Software Symphony-Munirka Mutiny on 148

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Posted: 7 years ago
What started as a prank is now over 50 chapters long...LOL
THANK YOU COLUMBIA!!Embarrassed...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449


Hopefully shouldn't need a topic 3Wink

Thanks to the 10-20 regulars that read it  three thousand times eachLOL

OR 

The THOUSANDS that read it multiple timesEmbarrassed

64,000 hits for 50 odd chapters... in TWO WEEKSBig smile

ASTOUNDING RESPONSE
Couldn't be happierClap

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He is Raman Bhalla, fondly referred to by his family as R&B ...is a 6'3"... 30 year old... Paris based, single... wealthy Punjabi venture capitalist, he's a co investor/partner in a French company called Argent Graines which translates to Silver Seeds  Big smile
 
He returns to India... reluctantly... to manage his Dad's biz, a chain of automobile dealerships across North India called Excelsior Automobiles... for  M company cars  He abandoned the family over a scandal that rocked it three years ago.  To say he doesn't like his Dad would be an understatement.

She is Ishita Iyer a 27 year old...  5'9" IIM MBA & CPA ,single... Delhi based Iyer,  daughter of a bureaucrat...she is a Public Accountant and SW Mgr with KMPG Inc. signs off her emails with a "II"
Her company will install and support a transaction processing SW in ExcelsiorBig smile 
BTW she has  a broken heart alsoEmbarrassed...

How they meet and fall in love is the story of R&B and IIBig smile
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I have NO experience in the IT/IS industry, Accounting? yes... so this is all just a figment of imagination... I am sorry if its factually incorrect
After all, its just a storyWink
I AM TOLD Its all of the followingEmbarrassed
Brilliant, funny, Intelligent, Urban, Classy, Racy, Witty, Crisp, sexyBig smile...Any other adjectives it makes you conjure up would be a  sheer windfall to meBlushing
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Key Compliments that feed/fed my frenzyLOL
Modernfamily:

That was mind blowing. BRILLIANT. Don't know how I missed it. Read it in a row and fell in love with this beautiful beautiful story. Your writing is so tight and crisp and all the emotions are so palpable. You're brilliant and funny. Although there is no similarity, but I felt like I'm reading Arundhati Roy's novel. Keep writing and do let me know if there are other stories that you've written on this forum and I've been blind enough to miss them.
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Ranu1234
Aaw davara/tumbler + filter coffee , R&B does take in  the best of the iyer culture..Starbucks may come and go but drinking filter coffee using the steel containers beats everything .. I have to start my day like that..
Waiting for the next update now..lady i am positive you need to  write a book, Chetan Bhagat started this way and his language or ideas are no different from yours :-)..this story could actually very well translate into a book , think about it
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~Payal~ (Sample Review on Page 45)

1) You're a brilliant writer.
2) I'm obsessed with this story.
3) I'm in love with R&B.

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Rom Com Fan

This FF is like a  ready heady red velvet cupcake.. the supercalorific ones that you can't stay away from but you just can't resist licking every crumble off  your fingertips.  You are way too good at this Nisha...I bow to your mastery!ClapClap

Also,  how much do I love the convos in the Iyer house, especially II's thoughts about  Srikanth and the reasons Vandhu is recommending him- it is so reflective of some conversations I've had with my family on the topic of marriage, I can't get over how realistic it is.    So well done!


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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR READING

Warning: Not proof read, not spell checked... either Cry In my defense I will say impossible task... at the frequency at which I update Big smile
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Part 2 Page 4

Part 3 His and Her Past Page 6
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449&PID=117700326&#p117700326

Part 4 Burberry in Blue and pink Kalamkari  Page 8

Part 5  Satan in Blue jeans and white shirt on 9
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449&PID=117706544&#p117706544

Part 6 Rakshasan & Roman Numeral on 11
 
Part 7 Google on 13

Part 8 Blood Pressure & Coconut Fiber on 17

Part 9 Holes in Swiss Cheese and Rs 5 on Page 19
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4265449&TPN=19&#p117737495

Part 10 Brushing routine and Meenalochani on 25

Part 11 Upside down at Paati's House and Stolen Art on 28

Part 12 Notes to All Page 31

Part 13 Sugar Bin & Night vision on 37


Part 14 Loan Shark & Cab on 39

Part 15 Iyer Warriors on 42

Part 16 Menopause & Penang on 43
Part 17 Abilene Paradox & Appa's text on 47
Part 18 Star Wars & Samyukta on 49? God knows what... cant keep track nowLOL

Part 19 Mahipalpur & Backless Choli on 51

Part 20 100 crores & 45 minutes on 54Wink
Part 21 Nose rings & Umbrellas on 57
Part 22 Abhang & Serpent on Page 61
Part 23 Srikanth & "Even" on 63Blushing
Part 24 Renegade & Cerebral Exam on 65
Part 25 Google Translator & Andamans on 69?
Part 26 NGO & Geometry lessons on 75
Part 27 Arsenic & Musical Chairs on 78
Part 28 Brooksea Chameleon & Working From Home on 80

Part 29 Radha Krishna & Plant Species on 82
Part 30  Just "sex" & Strategy on 85
Part 31 List of Complaints & Imagination Horses on 86
Part 32 Basketball matches & Making Babies on 87
Part 33 No Porsche YAYYY! & Homicide on 89
Part 34 Color Coordination & Rhythm on 90
Part 35 Time Allotment & Vampires on 91
Part 36 Akka's Crush & Grated Coconut on 94
Part 37 Water Color & Grammar on 97
Part 38 Kolaveri & Gillette on 102
Part 39 Haldi & French on 106
Part 40 Sherlock Holmes & Color Science on 110
Part 41 Definition of Scope Creep & Various Uses of Razor on 111ROFL
Part 42 Cleaning lady & Agri Business on 11
Part 43 Countless & Counting on 115
Part 44 R&B-ly and French Lessons on 118
Part 45 A "Suitable Boy" & Fire Cracker on 121
Part 46: Lists & Books on 125
Part 47 NOTHING from NOBODY  and Minion on 127
Part 48 Mini Onions & Kollywood rain fight scene on 131
Part 49 Forfeits & Proposals on 133
Part 50 Revelation & Recipes on 136
Part 51 Sixth Sense & Sea Weed Green on 138
Part 52 Acrobatics & Math Hegemony on 141
Part 53 Earrings & Eight plus eight  on 143
Part 54 Differences & Dimes on on 144
Part 55 Silk pouches & Horned Helmets on 147

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Topic 2

Part 56 #Rakshasan on Page 1
Part 57 Matches & Victors on Page 4
Part 58 Sisterhood on Page 9
Part 59: Earned vs. Entitled on Page 10
Part 60: Christmas Tree & Hazelnut Creamer on 14
Part 61 Peace & PMSROFL on 15
Part 62 Speechless Symphonies on 17
Part 63 Clean Lizard and Joint Account on 20
Part 64 MMS to iPad on 21
Part 65 Aloo Matar & IT WORKSWink on 27
Part 66 Choices & Clues on 30Cry
Part 67 Cinthol & Confession on 33
Part 68 Lesbian Saas Bahu & Amma Fixation on 36ROFL
Part 69 "Who Srikanth?" & Barista on 40
Part 70 Ethics & Invitations on 43
Part 71 Mission to Mars & Vera Wang on 46
Part 72: For now and for EVER on 50
Part 73 Broken=Violently separated into pieces on 55Cry
Part 74 HIPAA at work on 57
Part 75 Monomyobacterium on 58
Part 76 "Wrong number" and Nuclear Device on 61
Part 77 Srreekanth's Proposal & II's artillery on 63
Part 78 Three weeks & Nerf Gun on 65
Part 79 A Girl for R&B on 68
Part 80 So many-everythings and Cat Woman on 71
Part 81 Alors et maintenant on 75 (Then and Now)
Part 82 Insuring Life ... and Love on 77Blushing
Part 83 Of Knowing & Learning on 83
Part 84 Search & Spy on 86
Part 85 Story on 91
Part 86 (K)night in J Crew & Ceasefire on 93Blushing
Part 87 Acts of Felony & Protection on 95
Part 88 114 & 100 on 103
Part 89 Kalyanam & Khalnayak on 107
Part 90 Letting goCry on 110
Part 91 Stork, Scheme & Smuggle on 114
Part 92 Rottenness of the Rascal on 116Evil Smile
Part 93 Sorority & Call of Duty on 119Blushing
Part 94 Portability of Teekas & Notes on 121Blushing
Part 95 Etiquette Hell & Citrine on 125
Part 96 Nomadic & Iyer Pride on 128AngryCensoredNuke
Part 97 Combustion & Obsession on 133CensoredBlushing
Part 98 Loss & Light Bulb on 136
Part 99 Getting over "Self" on 139
Part 100 Bath Allergies & High Jinks on 141
Part 101 Scalene Triangle and Twirling on 143
Part 102 "Lasya Iyer" on 144
Part 103 Munirka Mutiny or AKA Stranger anxiety & Bournvita on 148







Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
# Rakshasan

"You sent the recipe book HOME?" she demanded furiousAngry
"Did u want me to bring it?" he askedROFL
NO!!!!!!!!!! WHY WOULD I WANT THAT?" she shriekedCry
"This is between US.. you broke a cardinal rule of this war" II threatenedBig smileEmbarrassedCry

US? II? US? OH! SO THERE IS A US NOW?
VERY GOOD... Rakshasan has caused an US?Big smile
Niiice

"So I decided your sister might like to know her brother moonlights as a loan shark"ROFL she said agonized, as he was a foot away

In gun metal color cargos and a offwhite BR tee... AND BARE FEET...
"U dont mess with an Accountant and get away that easy" she smiledClapEmbarrassed
"No you dont" he said sincerely..Big smile

His eyes travelled from her stormy eyes to her flushed face to the bobbing jhumkas to the long braid, to her flowing pallu...
"Now SHE KNOWS" II said tooting her victory horn...Clap

You dressed up to pay off a debt?" he asked softlyROFL
"Oh! no.. I decided to pay off a debt on my way home from a date"Evil Smile

THERE!! ANOTHER BLOW.. JUST FOR YOU RAKSHASAN!
I AM SO ISHMARTBig smile DADDI... IDIOTCry

"Hes waiting in the car, if I dont go out at 10:30 he will come in"Big smile

HE LOOKED AT HIS WATCH... HE REALLY DID LOOK AT HIS WATCH
"Oh! so we have 38 minutes then?"  and he closed the gapEmbarrassed

I just had hot chocolate" she whispered
"What KIND?" he muttered bending downEmbarrassed

She flung her pallu over her shoulder to free her arm... it flew like a silk umbrella unfurling over both their heads... 
and slowly like a parachute... floating down over their heads... the red tassled edges dancing to the rhythm of her struggle

They kissed underneath a silk umbrellaEmbarrassed

He bent down and just kissed her...the NOW familiar rasp... like he stopped shaving, so he could give her a beard burn whenever she showed... at home or at work or at Sam's
Her moan indicated it bruised her... his grunt indicated
"Get over it" "NO I am not shaving" "You KNOW how this feels"Big smile

 Not a "thanks for coming" "its great to see you" "U look great BTW" "I am happy to see you kiss"
A hungry, needy... possessive "How dare you go out dressed like this without ME?"Embarrassed
"How dare you show up AFTER the evening is over" "How dare you looked like this all evening and I ONLY GET TO SEE U AT 10 PM"Evil Smile
...kiss
he tasted like liqor... she wished she knew more about the kind... bitter and sexy... JUST LIKE HE WAS BEING TODAYCry


She moaned as she felt his tongue on hers... gently at first... almost as if he forgot he was mad at her, she struggled to hold 
him left hand lost in the folds of her pallu... his face all over shoulder, collar bone, neck and jaw


His arms went around her back and yanked the cord off her blouse... as he let go of her mouth to go to her nose ring

"THANK YOU FOR WEARING THAT, BUT TOO BAD I WILL HAVE TO PUNISH YOU FOR NOT GETTING HERE SOONER?"
She leaned back on the wall taking his hands with her

Her saree slowly began to loosen as her blouse began to relax... a gold restraint of a pin holding it on the shoulder, slid and fell off on the Italian marble
She yanked her pallu off their heads to find his hair all tousled... and his eyes purposeful
She pushed his arms down from her back... loosening her saree some more...

"Too bad... u shud get ur own date" she hissed
"I do have one" he said
And in that one moment her  world stopped... like she woke one morning to find her parents dont recognize her, or she went to her CPA licensing exam and found Engineering question papersShockedCry
Or.. ermm... the man she wanted... didnt belong to her...CryShocked

II HE WAS AT HIS SISTER'S HOUSE WITH HIS DATE... WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? THE MOMENT YOU PICKED THE SAREE YOU HOPED HE WOULD SEE YOU IN IT, THE MOMENT YOU WORE THE Ruby NOSE RING YOU HOPED HE WOULD KISS IT
YOU WANTED HIM TO SEE YOU IN THE BACKLESS BLOUSE... ENOUGH THAT YOU IMAGINED HE WAS WATCHING WHEN YOU WERE GETTING READYBlushing
He is a Rakshasan... OMG...CryCry

A huge sock like lump in her throat forced tears into her eyes... she held it back

Shes probably eating or sleeping right now" he said slowly
I DID NOT WANT TO KNOW THAT... she reached for the cords... with both arms going to her back...
He leaned, pinning her to the wall and nipped her ear
"Her name's Lasya BTW" he said...Big smile

A glorious rage rippled through her...just as he pinned her hands behind her back... to see her fully... 

JUST KILL THE SMUG bas***d II... JUST DO IT DI
YOUR MISERY WILL BE OVER ALL AT ONCE
YOU WOULD DIE TOO...Embarrassed BUT THE FEW MOMENTS OF PEACE AFTER THE JOB'S DONE WILL BE SO FRICKING WORTH IT
Rakshasan is a compliment for himROFL


They kissed again... this time as aggressively as before... he let go of her hands and found them under the curling edges of the tee
Quickly yanking the tee off...
THERE ITS ALL YOURS lookLOL

She turned the color of her border

They still stood by the wall... her trembling and quivering form held with his not so confident form...Embarrassed

"Do u have a name for me?" he asked on her shoulderClap
THERE!!!Big smile

NO" she said... startledConfused

I bet u do" he said..Cry

No... WHY WOULD I? " she LIED GLIBLYBig smile
He held her chin... and looked into her eyes...
"You curse when I mess with u" he muttered a half smile came and went
Nahi! I just have names for people I am close to... NOT" she stopped

NOT YOU DA, WHY WOULD I HAVE A NAME FOR YOU... NONE... NO NAME
YOU DONT DESERVE ONE.. I THINK ABOUT U EVERY WAKING MINUTE BUT HAVENT NAMED YOU
EVERYONE ELSE IN MY LIFE HAS A NAME NOT YOU... GRRR... RAKSHASAN!Angry

"Not people u kiss?" he asked sniggeringBig smile

Her sleeve was an inch down her shoulder now... his other hand on her back... carressing as she squirmed holding back from leaning forward on his nude upper body
TRYING TO NOT EVEN LOOK THANKS SO MUCH AYYO
YOU ASKE ME QUESTION WHEN U ARE HALF NAKED
JERK!
AND U HOLD MY CHIN...
I REFUSE TO LOOK AT YOU OR TOUCH YOU
GO BACK TO LASYA YOU PIG

I name them only if I like the kisses" she said smiling sweeetlyBig smile

He bent down "Tell me how this one is" he saidEmbarrassed

The most pleasurable arousing mind numbing... teaser kiss she ever got from the man...

She pushed with both hands on his bare chest... to lean back on the wall panting... shaking like a leaf...

"Mmm... mmm" CANT THINK OF ANY...Embarrassed
CORRECT II HOLD GROUND
Nee genius... SHOW HIMClap.. he doesnt affect you... he will let u go home, I mean he will even take u home... so so chivalrous and kind he isROFL

"THIS should help" he said... reaching down and  unhooking her strap...at the back...Causing a physical pandemonium in her upper region... she looked at him like he had caused a nuclear holocaustBlushingEmbarrassed

The taunting, mocking.. teasing R&B was back... his eyes danced over her face...

She struggled to keep things in place as she pressed herself against the wall
He bent down picked her up and went off to the couch

Her pallu trailed like a silk train...and draped on the floor as if saying "Welcome... pathway to heaven"Blushing

Later...
"I cant drape it without a mirror" she mumbled huskily...Blushing
He lay on the couch... face down... his left hand on the floor.. gazing at her gathering the folds of the saree waist up...
Her hair a mess, the careful locks behind her ears now strewn all over her face... like rose petals after a wind storm
The pleats bunched up and knotted at the waist after her struggles
Her skirt all crooked and sliding

COMPLETELY NUDE... WAIST UP...her saree wrapped untidily like a blanket... like she would go to the living room like that on cold wintry mornings ... read the paper under it... drink her filter coffee under it
Complain under it

NOW... the instigator lay there smugly...her clothing was missing... and she was sore and achy and ...errrm... FULLER... and moist... all over.. AND NAKED UNDERNEATHEmbarrassedBlushing

"Theres one", he said pointing to a far wall like she asked a stranegr for a frickin PAY PHONECry... his eyes still dancing.. watching her struggle to locate her blouse

"Move" she pushed him, leaning over the sofa

Sure he said.. laying back as she peered over him

Just with a lil stroke displacing her wrist as it held the back rest... causing her to land on him again...

She punched him whereever she could, between the haze of black silky hair covering her eyes and holding on to the crushed silk of the saree

He moved under her slowly...Embarrassed
VIDU DA LEAVE ME ALONE... AYYO... she yelped as she felt teeth somewhere in her chest area...
Fiend!... You are a pig!!
Well it wasnt on the couch... he was right...ROFL
It was BEHIND it...

It took her a good 15 minutes to dress up again... her desire from earlier in the evening came true... Embarrassed
he lay there watching as she wore her saree.. no no dori tying help no hooking strap help was offeredBig smile
HE WAS A RAKSHASAN... so she knows...Blushing

Sam saved her some serious embarrassment by NOT showing
He walked her to her car... it was now sandwiched between a SUV and a Merc,
He took her keys and skilfully got it out, left the engine on, turned the heat up... defogger... and shut the door for herEmbarrassed
She didnt thank him ofcourse

He walked back in... searching on Google...typed


"Tamil word for devil"

RAKSHASAN it said
He let out a half smile... walking in.. "Oh so that's what she chanted"EmbarrassedBig smile


Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
r u going to update nisha??Big smileBig smile
Posted: 7 years ago
nish just want to let you know reading from start again.. since morning..

reached chap 38

only took break to eat

not touched my lapppy or TV remote since morning..that's how I m addicted..

even canceled my parlor visit..and mom is super annoyed at me for that
Posted: 7 years ago
r u going to update nisha??
plzzz update soon na 

WAITINGGGBig smile
Posted: 7 years ago
ayyy...Big smileLOL an update is coming up, isn't it..?
i'm waiting for a long time...
keep it comingLOL
Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats on the new thread!!
See now you are getting to be a math wiz  like II Big smile
now waiting for the update..
Edited by Ranu1234 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
YayBig smile I'm so happy for the success of this story.  Congratulations nisha. Where's our treat?Edited by modernfamily - 7 years ago

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