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Posted: 7 years ago

What started as a prank is now over 50 chapters long... LOL

THANK YOU COLUMBIA!! Embarrassed

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449

Hopefully shouldn't need a topic 3 Wink

Thanks to the 10-20 regulars that read it three thousand times each LOL

The THOUSANDS that read it multiple times Embarrassed

64,000 hits for 50 odd chapters... in TWO WEEKS Big smile

ASTOUNDING RESPONSE

Couldn't be happier Clap

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He is Raman Bhalla, fondly referred to by his family as R&B ...is a 6'3"... 30 year old... Paris based, single... wealthy Punjabi venture capitalist, he's a co investor/partner in a French company called Argent Graines which translates to Silver Seeds Big smile

He returns to India... reluctantly... to manage his Dad's biz, a chain of automobile dealerships across North India called Excelsior Automobiles... for M company cars He abandoned the family over a scandal that rocked it three years ago. To say he doesn't like his Dad would be an understatement.

She is Ishita Iyer a 27 year old... 5'9" IIM MBA & CPA ,single... Delhi based Iyer, daughter of a bureaucrat...she is a Public Accountant and SW Mgr with KMPG Inc. signs off her emails with a "II"

Her company will install and support a transaction processing SW in Excelsior Big smile

BTW she has a broken heart also Embarrassed

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How they meet and fall in love is the story of R&B and II Big smile

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I have NO experience in the IT/IS industry, Accounting? yes... so this is all just a figment of imagination... I am sorry if its factually incorrect

After all, its just a story Wink

I AM TOLD Its all of the following Embarrassed

Brilliant, funny, Intelligent, Urban, Classy, Racy, Witty, Crisp, sexy Big smile

...Any other adjectives it makes you conjure up would be a sheer windfall to me Blushing

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Key Compliments that feed/fed my frenzy LOL

Modernfamily:

That was mind blowing. BRILLIANT. Don't know how I missed it. Read it in a row and fell in love with this beautiful beautiful story. Your writing is so tight and crisp and all the emotions are so palpable. You're brilliant and funny. Although there is no similarity, but I felt like I'm reading Arundhati Roy's novel. Keep writing and do let me know if there are other stories that you've written on this forum and I've been blind enough to miss them.

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Ranu1234

Aaw davara/tumbler + filter coffee , R&B does take in the best of the iyer culture..Starbucks may come and go but drinking filter coffee using the steel containers beats everything .. I have to start my day like that..
Waiting for the next update now..lady i am positive you need to write a book, Chetan Bhagat started this way and his language or ideas are no different from yours :-)..this story could actually very well translate into a book , think about it

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~Payal~ (Sample Review on Page 45)

1) You're a brilliant writer.

2) I'm obsessed with this story.

3) I'm in love with R&B.

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Rom Com Fan

This FF is like a ready heady red velvet cupcake.. the supercalorific ones that you can't stay away from but you just can't resist licking every crumble off your fingertips. You are way too good at this Nisha...I bow to your mastery! Clap

Also, how much do I love the convos in the Iyer house, especially II's thoughts about Srikanth and the reasons Vandhu is recommending him- it is so reflective of some conversations I've had with my family on the topic of marriage, I can't get over how realistic it is. So well done!

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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR READING

Warning: Not proof read, not spell checked... either Cry

In my defense I will say impossible task... at the frequency at which I update Big smile

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Part 2 Page 4

Part 3 His and Her Past Page 6

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449&PID=117700326&#p117700326

Part 4 Burberry in Blue and pink Kalamkari Page 8

Part 5 Satan in Blue jeans and white shirt on 9

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449&PID=117706544&#p117706544

Part 6 Rakshasan & Roman Numeral on 11

Part 7 Google on 13

Part 8 Blood Pressure & Coconut Fiber on 17

Part 9 Holes in Swiss Cheese and Rs 5 on Page 19

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449&TPN=19&#p117737495

Part 10 Brushing routine and Meenalochani on 25

Part 11 Upside down at Paati's House and Stolen Art on 28

Part 12 Notes to All Page 31

Part 13 Sugar Bin & Night vision on 37

Part 14 Loan Shark & Cab on 39

Part 15 Iyer Warriors on 42

Part 16 Menopause & Penang on 43

Part 17 Abilene Paradox & Appa's text on 47

Part 18 Star Wars & Samyukta on 49? God knows what... cant keep track now

Part 19 Mahipalpur & Backless Choli on 51

Part 20 100 crores & 45 minutes on 54

Part 21 Nose rings & Umbrellas on 57

Part 22 Abhang & Serpent on Page 61

Part 23 Srikanth & "Even" on 63

Part 24 Renegade & Cerebral Exam on 65

Part 25 Google Translator & Andamans on 69?

Part 26 NGO & Geometry lessons on 75

Part 27 Arsenic & Musical Chairs on 78

Part 28 Brooksea Chameleon & Working From Home on 80

Part 29 Radha Krishna & Plant Species on 82

Part 30 Just "sex" & Strategy on 85

Part 31 List of Complaints & Imagination Horses on 86

Part 32 Basketball matches & Making Babies on 87

Part 33 No Porsche YAYYY! & Homicide on 89

Part 34 Color Coordination & Rhythm on 90

Part 35 Time Allotment & Vampires on 91

Part 36 Akka's Crush & Grated Coconut on 94

Part 37 Water Color & Grammar on 97

Part 38 Kolaveri & Gillette on 102

Part 39 Haldi & French on 106

Part 40 Sherlock Holmes & Color Science on 110

Part 41 Definition of Scope Creep & Various Uses of Razor on 111

Part 42 Cleaning lady & Agri Business on 11

Part 43 Countless & Counting on 115

Part 44 R&B-ly and French Lessons on 118

Part 45 A "Suitable Boy" & Fire Cracker on 121

Part 46: Lists & Books on 125

Part 47 NOTHING from NOBODY and Minion on 127

Part 48 Mini Onions & Kollywood rain fight scene on 131

Part 49 Forfeits & Proposals on 133

Part 50 Revelation & Recipes on 136

Part 51 Sixth Sense & Sea Weed Green on 138

Part 52 Acrobatics & Math Hegemony on 141

Part 53 Earrings & Eight plus eight on 143

Part 54 Differences & Dimes on on 144

Part 55 Silk pouches & Horned Helmets on 147

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Topic 2

Part 56 #Rakshasan on Page 1

Part 57 Matches & Victors on Page 4

Part 58 Sisterhood on Page 9

Part 59: Earned vs. Entitled on Page 10

Part 60: Christmas Tree & Hazelnut Creamer on 14

Part 61 Peace & PMS on 15

Part 62 Speechless Symphonies on 17

Part 63 Clean Lizard and Joint Account on 20

Part 64 MMS to iPad on 21

Part 65 Aloo Matar & IT WORKS on 27

Part 66 Choices & Clues on 30

Part 67 Cinthol & Confession on 33

Part 68 Lesbian Saas Bahu & Amma Fixation on 36

Part 69 "Who Srikanth?" & Barista on 40

Part 70 Ethics & Invitations on 43

Part 71 Mission to Mars & Vera Wang on 46

Part 72: For now and for EVER on 50

Part 73 Broken=Violently separated into pieces on 55

Part 74 HIPAA at work on 57

Part 75 Monomyobacterium on 58

Part 76 "Wrong number" and Nuclear Device on 61

Part 77 Srreekanth's Proposal & II's artillery on 63

Part 78 Three weeks & Nerf Gun on 65

Part 79 A Girl for R&B on 68

Part 80 So many-everythings and Cat Woman on 71

Part 81 Alors et maintenant on 75 (Then and Now)

Part 82 Insuring Life ... and Love on 77

Part 83 Of Knowing & Learning on 83

Part 84 Search & Spy on 86

Part 85 Story on 91

Part 86 (K)night in J Crew & Ceasefire on 93

Part 87 Acts of Felony & Protection on 95

Part 88 114 & 100 on 103

Part 89 Kalyanam & Khalnayak on 107

Part 90 Letting go on 110

Part 91 Stork, Scheme & Smuggle on 114

Part 92 Rottenness of the Rascal on 116

Part 93 Sorority & Call of Duty on 119

Part 94 Portability of Teekas & Notes on 121

Part 95 Etiquette Hell & Citrine on 125

Part 96 Nomadic & Iyer Pride on 128

Part 97 Combustion & Obsession on 133

Part 98 Loss & Light Bulb on 136

Part 99 Getting over "Self" on 139

Part 100 Bath Allergies & High Jinks on 141

Part 101 Scalene Triangle and Twirling on 143

Part 102 "Lasya Iyer" on 144

Part 103 Munirka Mutiny or AKA Stranger anxiety & Bournvita on 148

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Nisha0604 IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 7 years ago

# Rakshasan

"You sent the recipe book HOME?" she demanded furious Angry

"Did u want me to bring it?" he asked ROFL

NO!!!!!!!!!! WHY WOULD I WANT THAT?" she shrieked Cry

"This is between US.. you broke a cardinal rule of this war" II threatened Big smile

US? II? US? OH! SO THERE IS A US NOW?

VERY GOOD... Rakshasan has caused an US? Big smile

Niiice

"So I decided your sister might like to know her brother moonlights as a loan shark" ROFL

she said agonized, as he was a foot away

In gun metal color cargos and a offwhite BR tee... AND BARE FEET...

"U dont mess with an Accountant and get away that easy" she smiled Clap

"No you dont" he said sincerely.. Big smile

His eyes travelled from her stormy eyes to her flushed face to the bobbing jhumkas to the long braid, to her flowing pallu...

"Now SHE KNOWS" II said tooting her victory horn... Clap

You dressed up to pay off a debt?" he asked softly ROFL

"Oh! no.. I decided to pay off a debt on my way home from a date" Evil Smile

THERE!! ANOTHER BLOW.. JUST FOR YOU RAKSHASAN!

I AM SO ISHMART Big smile

DADDI... IDIOT Cry

"Hes waiting in the car, if I dont go out at 10:30 he will come in" Big smile

HE LOOKED AT HIS WATCH... HE REALLY DID LOOK AT HIS WATCH

"Oh! so we have 38 minutes then?" and he closed the gap Embarrassed

I just had hot chocolate" she whispered

"What KIND?" he muttered bending down Embarrassed

She flung her pallu over her shoulder to free her arm... it flew like a silk umbrella unfurling over both their heads...

and slowly like a parachute... floating down over their heads... the red tassled edges dancing to the rhythm of her struggle

They kissed underneath a silk umbrella Embarrassed

He bent down and just kissed her...the NOW familiar rasp... like he stopped shaving, so he could give her a beard burn whenever she showed... at home or at work or at Sam's

Her moan indicated it bruised her... his grunt indicated

"Get over it" "NO I am not shaving" "You KNOW how this feels" Big smile

Not a "thanks for coming" "its great to see you" "U look great BTW" "I am happy to see you kiss"

A hungry, needy... possessive "How dare you go out dressed like this without ME?" Embarrassed

"How dare you show up AFTER the evening is over" "How dare you looked like this all evening and I ONLY GET TO SEE U AT 10 PM" Evil Smile

...kiss

he tasted like liqor... she wished she knew more about the kind... bitter and sexy... JUST LIKE HE WAS BEING TODAY Cry

She moaned as she felt his tongue on hers... gently at first... almost as if he forgot he was mad at her, she struggled to hold

him left hand lost in the folds of her pallu... his face all over shoulder, collar bone, neck and jaw

His arms went around her back and yanked the cord off her blouse... as he let go of her mouth to go to her nose ring

"THANK YOU FOR WEARING THAT, BUT TOO BAD I WILL HAVE TO PUNISH YOU FOR NOT GETTING HERE SOONER?"

She leaned back on the wall taking his hands with her

Her saree slowly began to loosen as her blouse began to relax... a gold restraint of a pin holding it on the shoulder, slid and fell off on the Italian marble

She yanked her pallu off their heads to find his hair all tousled... and his eyes purposeful

She pushed his arms down from her back... loosening her saree some more...

"Too bad... u shud get ur own date" she hissed

"I do have one" he said

And in that one moment her world stopped... like she woke one morning to find her parents dont recognize her, or she went to her CPA licensing exam and found Engineering question papers Shocked

Or.. ermm... the man she wanted... didnt belong to her... Cry

II HE WAS AT HIS SISTER'S HOUSE WITH HIS DATE... WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? THE MOMENT YOU PICKED THE SAREE YOU HOPED HE WOULD SEE YOU IN IT, THE MOMENT YOU WORE THE Ruby NOSE RING YOU HOPED HE WOULD KISS IT

YOU WANTED HIM TO SEE YOU IN THE BACKLESS BLOUSE... ENOUGH THAT YOU IMAGINED HE WAS WATCHING WHEN YOU WERE GETTING READY Blushing

He is a Rakshasan... OMG... Cry

A huge sock like lump in her throat forced tears into her eyes... she held it back

Shes probably eating or sleeping right now" he said slowly

I DID NOT WANT TO KNOW THAT... she reached for the cords... with both arms going to her back...

He leaned, pinning her to the wall and nipped her ear

"Her name's Lasya BTW" he said... Big smile

A glorious rage rippled through her...just as he pinned her hands behind her back... to see her fully...

JUST KILL THE SMUG bas***d II... JUST DO IT DI

YOUR MISERY WILL BE OVER ALL AT ONCE

YOU WOULD DIE TOO... Embarrassed

BUT THE FEW MOMENTS OF PEACE AFTER THE JOB'S DONE WILL BE SO FRICKING WORTH IT

Rakshasan is a compliment for him ROFL

They kissed again... this time as aggressively as before... he let go of her hands and found them under the curling edges of the tee

Quickly yanking the tee off...

THERE ITS ALL YOURS look LOL

She turned the color of her border

They still stood by the wall... her trembling and quivering form held with his not so confident form... Embarrassed

"Do u have a name for me?" he asked on her shoulder Clap

THERE!!!

NO" she said... startled Confused

I bet u do" he said.. Cry

No... WHY WOULD I? " she LIED GLIBLY Big smile

He held her chin... and looked into her eyes...

"You curse when I mess with u" he muttered a half smile came and went

Nahi! I just have names for people I am close to... NOT" she stopped

NOT YOU DA, WHY WOULD I HAVE A NAME FOR YOU... NONE... NO NAME

YOU DONT DESERVE ONE.. I THINK ABOUT U EVERY WAKING MINUTE BUT HAVENT NAMED YOU

EVERYONE ELSE IN MY LIFE HAS A NAME NOT YOU... GRRR... RAKSHASAN! Angry

"Not people u kiss?" he asked sniggering Big smile

Her sleeve was an inch down her shoulder now... his other hand on her back... carressing as she squirmed holding back from leaning forward on his nude upper body

TRYING TO NOT EVEN LOOK THANKS SO MUCH AYYO

YOU ASKE ME QUESTION WHEN U ARE HALF NAKED

JERK!

AND U HOLD MY CHIN...

I REFUSE TO LOOK AT YOU OR TOUCH YOU

GO BACK TO LASYA YOU PIG

I name them only if I like the kisses" she said smiling sweeetly Big smile

He bent down "Tell me how this one is" he said Embarrassed

The most pleasurable arousing mind numbing... teaser kiss she ever got from the man...

She pushed with both hands on his bare chest... to lean back on the wall panting... shaking like a leaf...

"Mmm... mmm" CANT THINK OF ANY... Embarrassed

CORRECT II HOLD GROUND

Nee genius... SHOW HIM Clap

.. he doesnt affect you... he will let u go home, I mean he will even take u home... so so chivalrous and kind he is ROFL

"THIS should help" he said... reaching down and unhooking her strap...at the back...Causing a physical pandemonium in her upper region... she looked at him like he had caused a nuclear holocaust Blushing

The taunting, mocking.. teasing R&B was back... his eyes danced over her face...

She struggled to keep things in place as she pressed herself against the wall

He bent down picked her up and went off to the couch

Her pallu trailed like a silk train...and draped on the floor as if saying "Welcome... pathway to heaven" Blushing

Later...

"I cant drape it without a mirror" she mumbled huskily... Blushing

He lay on the couch... face down... his left hand on the floor.. gazing at her gathering the folds of the saree waist up...

Her hair a mess, the careful locks behind her ears now strewn all over her face... like rose petals after a wind storm

The pleats bunched up and knotted at the waist after her struggles

Her skirt all crooked and sliding

COMPLETELY NUDE... WAIST UP...her saree wrapped untidily like a blanket... like she would go to the living room like that on cold wintry mornings ... read the paper under it... drink her filter coffee under it

Complain under it

NOW... the instigator lay there smugly...her clothing was missing... and she was sore and achy and ...errrm... FULLER... and moist... all over.. AND NAKED UNDERNEATH Embarrassed

"Theres one", he said pointing to a far wall like she asked a stranegr for a frickin PAY PHONE Cry

... his eyes still dancing.. watching her struggle to locate her blouse

"Move" she pushed him, leaning over the sofa

Sure he said.. laying back as she peered over him

Just with a lil stroke displacing her wrist as it held the back rest... causing her to land on him again...

She punched him whereever she could, between the haze of black silky hair covering her eyes and holding on to the crushed silk of the saree

He moved under her slowly... Embarrassed

VIDU DA LEAVE ME ALONE... AYYO... she yelped as she felt teeth somewhere in her chest area...

Fiend!... You are a pig!!

Well it wasnt on the couch... he was right... ROFL

It was BEHIND it...

It took her a good 15 minutes to dress up again... her desire from earlier in the evening came true... Embarrassed

he lay there watching as she wore her saree.. no no dori tying help no hooking strap help was offered Big smile

HE WAS A RAKSHASAN... so she knows... Blushing

Sam saved her some serious embarrassment by NOT showing

He walked her to her car... it was now sandwiched between a SUV and a Merc,

He took her keys and skilfully got it out, left the engine on, turned the heat up... defogger... and shut the door for her Embarrassed

She didnt thank him ofcourse

He walked back in... searching on Google...typed

"Tamil word for devil"

RAKSHASAN it said

He let out a half smile... walking in.. "Oh so that's what she chanted" Embarrassed

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swatib.123 Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

r u going to update nisha?? Big smile

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deepali.rock IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

nish just want to let you know reading from start again.. since morning..

reached chap 38

only took break to eat

not touched my lapppy or TV remote since morning..that's how I m addicted..

even canceled my parlor visit..and mom is super annoyed at me for that

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