Tere Bina Bina Tere:- A love epic: tum bin. pt-15..updated pls read.

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ENDLESS START OF AN STORY:-TUM BIN

story starts with ajab and pratap with their family shifted to udaipur where pratap was married to other six princesses including phool .

but as it is known pratap loved ajabdeh only...


hit likes and comments i will update further story latet and one surprise for you all pls do read TERE BINA AND TUM BIN when i will update

pls read u all will njoy it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part:1

story starts with pratap in the court with us and were discussing about mahal renewation where they decided to shift their capital to a new city named UDAIPUR..
kp:thik h dajiraj hum aisa hi karte h ..
us:thik h toh phir aap jane ki taiyari kijiye hum waha ki sari wyawastha kar sake isliye hum aaj hi prasthan kar rahe h aap kuchh din bad apni rani maa aur apni patniyon ko lekar aajaiyega thik h na

kp:par dajiraj aap akele rawatji ke saath...
us:aap chintit na ho hum sambhal lenge waha par aap sirf yaha par sambhal lena aur mahal ka sara saman aur sab ko lekar waha aajaiyega thik h ..

us:thij h dajiraj.

LEAVING FOR UDAIPUR
jb doing aarti of us.
jb:apna dhyqn rakhiyega ranaji..

us :hum apko ab udaipur ma milte hai ..

AND LEFT...
KP:chaliye ranima ,ajab ab hume bhi sab saman bandhna aarambh karna chahiye hume bhi shigra waha jana chahiye
jb&Aj:nodded thik hai kp..
ajabdeh was ordering to the dasis for the packing when jb came
jb:are ajab aap yeh kya kr rhi h aap aap akeli rani nahin aur bhi raniyah mewad ki toh aap akeli kyon kam kr rhi h .aap mewad ki kuwrani hai aur hone wali maharani bhi toh aapko iss halat meih kam karna aatcha nahin h agar kp ne dekh liya toh woh kya sochenge ki aapke alawakoi kam nahin karta .aur waise bhi aapko abhi waid k pass jana chahiye aap aswasth hai na isiliye

ajabdeh:nahin ranimaa hum waid k pass badme jayenge pehle jo dajiraj ne karya diya hainwoh purna kar lete h phir humm...
jb:thik h hum aapse kabhi nhi jeet sakte aap toh hume koi karya hi nhi karne deti h..
aj:aap humari maa h humare hate hue aapko koikarya karne ki aawashyakta nahin h.

kp came and told ajabdeh and jb about to tell all the dasis and ranis to proceed

THEY ALL WERE HEADING TOWARDS UDAIPUR AND PHOOL AS USUAL STARTED TO BE RESTLESS AND TIRED AND THERE WAS A NIGHT HALT

here pratap was a little tensed due to migration but he dont want to showto all giving them more tension . There ajabdeh came.
aj :kya hua kp aap hume chintit lag rhe h.koi bat h kya
kp:nahin ajab aisi koi bat nahin hain humarela sir dukh raha h bas aur kuchh nahin

aj:toh phir laiye hum apka sir daba dete h aapko thoda aaram milenga
THEY WERE SPENDING NIGHYLT TALKING &LAUGHING

OUTSIDE PHOOL SAW THIS SCENARIO WND WENT TO HER TENT RUNNING AND CRYING DB SAW THIS AND WENT TO HER.

DB:are phool kya hua aapko aap ro kyun rahin hai
ph:aapko isme padne ki koi awashyakta nahin h hum apne aapko sambhal sakte h .

db:thik h par haa apko koi bhi sahaita chahiye toh hume yad kijiyega humare pass ajabdeh ko raste se hatane ki yojnaye h ..
phool:to herself:hum jante h ki kpne kabhi humse prem hi nhi kiya unhone humare rajya aurhume akbarse bachane k liye hi humse vivah kiya par hum bhi toh unki patni h na aur hume bhi ek patni ka adhikar chahiye hum udaipur pohuch kar hi choti maa(db) se bat karenge

jb and vb were talking about ajabdeh and pratap
jb:hum kitne khush h ki ajab aur pratap apne jivanme khush hai aur apne jivan meaage badh rahe h bas ab koi badha nai anichahiye inke jivanme
IN PRATAP ROOM AJAB MADE PRATAP SLLE AND WAS MOVING BUT PRATAP HOLD HER HAND AND NOT TO GO
AJ:hum aapko chodkar kabhi nahin jayenge saying this she felt uneasiness and also tired butshe didnt want pratap to knou as ha was already tensed

aj:humeinse kuchh nahin kehna chahiye hum udaipur jaakar waid se mil lenge

saying this she drank water and slept beside pratap

NEXT THEY REACHED TO UDAIPUR
where first did the adjustment

phool :are ajabdeh aapka kaksh toh kitna dur hain sabse ab aap kya karenge as she got the kaksh next to pratap kaksh

ajabdeh:koi bat nahin phool hume koi antar nahin padta ki himara kaksh kitna dur hain
AS PRATAP WAS LISTENING TO THIS SPOKE OUT

kp:sahi kaha aapne ajab par hum apse dur nahin reh sakte ajab isi liye humne aapka saman humare kaksh me rakhwa chuke h aur aap humare kaksh meih humare sath hi rahenge bas (pratap knew that phool always wanted to come between them he turned table on her)

precap::GOOD NEWS ...GOOD NEWS AND SURPRISE

PLS DO COMMENT AND HIT LIKES ...
Edited by sam622 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are pls comment karo k story kaisi hsin toh mujhe pata chale k me kaisi likh rahi hoon

pls comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...😊 like it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenu7

Nice start...😊 like it...

thanks yeh toh sirf shuruvat h sage toh bahut hi interesting twist aur surprise entry h pls do watch thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting for the update..like the beginning
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awesome story waiting for update
update soon waiting...
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part :2

ajab:kp aapne aisa kyun kiya hum bhala aapke saath kaise reh sakte hain yeh toh apki aur patniyon k saaylth anyay hoga.

kp:ajab ek bat dhyan rakhiye ki aap humari pehli patni h aur aap hi h jo humare kareeb h .aap jante h ki humne in sab se vivah keval rajnaitik bal ko aur aap ke kehne par kiya tha .aur toh aur hum apke alawa kisi aur se prem nahi kabhi kiya tha aur na hi kabhi karenge isiliye aap is bat ko yahi samapt kar de bas.

aj:par kp...
kp:ajab hum kp hain yeh hum par nirbhar karta h ki hume kiske saath samay wyatit karna chahte h . aur hume aapke alawa kisi ka saath pasand nhi .aur yeh humara aadesh h ki aap humare saath hi rahengi bas.

aj:jaisi aapki aagya kp..
AND LAUGHED

HERE WHEN THEY WERE SLEEPING SUDDENLY AJAB WAS NAUSING(VOMITING)
kp:kya hua ajab kya hua aapko ..
ajab:hum thik h bas thoda sa aaram karenge toh thik ho jayenge..

kp:aap bhi na hum abhi ja hum abhi vaid ko bula late h..
aj:nahin kp aap chinta mat kijiye hum subah vaid ko mil le ge..
kp:thik he ab aap so jayiye aaram kijiye...
aj:thik h kp..

NEXT MORNING AJAB WAS DOING MORNING AARTI AND BHAJAN ALL WERE PRESENT THERE SUDDENLY AJABDEH FELL UNCONCIOUS

AND VAID WAS CALLED
kp:vaidji dekuiye na kya hua ajab ko achanak murchit ho gayi h dekhiye na(in panic mode)

vaid:kp aap chinta na kare hum dekhte h inhe

VAID EXAMINED HER AND GAVE THE NEWS
KP:kya hua vaidji sab thik toh h na ..
vaidji:sab thik h par ha aabse aapko kuwrani sa ka ab zyaada dhyan rakhna padenga ..

kp:kyun kya hua sabthik toh h na ajab...
vaidji: are sab thik h par apko unka dhyan is liye rakhna padenga kyunki ab yeh unke akele ka jiwan ka prashna nhi h par pure mewad k bhawishya ka h

jb:vaid ji spasht kijiye k kya hua h ajab ko
vaidji:maharanisa shubh samachar h mewad ka uttaradhikari aane wala h kuwrani sa garbhwati h

jb:kya are yeh to bohut hi shubh samachar h girja jaldi se mishthan le aao
(ALL WERE HAPPY EXCEPT DB AND WIVES OF PRATAP)
kp :ajab thik toh h na abhi
jb:kp aap chinta kat kijiye abse hum unka dhyan rakhenge thik h.
aur ha ab aap humesha ajab k saath rahiyenga unhe aapki awashyakta hongi
ranaji suna aapne hum dadi aur aap dada ban ne wale h aur kp pita ...
us:haa jp ji hum pure mewad me utsav ki ghoshna karte h
jb:nahin ranaji yeh khabar is mahal k bahar nhi jani chahiye
pratap aap jaiye ajab se mil lijiye..
(she knew kp was eager to meet ajab)
HE RAN TO HIS LOVE
SHE WAS RESTING
AJ:kp aap yaha.
kp:haa hum aaj bohut khush h aapne hume aaj sansar ki sari khushi di h dhanyawad ajab..

aj:yeh kya jehrahe h aap kp yeh toh humare liye sobhahya ki baat h ki hume mewad k uttaradhikari aue apke putra ko janm dene ka awsar mila...
kp:abse aap humare bina aur humari agya k bina kahin nahi jayengi hum apko jaha jana hoga wha le jayenge thik...

aj:par kp..
kp:yeh humara aadesh h ajab bas aap humare samaksh hi rahengi thik h

aj:jaisi aapki aagya kp..
SAYING THIS THEY HUGGED EACH OTHER AT THAT MOMENT JB CAME WITH GLASS OF BADAM MILK
JB:are ajab yeh lijiye aapke liye badamdudh jaldi pi lijiye
aj:ranima iski koi awashyakta nhi thi
jb:are aap mewad k uttradhikari ko janma dene wali h toh aapko apna khyal rakhna padenga
kp:ranima ucht keh rhi h jaldi pee lijiye ise

aj:thik h ...


pratap took ajab care immensly and vb,jb knowing about db also took agood care of it that they don t harm ajab .

pk and db made plans to seperate praja but now they were unseperable
pratap warned pk not to interfere in their relationship and shattered her durle to which she was frightened and decided to not come between them

AFTER NINE MONTHS AMAR SINGH WAS BORN AND THERE WAS A GRAND CELIBRATION IN UDAIPUR

PRECAP:A SURPRISE ENTRY AND SHOCK


THANK YOU ALL AND DO READ
Edited by sam622 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are abhi toh ek dhamakedaar entry baki h asp log guess karo
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Originally posted by: sam622

are abhi toh ek dhamakedaar entry baki h asp log guess karo



Hmmm...cant guess 😆 😲

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