virika os : the best gift of my life

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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is my first ever new story on virika

i think it will be a bit similar to other ones to

buti just got this in mind and tought of writing so that we can even cherish virika moments


virika os:The Best Gift Of My Life!!


Vadhera mansion:

Jeevika pov: The sun rays hit my face in the morning , I turned to see the love of my life there But he wasn't there ,then I realised that he went to mumbai for a conference I felt so weak that I was about to faint and ran to the bathroom and threw up And decided to go to the doctor as I was feeling so miserable But before that I took some rest.

HOSPITAL: Doctor: Ms jeevika viren vadhera after doing all ur tests I confirm that u are "PREGNANT "

Jeevika couldn't believe her eyes She agin asked the doctor what she said

Doctor:yes u are becoming maa Jeevz thanked the doctor and left.

Jeevika Pov: I thought of calling virenji and telling him about the good news But an idea struck my mind I want to go to mumbai and suprise home as the day after was her virenji's birthday

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ She Went to their guest house in mumbai and bought all the team which are needed to decorate the house and she baked a chocolate cake for viren ,which would match with his creamy brown eyes and wrote "HAPPY BIRTHDAY SOON TO BE PAPA"

Viren's Pov: By the time I reached the guest house it was almost 11:45 pm and when I opened the door , it was fully dark that I hardly could see anything but can feel something around me ,suddenly the lights turned on & I could see colourful heart shaped ballons all around the house, I was wondering what is all this and suddenly someone hugged me from back and it was the same touch of my love,life He turned back and saw it was none other than my angel

Viren : jeevika u in mumbai ???

Jeevika:yeah virenji why??? Can't I come here she said making an angry face 😡

Viren : jeevika any occasion that u are suddenly here

Jeevika : if any occasion is there only will I come,can't I come to my husband !!!

Viren:srry yaar I dint mean that

Then clock strikes 12:00

Jeevika : "HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIRENJI "

Viren:thanks a lot ,so I understand why u cam here now he said !! And by the way where is my gift he said smirking with his naughty intentions

Jeevika:I came here is this not enough???

Viren : it's a lot but i want more something bigger than this

Jeevika: okay

Viren pov: She blindfolded me and took me to the terrace and let me open my eyes I was amazed for a second ,the way how she kept this much efforts and the arrangements were perfect there was one table with two chairs with moonlight perfecltly falling on it

Jeevika : this is ur surprise virenji

Viren : ah only this I thought u would give me a kiss on my lips

Jeevika: I am not the one who will give it , u will give it to me. After u find the actual and bigger surprise

Viren:wait another surprise ,pls tell me what is it ??

Jeevika: first cut the cake then only surprise

Viren: said okay with a puppy face ,eagerly waiting for the surprise

Viren pov: She bought the cake box and told me to open it After I did as she said , I couldn't believe my eyes I was just dreaming wether it was true or not , so I pinched my self and came back into senses I asked jeevika are u serious am I becoming papa

Jeevika: yes Viren ji

Viren: jeevz this was the best gift of my life !! Umahh And lifted her turned her around , then kissed her on her forehead He cut the cake , they fed each other and ate their dinner .

Jeevika pov: After we finished our dinner he lifted me and took me to the bedroom and layed on top of me kissed my forehead,cheeks and then lips and hugged me so tightly.

Virika pov: We both of them slept peacefully in each other arms And made love all the night

Thanks for reading my story Chappals and tomatoes are totally allowed🤗🤗


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millee18 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute os !
Do write more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it❤️
Do keep writing..Would love to read them!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: komal793

Loved it❤️

Do keep writing..Would love to read them!!😊

thanks A LOT
WILL PM U NEXT TIME IF I WRITE
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: millee18

Cute os !
Do write more :)

THANK U
I FEEL ON TOP OF HEAVEN TO RECIEVE A COMENT FORM MY FAV WRITER

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This OS was absolutely adorable!!!
Too sweet <3
do write more!!!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
loved the whole update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
loved the whole update
totally
amazing
superb
update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So cute os 😛
Loved it 😊😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No chappals and no tomatoes!
For you behna u write so well,
The os was indeed
Romantic
Cute
Loving
Sweet
Wonderful
Mindblowing
Outstandinh
Superbb
Love
Romantic
Baby
Virika
Adorable
Splendid!!!
Os!!!
Love it from strt to end from where jeevika know whe was pregnant till making love!!! Tooo goood! The way jeevika surprised viren was so speical and so cute! Love it!!!!
Continue with more OS! N thank uuu !!!
Love u and sorry for reading n commenting late!!
Continue with more OS

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