Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Omgsh Pragya just read this π I swear I felt as if the scene was playing out before me! I could hear junoon esp when he turned around in tears, when she stopped, when they looked at each other! Idk if you heard Junoon while writing this but at certain points I did while reading! Miss Dhabewali n Jallad Jinn are back! Tho both are hurt, angry and disappointed! I loved the intensity and pain! But when he said her name I swear I felt my heart stop! I mean I could actually hear his voice saying Sanam! You know how he says it π But him returning the taveez was painful and created hope only to have it crushed! This cant be the final goodbye! π₯Ί You have to update the next part soon! Damn Pragya you def brought out the junoon, angst, intensity, passion and made us feel for them all over again! Like I said I heard the different versions of Junoon in my head! Plus I love do pal! One of my favorite songs! You write really well and I loved reading this! Sorry for such a late comment but my brothers' school opened today after winter break so it was just so hectic n plus I live in NY lol But this was my first stop lol I was so excited to see that u posted part 1. It was just amazing yet heartbreaking π Anyway plz do post part 2 soon! I cant wait to see what happens next! These two cannot stay apart for long! Its raining SaHil stories today lol Great job!!!
Thank you so so much Esha, for such long comment! I love reading long comments! :)
I am glad you loved the part. And as for hearing Junoon, hel even I had my moments when it was playing in my mind while writing. Specially the male version π
Yes the WAY he says her name! Sigh!
Thank you so much again, I am overwhelmed! That song is something ain't it?! β€οΈ
Yep! Even I can't make them apart for long, I need to drop in a twist, maybe a new clause in contract or whatever. I was thinking, to take a 2 year leap earlier but then when I saw last epi, I din't want that, and I had to change some turn of events π
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