I don't know but I think the end was abrupt & the title of the story not justified...the reunion was too soon...U were so much engrossed in maaneet romance that u totally ignored to portray maaneet's pain & sufferings...U didn't describe those parts well...or I would say that I didn't feel connected to their pain ...emotionally I feel not attached neither to their pain , nor to their loss which I should have...Starting was too good & the progress was nice...👏...but soon I got lost...the essence of the story or the soul was lost......any way good attempt...😊...Sorry if I hurt u... it was never my intension...I am really sorry...
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