wanna be here

Swaying his both hands lightly in the air and left he goes to jump and shiftly curls on the ground.

To pick up the little pieces of remains
I'm going down the plane is smoking


Took a brief moment to catch the words of the only love he has remained stud.

the only one who can save me is you but you wanna throw me

Throws himself curtly on the ground, with the pain in his heart he fades it in his dance.

Away, away, away, away, oh why
I wanna know
I wanna know why you wanna throw me
Away, away, away, away, oh why
I wanna know
I wanna know why you wanna throw me away


Happens to ease the pain within him roughly he ends the game. Final steps he took but suddenly out his look. He gaze at the side to take his final breathe inside.

He heard a applaud and smiled to himself. 'What can be the reason of a sexy girl like you peeking on me?' He turned around and smirked seductively.

She rolled her eyes at his question. 'Baka, how did you even know I'm here?' She was amused at how easily he sensed her presence.

Param smirked and moved towards her until he was two steps far from her. 'You always knock my attention.' He leaned down and planted a peck on her cheek.

'Was I suppose to laugh?' Harshita mocked but her curved turned into a smile. 'You're really working hard for your debut. Incredible.' She praised him.

'Thank You. What are you doing here?' He picked him towel to dry his sweat.

'I was just passing by from this area. So I came here to suprise you but trust me, I'm the one who is suprised here. You my dear boyfriend.. You dance HOT.' She sexily managed to whisper.

He chuckled at her comment. 'Where were you heading?' He cherish his thirst from water.

Harshita narrowed her eyes and sighed. 'I was going home.

'Tired?' He asked and gave her I-told-you-being-director-is-no-fun look.

She groaned. 'Don't.' She snapped and pointed her finger at him.

'What?' Completely being innocent. He supress his laughter.

'I'm tired.' She whined and sighed.

'Come On. I'll drive you to home.' He picked his belongings and dragged her into his car.

'Hey? What about my car?' She narrowed her eyes at him.

'Let her rest for a while. I'll send it back to your house.' He smirked.

'Dont smirk at me like that.' She glared at him.

He leaned down to her and gave her a quick peck on the lips to concentrate on the path while driving.

'Baka.' He heard her whisper some curses which made him laugh.

                   *******

'I don't want to come back Dad. I already told you I'm on a vacation.' Vidhushi yelled for the tenth time on the phone.

'I don't care dad. I love him and You know that.' She rolled her eyes in frustration.

'Its my life dad. I'm not gonna ruin it for your greediness. Get that straight in you thick-head Old Man.' She hang up the phone and sighed realising her irritation.

'That old Man.. I'll sue him. Aargh..' Vidhushi aggressively stood up and started punching the wall. 'Ouch.. Dammit Wall.' She shouted soothing her palm.

'Punch on this Crazy Lady. Not on the innocent wall.' Parth winked at her and pushed the punching bag at her side.

'Go away. I don't wanna talk right now.' She yelled and started punching the bag.

'Toughie Girlfriend I got huh?' He went behind her wrapped his hands around her waist.

'I'll punch you in the gut if you don't realise me.' She stiffened and glared at him.

He smirked in her neck and nibbled her ear earning an smack on his head. 'Vidhushi..!' He realised her immediately and soothed his head.

'Warned you.' She mocked at him and started punching again.

'Crazy Woman.' He muttered and sat there watching her intensely.

To be continued...

Zumi



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update
Loved it


Yr u described dance sequence so well
Harshi admiring param
Their cute teasing sessions




Vids in full anger mode
Parth knows how to tackle his wild cat


Yr it was so short
Update longer next tym

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi i m new on IF but have read all your parsh stories..
ur drabble threads 1 and 2 and all your os..nd this ss too!!
U just rockπŸ‘
continue and plzz pm me..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome amazing n superb update zumi.   



this ss is so sweet n lovely fabulous dear.   


do update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
thanks for pm
continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
Loved it
Update soon
Thank you for p.m me