~*IshRa TS: The Ultimatum*~ UPDT pt2 pg8 Dec 1 - Page 2

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!NIce flow of words!!

Nice!!

keep writing!

I would really like to see some thing like that in the show aswell

I love the fact that even though it seemed forced in the beginning it was not at all forced..I loved how beautifully you expressed the force by him into an acceptance and something she too desired..Also loved how passionate it was..Sheer brilliance..was a pleasure reading this..😊

thanks everyone for reading and liking and commenting!! i feel a little overwhelmed, thank you :)

@YhmCraze, liya96, Shee_xaan, ..Likitha.., sreeyaanar, priyavin, & exploringmyself - thank you for taking the time to comment! so glad you loved the story and really appreciate your kind words 😊

Originally posted by: mamamiah123

Very good os. Do continue with this and more content please 😉

aww thank you!! but this is only going to be an os, i don't have any more ideas for ishra...they are so intimidating to write 😳

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Can I just say I love your version way better than the show's one!

Their intense conversation in this OS; going back and forth until finally they blurted out what they really felt; and then the consummation, even if one thought it was a mistake and the other was too drunk - they both acted on their desires. 

Everything was so beautifully written and I enjoyed this OS very much. Thank you for such an amazing story!

Thank YOU for your amazing comment!! <333 to you for explaining all what you liked. I didn't want to show Raman as totally drunk, though in the episode yeah he was 😕 But yes the point was that they both chose to act on their desires! Thank you for getting that, and so glad you enjoyed the story!

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

that was beautiful !! 

loved this part :

So she knew what she didn't need.

But what did she need?

i really really loved it !! 

Thank you so much! Yes this part was very important to me, to show Ishita's internal decision-making. Glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

It was just Amazing!!

I have never read a more beautiful expression of Love making, ever!

No I am not exaggerating, Its the truth. I absolutely loved it! 

Definitely write more, you have got that skill in you... keep it up!

Oh my goodness thank you so much!! 😳 I hope to write more, but maybe not on IshRa, unless the show gives me a good scene to turn around again 😉 😆

Originally posted by: columbia

First of all let me say thank god you put it up here I am so so glad you did

I like that he says I need you which is the impetus for her to hold on to 

I will be back with more that's what your writing does to me

I really like how she says ask me again 

For me I interpreted that as their second chance

lol you're welcome? thank you for the encouragement!! glad you saw the importance of his "i need you," always a big motivator for our big hearted ishu. and yeah it was important for me to show they both made a choice...good way to put it,t he second chance. and please come back as much as you like 😉 😳

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

Wow😃..such a fantasticly brilliant piece of writing👏👏..You have expressed each and every scene so intricately with the best details👍🏼..Such a wonderful level of detailing that I could see the entire scene unfold in front of my eyes😳⭐️..The most passionate love making ever☺️..Please write more often and please PM me whenever you do😃..Sending a buddy request right away😊..You are amazingly good👏👍🏼..Thanks a ton columbia for this🤗..I would have missed this brilliant piece of writing..Thanks a ton Mina for this lovely OS🤗❤️..it really made yday's episode way better for me now..😊

wow thank you for this lovely amazing awesome comment!! so pleased you enjoyed all of it could see it in your imagination. i'm happy to buddy you!! but i don't do update PMs, i'm too lazy sorry 😕 😳

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

I love the fact that even though it seemed forced in the beginning it was not at all forced..I loved how beautifully you expressed the force by him into an acceptance and something she too desired..Also loved how passionate it was..Sheer brilliance..was a pleasure reading this..😊

thank you for more comments!! eee makes me so happy 😃😆 and yeah i really wanted to show that it was about choice, not force...so happy you saw it that way. thank you 😊

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez

I would really like to see some thing like that in the show aswell

aww i'm sure eventually the show will give us an even more awesome and amazing coming together for ishra!! i have hope. i don't really want them to come together in anger like this...just couldn't ignore the need to rescue yesterday's scene 😳 thanks for reading and commenting! <3

and thanks again to everyone for reading & liking. long live ishra fans 😉

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

mina🤗
you wrote for yhm i was so hoping you would since the college friend os😃
that was beautifully sensual👏 and realistic 👍🏼
i really liked ishita's thought process of what she needed and when she claimed him as well👏
fantastic job ⭐️

Originally posted by: rutu83

mina🤗
you wrote for yhm i was so hoping you would since the college friend os😃
that was beautifully sensual👏 and realistic 👍🏼
i really liked ishita's thought process of what she needed and when she claimed him as well👏
fantastic job ⭐️

oh haaai rutu!!  you found me!! i feel a little bad stepping away from my comfy kkb home...thanks for commenting here, love your comment!! glad you enjoyed the story and yay you completely understand my ishu!! and heehee glad it seemed realistic too...😃 lots of ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ to you dear 😊 and 🤗 back!!

this was really good dear⭐️
intense, passionate and romantic😳
superb👍🏼

From a wrong move this ended exactly the right way!! Very beautifully wrote👏 I hope you continue what you've started because I'm already imagining possible scenes that can happen the morning after and how their relation will grow.

Keep it up😃

This was a total 180 degrees turn to what happened in last night's epi but I liked it. Though I would never want IshRa's most special moment to happen when Raman is not in his senses but I loved how towards the end you made Raman so soft towards Ishita. The way he took care of her while he was controlling his passion and the way Ishita gave herself to Raman even though she was a little unsure, that was just beautiful!

That was brilliant hope u continue with the morning after