Arhi FF Thread#13: Secret Passion *Double Update pg1! (Teaser pg 139!) - Page 74

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Thank God khushi and babies r fine
Who is this rita? Payal argghh hate her
Hope everything will be fine soon
Update soon plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser
Plzz do update soon.: (
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow ...payal is beyond creepy and psychotic ...omg thank god khushi and the twins are safe ... hope arnva destroys payal even if the Rita thing needs to come up... i bet payal was involved in that too...wicked story continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was a roller coaster ride yaar.glad that khushi is alive.arnie's anger was fearful.payal deserves that.who the hell is rita?eager for the next chappy dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey I was rereading the whole story again and just realised something - wasn't it Arnav who was accused of cheating on Khushi in Indigo? So why were his so called 'fans' talking about Khushi cheating on Arnav...?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: amira039.303

Hey I was rereading the whole story again and just realised something - wasn't it Arnav who was accused of cheating on Khushi in Indigo? So why were his so called 'fans' talking about Khushi cheating on Arnav...?


bc they're delusional. They've twisted the facts for their own reasons.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_sarun

Thank God...Khushi and the babies are fine. Hope K will believe Arnav . Now who is this Rita? Why can't u kil this Payal already...?


More on rita very soon. and id love for payal to go away and leave our lovebirds be but this woman is umm extremely off balance and generally insane. she will not leave that easily... but I'm not going to stretch it like a real soap opera either no worries😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkly

Payal... Good to know how her obsession for Arnav started. Looks like she has killed people earlier also. The messages she was sending to her group about Khushi's death were horrifying. She is one sick psycho. I am glad that all her collection got burnt along with her laptop.

Akash... If he is any dumber, then I would have to call him Aliya Bhatt :-). He does not even have a teeny weeny doubt on his wife. The dumb and ignorant man. He should be the president of dumb gang which includes elder Gupta ladies.

Karan... He has some guts. He never leaves a chance to poke his dirty nose in arnav - khushi matter. He needs some shock treatment so that he forgets khushi :-).

Garima and Buaji... Two waste people. "Arnav is the culprit" is their motto. They look for a chances to assassinate his character.

Aman and NK... So far, these two are good. I am happy for that. I hope they support arnav in future also.

Anjali and Dadi... Evil duo. I just hate the way they were talking to arnav about Khushi's death.

Khushi... She lived with Payal for so long but could not understand her hatred. That might be because, she is an orphan who craves for little love and sees good in all people. I hope she trusts Arnav's words about Payal.

Arnav... What can I say about him. He is just a perfect husband. I was so sad while reading Arnav's concern, love and suffering after khushi got hurt. Finally he revealed Payal's truth. Hope he shows all the proof if khushi does not believe him.

Now who is this Rita!! I hope she is not Arnav's ex wife. Or someone he has murdered. Or who has his child... My God, Tina... I don't think I can survive long without knowing about this mistery lady.

Wonderfully written chapter Tina. I always have so much to say about each and every chapter you write :-). Continue soon.


perfect summary on a lot of things and characters in SP hun. About rita... well arnav confirmed in the previous chapter no other serious girlfriends or possible children remember? 😉 All will be explained soon. glad u liked the chapter. always nice to read yours and everyone else's replies. i wish i could reply to everyone... sigh... but i guess u all would rather I updated something instead na😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishk

Oh God. Tina, that is a roller coaster ride and I am left wanting more.

The insight in Payal's past and some hint of her actions really repulsed me. How can she hate someone to this extent? Agin, It was her mistake that she didn't ask which Raizada it was. She had always wanted the bad for Khushi and she got that. She had gone for the best and today, for all that both of them did, she is at worse end.

I really wonder in which words is Anjali living? I wish Arnav gives her to tight slaps. It is one thing to destroy your own life but another to want the same for someone else. If she is happy being with the swine be it, but who is she to put salt on Arnav's wound, when he is in dire need of support.

And so is Dadi, is she really their own grand-mother? Sometimes I doubt. Oh but, It is reality too. People become blind and I doubt she was born blind, who doesn't clearly care for the happiness of her granchildren. Be it Anjali's limping or Arnav's wedding with Khushi, she can't be happy.

Akash? Your wife really did get her influence on you. Few months with her and you have become like her. I may not be surprised if later on you join DL too. Ok that is over-exaggeration, I will still be shocked. The point is, Payal has rubbed of herself on him or it may be that his real self is coming out, when he is no longer under Arnav's financial help. Ungrateful Man. May this couple get their dues. Good that Arnav threw them out in this way. That was the best part, my heart was getting satisfied as Payal's belongings were burning.

I can't blame Gupta family. They had finally accepted him and Payal's act made them stand against him again. Both of the parties are justified at their ends, they don't know Arnav as Khushi knows him but hopefully Arnav will reveal Payal's real face in front of them, making them realize, not everyone is as they seem. Payal is the perfect docile daughter, daughter in law and all but in reality she is scum. Arnav is the ruthless, rude, stern man but in reality he is really good at heart. Hope Gupta family realize it.

Thank God, Khushi and our twins are safe, I was so worried till I read she was alive so the kids. You gave me a mini heart-attack back there. But there moments were so overwhelming, be it their interaction in ambulance, his rejection to leave her alone and later when she is safe, their conversation about sex got me chuckling, I am looking forward to when she becomes strong to know what he has planned. Arnav got me so emotional, I love him. I love them, may they be blessed. I hope she will believe Arnav eventually, she might refuse at first but she has to believe him, knowing he would never hurt her.

NOW WHO THE HELL IS RITA? Hope not someone who can mess Arnav and Khushi's life. I have full hope that together they will handle her.

And as always, I just love your writing, each and single word.

Please continue super soon because this wait becomes insufferable.

Loads of love<333
Kashish


u love my chapters and i love reading your reviews😳 muah lots of twists and turns coming up😉 and yes, more on RITA too
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arkhushi1

Welcome back Tina and Satina, missed you so much. Can't tell you how much I have been missing your stories Tina, but I will not complain. I completely understand your situation and the fact that you still update despite your incredibly busy work commitment shows how dedicated you are to your stories and your readers. So for that, thank you.

Now to the update. It was absolutely BRILLIANT!! The emotions and thoughts going through both Khushi and Arnav at those heart stopping moments were depicted beautifully. I found myself feeling them as intensely as both of them. I was gobsmacked that anyone could suspect Arnav of being involved in hurting Khushi!!! That Payal had really crossed the line this time. Not only did she try to hurt Khushi right under Arnav's nose but she has also openly challenged him. Both these things will bring out the fighting spirit in ASR. He has spent his time trying to hide and protect Khushi and his babies from all the bad around them but he now realises that has not worked and he had to be more forceful and proactive. That is the side of Arnav that I hope we will see now.
So glad that he followed through on his threat to throw Akash and Payal out of his home and that Shyaam too. He really could do with his Di not coming back home either, he'll just have to listen to her hysterics and pleading and blaming. I cannot believe that his Di and Dadi were so callous at a time like this, never once thinking about Arnav's condition and welfare.
Only thing that I am thankful for is that he still has 2 people that he can trust and are on his and Khushi's side - Aman and NK. He needs someone to help him, it's too much to take on everything and everyone alone.
Just like everyone else, I am also wondering who and what this RITA secret is. Is she some ex-girlfriend or acquaintance of Arnav's that maybe Payal got 'rid of' and maybe ASR was blamed? Payal was thinking about some dark memory she has kept hidden away???
I am confident that Khushi will be initially shocked at Arnav's accusation against Payal but she will listen to him and understand him and believe him. They have been through too much to start doubting each other now.
I just love this story and cannot wait for the next part.


thanks for the very sweet welcome back. yeah, life is hectic busy but we have to find time for things we love right? and for me, part of that is writing😳 glad u liked the twists of the chapter, more soon. And i hope Khushi reacts exactly as you've described it too

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