Tere Bina Bina Tere:- A love epic: tum bin. pt-15..updated pls read.

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shambhavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

sooo how is this new update...njoyed or not

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coderlady

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

So Ratan is in love with Shakti. That was a surprise. Lets see how it unfolds.

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shambhavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

this misunderstanding will create a lost love between them but will be at end...but shakti will get his heart back but in different girl...

JUST WAIT AND WATCH

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shambhavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

here is new update sorry for late ...

but pls njoy reading...

part::::::13

As sagaii was finished ajabdeh then headed for the next ritual which was the ceremony where the bride has to go to the kuldevi temple for worshipping ...ajab was with the pandit who was getting out th tithi...

aj:kaunsa muhurat nikla h pandit ji...?

pandit : kunwranisa kal ka din shubh h kal ratan kanwar darshan hetu prasthan jaa sakti h par haa unpar koi kasht aa sakta h hume iski aashanka ho rhi h...

aj::kyaa toh phir...

SUDDENLY SHAKTI INTERRUPTED BETWEEN...

ks:bhabhisa aap nishchint rahiye hum jayenge ratan... humara. matlab h unke saath..

aj:thik h bhai shakti .aap unka khyal rakhiyega thik h.

RATAN WAS IN HER THOUGHTS THINKING ABOUT SHAKTI AN HER RELATIONSHIP. SUDDENLY AJABDEH CAME...

aj:are ratna kya hua aapko aap thik h na?

rk:kyaa jija aap ...yaha ..kya hua kuchh chahiye aapko?

aj:nhi nhi hum aapko yeh batane aaye h ki kal pratahkaal aapko kuldev k mandif jana h.apne nay jeevan ki kamna k liye..

rk:kyaaa jija yeh sab ki koi awashyakta h kya...

aj:are ratan aap mevad ki rani hone wali h au aapka yeh kehna uchit nhi h...

rk:thik h jija...hum awashya jayenge...

AJABDEH LEFT FROM THERE AND RATAN WAS STANDING THERE LIKE A STATUE.

HERE SHAKTI IN HIS ROOM.

"HUM RATAN KA VIVAH BHAI SE NHI HONE DENGE HUME UNKE CHALL SE DADABHAI KO BACHANA HONGA...UNHONE HUMARE SAATH VISHWAS GHATT KIYA H ...UNHE ISKA DAND TOH BHUGATNA HI HONGA...

HUM APKO ITNI ASANISE NHI CHODENGE RATAN AB AAP DEKHIYE HUM KYAA KARTE H AAPKE SAATH ..."

RATAN "MAAN KI BAAT"

HUME KUNWAR SHAKTI SE BAAT KARKE SAB BATA DENA HONGA V HUME GALAT SAMAJH RHE HONGE .HUME UNHE BATANA HONGA KI HUMNE YEH SAB KYUN AUR KISKE LIYE KIYA...

SUDDENLY VEER BAI CAME THERE...

vb:are ratan aap abhi soi nhi kal pratah kal aapko mandir nhi toh jana h na ...

rk:maa SAYING THIS SHE STARTED CRYING HUGGING HER...

VB ASKES HER THE REASON TO WHICH SHE ANSWERS AND TELLS HERABOUT HER LOVE TO OTHER GUY AND HER REASON TO AGREE FOR THIS MARRIAGE...

rk:chotimaa hume abhi unse yeh sab kehna honga kadachit ve hume samjhe...

vb:rukiye ratan humari baat suniye aap ...aap unhe kya kahengi agar v maan bhi gaye phir kya karengi aap . aapko yeh vivah karna hi honga ar agar aapne unse sab keh diya phir ve tut jayenge nhi dekh sakte ve aapko kisi aur k saath. uchit yhi honga ki aap kisi se kuchh na kahe..iss baat ko yhi samapt kijiye..

vb: vaise unka naam kya h..

rk:unka naam voh..SUDDENLY DASI CALLED FOR VB AND SHELEFT WITHOUT KNOWING THAT RATANS LOVE IS NONE OTHER THAN SHAKTI..

rk: maa ne thik kha hum unhe kuchh na kahe wahi thik honga...

part:::::14

ALL WAS PREPARED AND READY FOR DEPARTURE

jb:ratan sambhal k jaiyenga aur apn khyal rakhiyen ga thik h ..

rk:ji ranimaa hum apna khyal rakhenga...

aj:ratan rukiye aap akele nhi jayengi aapke saath kunwar shakti jayenge.

rk:kyaa par jija ve humare aaath kyun...

aj:nhi ratan hume kuchh nhi aun na maa kahiye na inhe kuchh..

jb: le jaiye na ratan unhe nhi waise nhi unhone bhi darshan nhi kiye h ...

ks:hum taiyaar h chale ratan kanwar...

rk:SHE SPOKE NOTHING SIMPLY TOOK BLESSINGS AND SAT IN PALKI...

THEY STARTED THEIR JOURNEY...

ks:(ab aap dekhiyega hum apke saath kya karenge hum apko dadabhai k jeevan me nhi rehne denge .aapne humare saath chall kiya h chaall ab apko iska dand toh awashya hi milenga hum apko nhi chodenge .aapne humara prwm dekha h ab aap hmari grihna dekhenge grihna.)

PRECAP::WHERE WILL THS JOURNEY LEAD AND WHER WILL IT END NO ONE KNOWS..

GUYS PLS SUGGEST THE FURTHER TRACK I WANT ALL SUGGESTIONS ON THIS TRACT OF SHAKTI AND RATAN...

PLS HIT LIKE AND DO COMMENT...

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coderlady

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Poor Ratan. She is so stuck in the middle.

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shambhavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

SORRY GUYS FOR LATE UPDATE ...

ALL THE STORY WRITTER I WANT TO TELL U THAT ALL ARE WRITTING AMAZING AS I HAD PROBLEM BUT I READ ALL THE STORIES AND THEY ARE JUST SUPERB ...PLS KEEP IT LIKE THIS ...

PART::::15

AS RATAN WAS GOING TO TEMPLE THE PREPARATIONS WERE ON FULL SWING...

kb:hum aakhir kyaa karein jis se yeh vivah ho hi naa.par karen to kyaa.haa ek yukti h .

bas ab hum wahi karenge wahi uchitt honga .hume kisi bhi haal me ratan se humare parivaar ko bachaana hi h ...bhale hi iske liye use peedha ho.

vb:kyaa soch rhe h aap ks?

ks:kuchh nhi choti maa kuchh nhi woh kal ratan baisa mandir jaa rhi h na issliye.

vb:aap so jaiye kal ki rasam me aapko bohot karya karna h aapko.

ks:haaa maa kal hume bohot hi mahatwapurna karya karna h.

IN MORNING...

aj:ratna saari taiyaari ho gyi h na.

rk:are jija aap yaha aapko toh vishram karna chahiye jaiye aap vishram kijiye hum saari taiyaari dekh lege..

aj:accha hum jaate h apna khyal rakhiyenga...

rk:thik h jija...

RATAN HEADED TOWARDS TEMPLE AND REACHED THERE IN A SHORT TIME.

SHE DID PUJA THERE AND THEN WENT TO THE SAROVAR FOR SNAN.

pandit:putri ab yha snan krke aap jo mange gi woh iccha aapki purna ho jayengi jao putri jaakar snan karlo.

rk:ji panditji...aagya dijiye.

SHE ENTERED INTO THE WATER AND CHANTED THE MANTRAS SUDDENLY SOMEONE ENTERED INTO THE WATER.

HE STRETCHED HER INTO THE WATER AND HOLDED HER FORCIBLLY.

HE WAS NONE OTHER THAN SALIM...

SHE TRIED TO FREED HERSELF BUT HE HIT HER ON HER HAND AND BLOOD CAME OUT FROM THERE.

HE TOOK OUT FROM THE WATER AND TOOK HER UNDER A TREE

rk:yeh kyaa kar rhe h aap ?aap h kaun aur hume yaha kyun lekar aaye he aap?

ss:hum salim h Shehzaade Salim.aur hum aapko yaha se...

AS HE MOVED BACK SHE HIT HIM WITH STONE AND RAN AWAY FROM THERE .SHE SOME SOMEHOW REACHED TO THE CHAKRAWATI PLACE.

chakri:kyaaa ratan baisa aap par uss mughal ne aakraman kiya,iski suchna toh hume baujiraaj ko deni hongi.

rk:nhi bhaisa aisa mat kijiye abhi be jija ke saath h aur hum nhi chahte ki humare karan ve unse dur rhe kripya karke kisise kichh kehne ki awashyakta nhi h..

subbho:thik h ratan par yeh choth bohot gehri h..kyaa yeh aap ab bhi yeh vivah karengi .aapki haalat aisi nhi h ki aap vivah kar sake ratan aap sun rhi h.ratan ratan yeh toh achet ho gyi h ab hum kyaa karein.

chakri:hum choti ranisa ko bulate h wahi kuchh karengi ab.hum abhi aate h.

subbho:ji thik h .

AT PALACE...

ks:kyaa aap logo ne kuchh nhi kiya kyun?kyaa ho gaya h aapko?

sainik:woh kunwarsa waha par baisa thi hi nhi .

ks:kyaaa ve waha nhi thi .thik h jaiye ?

aakhir gyi kaha ve?

CHAKRI CALLED VEER BAI AND THEY HEADED TOWARDS CHAKRAWATI HOUSE...

vb:chakrapani kaha h ve .ve thik toh h na.

chakri:ranisa ve thik h aap bas aakar dekhiye inhe

vb:kisne kiya h yeh sab...humne pucha yeh kaise hua.

CHAKRI NARRATED WHOLE STORY ..

vb:kyaa salim ne parantu kyu ratan se unki kyaa shatruta h .

woh hum batate h aapko.VOICE CAME FROM BEHIND SHE WAS RATAN'S FRIEND::RAGINI.

RG:woh ranisa ratan ko ve chittod ke bahar hi mile the .pta nhi tabse hi ve inhe prapt karna chahte h .ratan ne toh inse yudh bhi kiya tha phir bhi ve yaha unhe lene hi aaye honge...

vb:hey bhagwan yeh sab hume ranaji ko batana honga.

subbho:nhi ranisa ratan ne mana kiya h unhe vachan diya h humne ki yeh baat hum gupt rkhe.

vb:hume batana hi honga unhe .kadachit salim udaipur pe aakraman karne aaye ho.

rk:aah aah are choti ranisa aap yaha kaise?

vb:woh sab chodhiye aap abhi vishram kijiye .phir hum mahal laut jayenge.

subbho:ranisaa apke liye kuchh laye?

vb:nhi nhi kuchh nhi.

HERE IN MAHAL...

us:kyaa charapani yeh aap kyaa keh rhe h salim yaha par.ratan kanwar kaisi h thik toh h na ve?

chakri:haa ve abhi achet h par thik h .ranaji yeh baat aap baujiraaj se mat kijiyenga.

us:kyun ?chakrapani aap humse kuchh chipa rhe h .

CHAKRI NARRATES WHOLE INCIDENT AND TELLS HIM ABOUT RATAN'S PROMISE...