wow read the last 2 parts now .. LOVED it..
you have a lot of strength in writing but according to me the main thing is you end each of your updates in such a manner that I am forced to refresh so very often to see what happens next :-)
for me the key highlight was
was her ogling a sleeping R&B , him begging for a minute .. why do they even need to get married they are so behaving like one already
While i am reading i feel like telling so many things then when i type to comment i only land up saying its awesome , loved it ,when is your next like an oft repeated broken record
what did you do to me ..