reminiscing ishra moments... raman helping ishu on pg 53 - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update and lovely song
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Posted: 9 years ago
wowww wowww!! i totally enjoyed reading this... part 2 a) and b) were just beautiful! those silly nothings and their continuous nok-jhoks.. lol. i was laughing ut while reading it... stil cant stop, Raman's dialouges were like Punch On types! :P ;)
and Dining table ka maza kuch alag tha.. that was even more interesting! kash serial mein aisa kuch ho jaata!

Ishita confessing first was brilliant! and their hug, kiss , bold talks and sleep tight together was perfect!

i loved the quote u added at the end! Beautiful!

do write more!! 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww... That was thoroughly adorable! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!  The second  part was worth the wait.

 Loved the sweetness- the shyness and understanding between them both was refreshing.

Really enjoyed your twist on this incident, thank you so much for sharing.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was beautiful, so simple and neat and yet so sensuous. Humour ka sahi chord pakada, all the dialogues, typical Ravan Kumar style! 😉 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow maanvir, that was too awesome. i seriously hav dont words on ths piece of writing. mujhe nhi pta tha ki deleated part itna zyada beautiful hoga. completely loved it yaar right frm brginning tll end. finally they confessed nd waiting for their special nite. dear u r a fabulous writr nd u should write more romantic writeups. waiting for nxt nd thanx for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely and loved it!
that sweet understanding of each other <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update dear
wow ...the way they confessed
loved it
song selection was best
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Posted: 9 years ago
So perfect never thought fracture track can be sicu beautiful loved it to the core evryline was super n dialogues r amazing .Can't say how much I literally loved it. Ramans antics first thn tat greeting scene thn dinner n finally confession grt yaar u r a awesome writer.loved when said tab bhi tumse pyar karta tha aaj bhi karta hu n hamesha karta rahunga .superb se bhi upar
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow too god..

Start of the day itself was too good.
then ishita saving that sorry card...saying it more precious than her sarees also.

i love when the whole bhalla clan teases them...

the end was too good ishita saying i will eagerly waiting for that day.😳