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wow... the second part was just awesome...
---Raman placed for fav flowers around her beautiful, nice imagination-she was thinking she was lying somewhere in a flower shop or a floral exhibition...
Raman concern and care and the way his guilty trip, and ishita changed his mind with work to get an envelope and the sorry card just apt , very nicely sync the sorry card to the moment, his naughtiness as usual superb😆...
ishita lines - *"Haan Kanjeevaram se bhi zyada" she said holding the card close to her heart...
you have used the word "Mujhe Haq Hai" and the inner meaning of it very brilliantly👏👏...
* "Chot pair me lagi hai. Dimag me nahi. To uska istemal kiya karo. Ruko wahin pe"...
OMG!!! raman taking his wife to dinning room in his arms, his one liners, feeding her just fab...
Family is full on in teasing mood, just excellent the convo between ishra was amazing...
i loved the way raman said -Nahi meri jaan☺️❤️, and covering up was too good...,
simmi's comment was "Tu rehende bhai. Humein sab pata hai ke tujhe Pagal Kutte ne nahi Pyar ke keede ne kata hai" 👏👏...
--- ishra room convo was so romantic, funny...
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"Kuch bhi logic? Magar poore confidence se!"bang on one liner😉, the way ishita saying
Tumhe Haq Hai"❤️... the three magical words from ishita so lovely☺️❤️, *
"Ye Madrasan is caring Punjabi ke samne haar gayi" just super...
Raman what an line-
Mai tumse tab bhi pyar karta tha, ab bhi karta hun aur hamesha karta rahunga" so perfect...
last paragraph just wonderful...
just extra ordinary writing, very careful inserted the story and use of the words just wow👍🏼...
very
good job yaar👏...
thoroughly
enjoyed it...
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