Wait .. .what? How did this happen? WOW! Seriously Nisha... you're just looking to knock the breath out of your readers right?
I saw the title of the latest update was the name of one of my fave dramas so I come to read all excited ... and then this!
WOW! How amazing. Love that once he realized the situation and what the circumstances called for he made the right move- love that he shaved, and his sensitivity and strength in dealing with Appah.
Your descripon of her cloathes and the way he noticed her in them was beautifully done. The last line was perfect. And the proposal... so uniquely him, so uniquely them- I don't think i could have expected anything else nor been satisfied wit the stereotypical one from him.
My favorite part though 'No Di'... so much, says so much about him , his feelings and them in so little...👏
So can't wait for the next update- from winning over Appah, to the sisters' and Bally's reaction, to their future, it's going to be amazing- can't wait.
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