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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 8 a

Then Arjun entered

Arjun went to the commissioner and said:
good afternoon sir,why did you call up a meeting?

Commissioner sir said:
good afternoon Arjun, I am waiting for the others to come,then I will tell why I called everyone.

Arjun nodded.

After dressing the cut,Sakshi:
done.you must not get it wet allright?

Ayesha nodded and said:
thanks

Sa: phir thanks (again){faking anger}

Ay: ok thanks wapas, happy?(back)

Sa : very (smiling)

Just then Shree, Riya and Chotu entered and all three of them said:
good afternoon sir

R: sorry sir, we got a little late it was traffic that held us up.

Arjun was glaring at Riya, while Riya was not paying attention to him.

Com sir: it's alright, I am sorry for disturbing your off day officers but I need your help

Everyone: help sir?

Com sir: yes my friend's wife Kalki Desai is missing from 8 am and today is her daughter's engagement, so the whole family is worried because nobody saw her leave the house his son called me and told me about it, they don't want to ruin the engament and cause a panic between the guests,everyone is already there .that's why I called you Sameer kyunki I know I can trust you and your team.

S: ofcourse you can trust us sir, we will surely help .

Com sir(smiling): thanks Sameer,you guys need to get ready for the engagement,nobody must know that you are police officers because it's unofficial and you have to find her before 9:30 pm it's the engament time,you will meet Mukesh he is the eldest son and he will introduce you to the family.I will also be there but as a guest. this is the address.(gave a card to Sameer)

S: allright sir.you can leave for the engament sir, we will meet you there

After the commissioner left

Sameer looked at his team and said:
we have to get ready for the engament,I will see you guys at the venue in one hour, Shree bring your technical equiptments with you and Liza bring your medical equiptments.Sakshi you will also come you will get a hint how the team works.any questions?

It was silent.

S: allright Rawte you are also coming.

A: do I have a choice "sir"?

S: no you don't Rawte(glaring)

A: fine I will meet you there.

They both left the office premises.

Sh: inn dono ka kuch nahi ho saktha(no one can help these two){sighing}

R(concerned):aree Ayesha,tumhe chot kaise lagi?(hey,how did you get hurt)

Chotu and Shree: ha bata na(yes tell us)

Ay:woh I accidently hit my head on the door of the conference room

L: are poora sach bata na(tell the whole truth)

Choreeiya: poora sach suna hai(we want to hear the whole truth)

Ayesha was getting flustered how to react.

Sakshi saw that and quickly reacted:
Rathor sir opened the door,the door hit Ayesha and he said sorry this is the whole truth(winked at Ayesha and Ayesha mouthed thank you')

Sh: kya, Sameer sir ne sorry bola(what,Sameer sir said sorry){shocked}

Ayesha nodded

L: aur usne muhjse kaha tha ke bring the first aid kit(and said to me),he was getting concerned for Ayesh.(teasing)

Sa(ho gaya kheer mein namak){she spoiled the whole thing}:we are getting late lets leave warna Rathor sir aur Arjun sir hamara keema banayenge(or Rathor sir and Arjun sir will cook us for dinner){trying to scare them}

And it worked.

L: let's go we also have to get ready, Riya you are coming with us

Sh: kyun? woh hamare saath ayi hain aur hamare saath jayegi,samhjie disaster ki malkin.(why?she came with us and will go with us,understood)

L(glaring): you Specky

Ay(thinking uff they cannot stop fighting): stop it both of you,Shree she has to come with us because we all will have to get dressed up accordingly to the function and after that she cannot sit on the bike idiot it's common sense.

Ch: Ayesh, chor isse yeh hain ek bara idiot (leave him he is a big idiot),we will meet at the function

And he dragged a pouting Shree outside.

Sa: toh chalein?(shall we leave)

Everyone left the office premise to get ready

At Sameer's house

Sameer took a tux, got ready and left for the function

At Arjun's house

Arjun did not wanted to go to the function but then thought of commissioner sir, he trusted him, so he decided to go.
He wore a tux and left for the function

At Choreeiya's house

Ch: I am going to wear the sherwani which ma had sent from Delhi

Sh: I am going to wear my brown suit which Riya bought for me a week ago

After getting ready, Shree took his technical equipments then Chotu and Shree left to the function.

At Ayizakshi's house

L: agar sir ne pehle bata diya hota to hum shopping karlete(if sir had told earlier then we would have done some shopping){pouting}and he told us to be there in one hour,how can we get ready so early?

R: I agree but what can we do now? we don't have good clothes to wear.

Both of them were pacing and Sakshi was looking at them in amusement.


Then Ayesha came with some clothes and said:
I had bought them for diwali but we can wear them now

L+R: you are a lifesaver Ayesh, they are very beautiful

Sa: thank god tu ageyi (you came) they were getting hyper.

Ay: yeh sab baat mein(you can do this later)now let's get ready,we have only ten minutes

They chose a dress,got ready and left for the function.

Sameer reached the function first and met with Mukesh(elder son of Kalki devi)who was standing outside. http://i.ytimg.com/vi/1B4xspwoVXk/maxresdefault.jpg

S:hi I am Acp Sameer Damsing Rathor,I am the chief of ETF

Muk:hi Acp sir I am Mukesh Desai,son of Kalki Desai,commissioner uncle told me about you and your team,where is your team?

S:they will be here in a few minutes,once everyone is here we can start our investigation

Muk:ok Acp sir

S:please call Sameer

Mukesh nodded

After a while Arjun came there

A: you must be Mukesh right? I am Acp Arjun Suryakant Rawte second in command

http://static.startv.in/Channel/star_plus/arjun/0309120330113.jpg

Muk: nice to meet you Arjunji

Just then Choree came.

Ch: sorry sir we are a little late Shree had to get his equiptments

S: it's okay, this is Mukesh and Mukesh this is Chandrakant Patil and Shreekant Sen they both work with us

Muk: nice to meet you all, can we go inside? guests are asking about mom aur they are waiting for me inside

S: theek hain(all right),me and Arjun will go with Mukesh,you guys will come after a while.
A: before that Shree where is Riya and the other three?(glaring)
Sh:sir they are on their way I got a message from Ri(Arjun glared at Shree)I mean Riya they will be here in a few minutes.

S: ok then Rawte let's go

Arjun and Sameer both went with Mukesh inside.

Chotu to Shree: yaar Shree Riya ko call karo warna jwala mukhi phat jajegi (call Riya or else the volcano will burst)

Shree nodded and called Riya

Riya picked and said:
ha bolo Shree(yes)
Sh: Ri where are you guys?hurry up

L(on the other side screamed): this is not a plane that can fly, this is a car Specky
Sh: Ri tell your friend to shut up and please hurry Arjun sir aur Sameer sir are waiting for you guys.

R: ha we are almost there.
Sh: theek hai me and Chotu are going inside come soon bye.
R: oki doki,bye

They both cut the call
Ch: Shree Ri ne kya kaha?(what did she say)

Sh: they are almost here,let's go inside.
They both went inside.

In the car
R: we have to hurry kyunki Rathor sir aur Arjun sir hamare liya wait kar rahe hain(because Rathor sir and Arjun sir both are waiting for us){tensed}
Sa :don't get tensed Riya

Ay: ha fikar not (yes do not worry)we are almost there.

After a while they reached to the function, they parked and got out.

L: let's go inside quickly warna woh dono bombs kabhi bhi burst hosak tha hain (or else those two bombs will burst anytime)

Ay: let's go then


Meanwhile inside

Sameer and Arjun were introduced as Mukesh's college friend while Chotu was busy in the kitchen (as usual) and Shree was busy setting his equiptments.

Samjun were getting really angry at the girls for being late.
S: Mukesh we have to meet your family and ask them a few questions about your mom.
Muk: sure Sameer, I will bring them in a while

Mukesh went to get his family members, then Shree came and said:
sir I have set up my equiptments.
A: where are your friends now?(glaring)
S: yes Shree where are they?you told us they will be here in a few minutes

Sh(fumbling): woh sir woh...look sir they have come

Samjun both turned to burst on them but did not because they forgot their anger as they saw Riya and Ayesha

Riya was wearing this http://i.imgur.com/SmVNK.jpg (ignore the guys, i couldn't find a better picture of Riya's dress)

https://sareez.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/3ll041_m_lehenga.jpg

http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR7X7DCeRcmD-w7G5yS1UddYS5WAdcm5Ijux3NZNCfCLKKSVwRNZA

Ayesha was wearing this http://image.dhgate.com/albu_262403457_00-1.0x0/pink-diamond-bridal-necklace-earring-set.jpg

And Shree got 440 volt ka jhatka as he saw Liza was wearing a traditional dress

(Liza's dress) http://picsg.files.wordpress.com/2012/12/anarkali-fancy-frocks-latest-new-fashion-dress-designs-anarkali-churidar-shalwar-kameez-4.jpg

http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSPnXBMoc_mIp3NqdZ0b9vAcY6KCThmYtvni-Xpb0L060GNo6uN

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Sakshi was grinning at the scene

http://media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/64/ac/72/64ac72e6143787d8360411730c47b853.jpg


Sakshi was wearing this http://khantil.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Remarkable-Deep-Orange-Anarkali-Suit-Salwar-Kamez.jpg

http://media.blingjewelry.com/media/catalog/product/cache/1/small_image/295x295/9df78eab33525d08d6e5fb8d27136e95/s/t/sterling-silver-star-chain-necklace_sf-tf24-16u-bj_1.jpg

Chotu came to Sameer and said:
sir Mukesh is waiting for us

Sameer and Arjun came back from their trance and nodded.
Chotu saw Shree was not responding and shook him hard

Ch: tujhe kya hua Shree?(what happened to you)

Shree pointed to the 4 girls

Chotu was standing with his mouth open.Not only him but the guests were staring at the girls.

Riya was getting uncomfortable with their stares and went to Choree.

R: Shree yeh sab mujhe aise kyun dekhrahe hain, mein achi nahi lagrahi kya?(why is everyone staring at me like that,am I not looking good)

Sh: achi?super top lag rahi ho(looking super top)

Ch: super top, dhasu lagrahi ho (you are looking awesome)

Ayizshi: aur hum? (and us)

Ch: you guys are also looking dhasu.

Sh: Sakshi and Ayesha you both are looking stunning (to Liza) tum bilkul Ayesha ki car ki tarha lag rahi ho{you are looking like Ayesha's car)

L(very angry): kya kaha,mujhe tum car se compare kar rahe ho?(what did you say,you are comparing me to a car)tum to bilkul bandar ki tarha lag rahe ho(you look like an ape)

Sh(raising his voice): tum na

Sa: guys stop fighting dekho Rathor sir is coming our way

S: hum yaha duty pe hai, celebration ke liye nahi(we are on duty here),not for celebration)please don't forget that{trying to control his anger}

Everyone just nodded.

A: Rathor Mukesh is calling to introduce his family members to us so shall we go and meet them

S: let's go team

In a room in the house

Mukesh introduced his family members

Muk: this is my elder brother Rajeev and his wife Pooja babhi, that is my wife Deniv and this my younger brother Prafool and his wife Jhanvi

Raj:lekin Mukesh between guests officers it won't look nice,agar Preeti ko pata chala ki Baa ghar pe nahi hain ho saktha hai ki who sagai tod de(if Preeti finds out that Baa is not at home then maybe she will break the engament){worried}

Muk: Sameer please Preeti should not find out about Baa (almost pleading)

S: don't worry we will do our investigation secretly, not Preeti nor the guests will find out that we are not guests but officers(assuringly).Do more people live here?

Muk: yes there is Baa and Dhanes kaka but he is always drunk, he stays in that room

S: who saw your mom last time?

Jh: ji meine (me).Baa had called me and gave me jewellery to wear for the function then I left from there afterwards Prafool went in her room and he saw that Baa was not there

Pr: we looked for her everywhere but we couldn't find her

Muk: aur humne Baa ke room check kiya waha se kuch gayab nahi hai(and we also checked Baa's room nothing is missing)

S: is there any car missing?

Raj: no sab cars ghar peh hi hain aur drivers bhi(cars and drivers are at home)

S: give mrs Desai's mobile number, debit card, credit card and account number to Shree

S: Shree

Sh: sir

S: find out if there has been transaction or a call since morning, she may call or cash out money

Sh: ji sir

S: Mukesh come with me and Arjun,Riya and Chotu scan downstairs for any suspicious characters.Ayesha,Liza and Sakshi scan the room of miss Desai for any struggle marks and clues,after scanning help Riya and Chotu,there must be some clues around here somewhere which will lead us to mrs Desai(to Arjun and Mukesh)let's go

Everyone nodded and left the room

Downstairs

Chotu was wandering through the hall muttering to himself
C: aisa lagta hain ki apun logo ne kisi Karan Johar ki film me entry mara hai, kya khoob saya hain (it looks we made an entry in a Karan Johar film,they decorated it beautifully)

Riya is taking photo with her mobile of some guests when suddenly a guy came to her and said:
hi

She just gave a small smile and went from there, she turned back and took a picture of the guy

While Samjun and Mukesh were talking to the servants

S: kya tumne Kalkiji ko jaate huwe dekha?(did you see mrs Kalki going outside)

A servant: ji meine usse bahar jaate huwe dekha tha lekin woh waapis aageyi thi (I saw her going outside but she came back)

A: kitne baje (at what time)

Serv: 7 baje(at 7 am)

A: woh kiske saath gayi thi? (with whom did she go)

Serv: woh pata nahi (I don't know that)

A: theek hai tum sab ja sakhte ho

S: Rawte I wasn't finished (glaring)

A: jaanta hoon (I know that) but we first need to find out with whom miss Desai went out(smirks)

S: Mukesh kya yeh tumhe je baat pata tha?(did you know this)

Muk: no we all were busy with the arrangements

Arjun went to Shree

A: Shree kuch pata chala (did you find anything)

Sh: yes sir someone has cash out 1 lakh rupees using mrs Desai's card from an ATM machine in the mall nearby

A: kitne baje?

Sh: sir 7:15 am

S: Rawte I was talking to you and you just left from there,what do you think of yourself ?(angry)

A: second in command, but leave that. Shree found out that someone had cash out 1 lakh from an ATM machine

S: one lakh?

A: I don't think ki kisi ne je use kiya hain(someone else has used the card) I think mrs Desai has used it because the servant told us that he saw mrs Desai going outside at 7 and the withdrawel has been done at 7:15 and the mall is at 10 minutes drive,she was back at 7:30

S: ho saktha hai but we have to watch the cctv footage for certainty,(to Shree)check the footage

Sh: sir I did but the footage is not so clear,I am trying to make it clear,it will take a little time.can I go? I have to use the washroom

S: fine, hurry up

Sh: yes sir(leaves from there)

A: why did you sent him? he should stay here(angry)

S: sab tumhare tara robot nahe hain Rawte, he also needs a break
Samjhe ya...(not everyone can be a robot like you){smirks}

A: whatever (he leaves from there)

Sameer watches Arjun leave then also leaves from there to talk to Mukesh about the withdrawel of the money

Kalki Desai's room

Liza was scanning the room with her tools while Sakshi was carrying her kit and Ayesha was searching the closet.

Sa: kuch mila?(found something)

L: no

Ay: yaha pe bhi kuch nahi he(nothing is here also)

L: her room is untouched and only fingerprints of the family members are here

Sa: maybe they are involved in it

L: hosaktha hai (it could be)but we can not come to a conclusion with any proof

Ay: we should inform Sameer sir and Arjun sir

Sakshi called Sameer

Sa: sir hume kuch nahi mila (we did not find anything)

S: allright then go and help Riya and Chotu

After that they cut the call.

Sa: sir ne kaha ki we must go and help Riya and Chotu

L: so then let's go I am hungry

Then they went downstairs

In the meantime

R: Chotu tum Pooja se pooch tach karke dekho ki kuch pata chalta hai ki nahi, mein bakiyon se information nakalna try karti hoon(you go and talk to Pooja maybe you will find some clues,I am going to try to get some information from the others)

Chotu nodded and went from there.Riya accidently bumped in to the guy who she met earlier.

R: I am sorry

G: hi again I am Sashank Preeti ka kunwara cousin.Waise iss pure ghar mein aap jaisi koobhsurat ladki koi nahi hain.(Preeti's bachelor cousin)
(by the way in this whole house no one is beautiful as you)

R: thanks but excuse me mujhe kuch kaam hain(I have some work to do)

Riya went from there thinking "uff bachgeyi"(saved)

In Mukesh room

S: Mukesh why did your mother withdraw 1 lakh rupees this morning?

Muk: kya?(what){shocked}

S: did she need the money for the preparation of the engament?

Muk: nahi is ke liye(no for this) we have a joint-account,we already took a lot of money from it and all the expenses are handled by Rajeev bhai,why did she need so much money?

S: we will find out in a while Shree is just checking the CCTV footage and we will surely inform you

Muk: ji(ok)I have to go downstairs warna log bate banana shuru kardenge(or else people will start gossiping)

S: ok I will see in a while

Mukesh leaves from there

In the kitchen

Chotu was getting hungry looking at the food in the kitchen and was imagening himself eating.

Pooja interrupted his thoughts and asked:
aap kuch pooch rahe the(you were asking me something)

Ch: jalebi(he snapped out of his thoughts)nahi woh aap kuch bata rehi thi(You were telling me something)

P: aap jalebi khayenge?(do you want to eat jalebi)

Ch: nahi woh how did everyone interact with Baa?

P: we all live happily with each other, we all love each other

Some random guest called: Pooja

P: excuse me I have to go

Ch: ji

Chotu turned to go outside the kitchen when he heared some servants talking

A serv: pata hai kal se maine Jagan kaka ko nahi dekha. pata nahi kaha chalagaya?(you know since yesterday I haven't seen Jagan kaka,don't know where he went)

Another serv: acha hua chala gaya.woh bahut aarzi hogaye the. pata nahi bade malkin usse itne saal tak bardashi kaise kar payi?(it's good that he went away.with time he was getting lazy.i don't know how elder madam has tolerated him for so many years)

A serv: chalo kaam karte hain warna hume bhi kaam se nikaal denge(lets go work or else they will also fire us from the job)

Both servant left, Chotu heared their conversation and decided to tell Sameer about it

Chotu went to Sameer,he told him what he had heared and then Sameer went to talk to Mukesh.

Mukesh was busy talking to the guests when Sameer called him,he excused himself and went to talk to Sameer

Muk: aap ne bulaya?(you called)

S: ha I want to know about Jagan kaka

Muk: Baa ne kal Jagan kaka ko naukri se nikaal diya ,kyunki woh bahut lazy hogaye the with time aur when he needed money Baa always gave him,because he came with her from her maayka when she got married to dad, but when we found out that he was not doing his work properly we fired him(yesterday Baa fired him because he was getting very lazy with time and when he needed money she gave it to him)

S: you should have told us earlier, I need his address

Muk: lekin kyun?

S: just for checking maybe he is involved in your mother's disapearence

Muk: kya? Lekin woh aise kyun karega? ( what? why will he do such a thing)

S: maybe revenge? I am not sure but for assurance

Muk: ok I will tell you the address it's Bhagwati chawl

S: allright I will see you in a bit

Just then Shree came with his ipad and told him that the footage has been cleared then showed him it.

Muk: yeh to Baa hai (that is Baa)

S: Shree peeche joh aadmi kahra hai uspe zoom karo (the man standing in the back,zoom on him)

After zooming they saw an old man standing behind the door of the ATM machine

Muk(shocked): this is our servant Jagan kaka

S: I think that maybe he was blackmailing or threatening her and that's why she went outside to give her money and maybe he is involved in mrs Desai's disappearance.Shree track his mobile if he has one.I am going to Jagan kaka's house and Mukesh don't worry we will find your mother

Muk: thanks Sameer. I better go to the hall otherwise the other guests may start gossiping about the absences

Sameer nodded and Mukesh left from there

Sh: sir aap akele jayenge?(will you go alone)

S: yes, you and the others will stay here and guard here maybe Jagan kaka has helpers around here

Sh: par sir what about Arjun sir?(but)woh aapke saath nahi jayenge?(will he not go with you)

S: leave him I can take care of myself,I don't need anyone(angry)

Sh(getting scared): allright sir I understand

S: I am taking the SUV

After Sameer left Shree sighed and said:

Why me? Thank god woh chalegeye I will go and find my friends
tara kothaya ache (where are they)

Shree kept his hand on his forehead as if he was trying to look for someone then he saw Riya

Sh: tara pa oya geche (found her)Riya wait

Riya stopped and Shree went to her

Sh: Ri kahan thi tum?(where were you)

R: I was here only , I have seen Rathor sir going outside. Is everything ok?

Sh: kya batua tuhje yaar (what should I tell you) Sameer sir is really something

R: ab kya kiya sir ne? (what did he do now)

Then the guy named Shasank came with his mom

Shas: aap ne mehendi nahi lagayi abhi tak? (you didn't put mehendi yet)

R: actually mujhe kaam hain (I have work to do) main ati hoon (I will be back)

Shas: ek minute main aap ko apni mom se introduce karwana tha (one minute I want to introduce you to my mom)

R: Namaste aunty

Aunty: Namaste waise hamare parivaar ka status tum dekh hi rahi ho na(anyways you have seen our family status)

Riya nodded and Shree was busy giving Riya sympathy look

Aunty: top ke Gujrati family hai hum, health se wealth se naam se(we belong to a top Gujrati family, from health to wealth and name)

Shree was trying to hold his laugh

Au: har tara se top on top. Mere bte ne tumhe pasand kiya hai(from every angle top on top. My son likes you)

Riya looked at her with wide eyes

Au: to tumhe iss baat ki bahut kushi honi chaheya. Arre kitne risthey ate hai mere bte ke. Par pata nahi isne tume kyun pasand kiya,tumhara rang bhi sanwala hai(you should be very happy about this. You know how many proposals my son gets but I don't know why he choose you, your skin color is also dusky)

Riya was getting angry but she controlled her anger thinking that the Aunty was an elder person

R: Aunty aap ko mere rang ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Waise ek baat batua mujhe aap ke bte mein bilkul interest nahi hain(you shouldn't worry about my complexion. By the way let me tell you one thing I don't have any interest in your son){smirking}

Au: kyun? Kyun interest nahi hain? Arre kya kharabhi hain mere bte main? Kitna handsome hai. Canada se MBA kiya hai mere bte ne (why? Why are you not interested? What faults does he have? He is handsome. He studied MBA in Canada){she said exasperatedly}

Shree finally thought of helping Riya from the chipku aunty

Sh: aunty aapka beta perfect hai, dreamboy hai. Lekin Riya shaadi nahi karshakti hai na(your son is perfect. He is a dreamboy. But Riya can not marry him)

Au: Kyun?(why)

Sh: uski shaadi already ho chuki hain(she is already married)

Riya looked at Shree shocked while Shree was holding his laughter and the aunty was looking startled Shaskank was looking like someone stole his favorite candy

Au: shaadi sudha hain?( she is a married woman). Toh isne mangalsutra kyun nahi pehna?(then why hasn't she wore her mangalsutra)

Sh: arre aunty aaj kal nalayak ladka ladki. Yeh sab chezon main kaha believe karti hain(today's good for nothing generation. They don't believe in these things)

R: dekhiya(look) aunty I don't believe in wearing mangalsutra to show that I am married. I know whom I belong in my heart that is what is important


Au: kaise baat kar rahi ho?(what are you talking about){exasperatedly}

R: sahi baat kar rahi hoon( I am talking the right thing) why must woman always have to wear symbols to show that they are married?
why can't men also wear them?

Shree saw the tension brewing between them and suddenly said:

Look her husband is coming

Both of them looked at the direction Shree was looking and saw Arjun coming

Riya glared at Shree for saying that while Shree was giving her a sorry and pleading face to her

Arjun was coming to ask Shree about the withdrawel video when he saw Riya glaring at Shree while an old woman was staring at him as if he had done a crime and some other guy was looking like he was going to cry any moment now

Arjun went to Shree and was going to ask him about the video when the old woman interfered and asked:

To tum iske pati ho. Kaise tum isse manage karte ho? She is very modern and very arrogant. Pata nahi uske maa baap ne kya shikaya hain.(so you are her husband. How do you manage her? Don't know what her parents taught her)

Arjun was very angry at the question and was going to blast her off for assuming something like that but saw Riya was getting angrier with seconds because of the mention of her parents and he knew that if Riya says something now it will be difficult to handle her and the case.He decided to ease the situation.

A: dekhiye auntyji it's not good to blame other parents without knowing anything and by the way kis baat ke liye aap itna (at what are you)...

He was then cut off by Riya

R: look aunty I am not interested in you and your son. Leave me and my parents alone(almost shouting)

Shree and Arjun were shocked to see Riya who normally does not loose her cool very quickly is fuming as Arjun already knows that about Riya and Shree well he knows her very well

Riya was about to say something when Arjun said:

Riya your friends are looking for you

He pointed to Ayesha, Liza and Sakshi who were just looking for her and Choree

Riya just left from there and went to the girls

The aunty felt insulted and left from there with her son while Shree was standing with his mouth open because he never saw Arjun talking so sweetly with anyone

Arjun was actually thinking how he reacted for Riya but composed himself and asked Shree about the cctv footage.Shree came out of the shock when Arjun shook him lightly by his shoulder when he didn't responded to his question

A: Shree where are you lost? Mein kab se pooch raha hoon ki cctv footage ka kya huwa and you are standing like a statue (I am asking since so long about the cctv footage)

Sh (little embarrassed): sir I just go and bring my tab

A: hurry up

While Shree was bringing his tab, Arjun was looking at Riya who was still a little frustrated

Riya was trying to control her temper while the girls minus Sakshi were trying to find out why she was angry

Shree brought his tab and showed Arjun the footage

A: Shree where is Rathor? Have you showed him this?

Sh: yes sir he already saw it and went to Jagan kaka 's house

A(a little loud): Why wasn't I informed earlier when you cleared the footage? When did he leave and with whom?

Sh(shivering): sir woh Sameer sir left almost an hour ago and he went alone. I tried to tell him that he musn't go alone but he didn't listen

A: what? Why did you let him go alone? Whatever call him right now

Sh: yes sir(he tried calling him but his phone was turned off)sir I can't get trough

A: track his phone down and give me Jagan kaka's address

Sh: yes sir the address is Bhagwati chawl

A: I am leaving for the place. You track down Sam I mean Rathor's phone and tell me the location while all of you investigate the case for now. If there's any problem call me. Tell the others to be alert and also tell commissioner sir that I will be back shortly with Rathor

Sh: yes sir

After that Arjun went to search for Sameer while Shree told the others about Sameer

Ay: I think we should split up it will be easier to search for clues aur Shree tum jao and track Sameer sir's phone for Arjun sir alright?(and Shree you go)

Sh: teekh hai I will see you guys in a bit (allright)

After Shree left Ayesha divided the work among them in team of two
she sent Chotu to Shree to help him if necessary then told Liza and Riya to search in the other rooms and told Sakshi that she was with her

After everyone left Ayesha told Sakshi:

Sakshi tum yahi ruko, main abhi ati hoon, mujhe Arjun sir aur Sameer sir ke bare inform karna hoga. It will only take a few minutes (wait here I will just come, I have to inform commissioner sir about Arjun sir and Sameer sir )

Sa: koi baath nahi I will wait (no worries)

Ay: Thanks yaar

She went to the commissioner and asked him if he could come aside as she wanted to talk to him about Arjun and Sameer.

Com sir: ha bolo Ayesha tum kuch batana chahti ho? (yes Ayesha you wanted to say something to me)

Ay: Yes sir woh Sameer sir went to look for someone without back up and we don't know if the person he went after is dangerous or not that's why Arjun sir went after Sameer sir incase anything bad happens

Com sir: kya he went alone?

Ay: ji(yes)

Com sir: yeh dono kabh nahi sudhrenge( these two will never change),whenever one goes alone on a mission,the other one follows
I will send back up as soon as Arjun calls allright?

Ay: ji just as you say

Comissioner left from there and Ayesha was about to go to Sakshi when she saw her standing alone in a corner talking.

Ay: yeh Sakshi akele main kya badbada rahee hai? (why is Sakshi talking to herself)

Ten minutes ago

Sakshi was standing and waiting for Ayesha when she saw that the aunty who made Riya upset telling bad things to someone else about Riya and that guy was trying to woo some other girl

Sa: haww they are so mean, how can they speak so ill about somebody they don't know

A voice: some people are like that Sakshi. You cannot stop them from doing it

Sa: I can (smiling naughtily)

The voice (sternly): Sakshi don't

Sa: oh yes as she close her eyes and mumbles some words and a potion came in her hand

That' s when Ayesha came and Sakshi closed her hand

Ayesha asked: Sakshi, why are you talking to yourself?

Sa: shsss just wait and watch

Sakhsi signaled a waiter to come and took 2 drinks and told the waiter to go

Ay: Sakshi, tum ne 2 drinks kyun li hai?(why did you take 2 drinks)
I am not thirsty

Sa: yeh hamare liye nahi hai(these are not for us)

Ay: toh kis ke liye?(then for whom)

Sa: wait you will see in a while

Sakshi secretly put the potion in the drinks and called a waiter and told him to give those two persons as she pointed to Shasank and his mom

The waiter left from there and gave the glasses to them

Ayesha just couldn't hold her curiosity anymore and asked with slight anger: Sakshi, why did you ask the waiter to give drinks to them? They just made Riya upset.

Sa: relax Ayesha. Main itni bhi pagal nahi hoon (I am not that crazy)

Ay: toh phir? (then why)

Sa: just wait and watch

The waiter went to the aunty first and then to Shasank and gave the drinks to them. They took it and drank it, after a while they resumed to do what they were doing but only with slight difference allright not slight but a huge difference when the aunty started to bathmouth her stomache started grumbling then she ran in the washroom and same happened with Shasank.

Ayesha was shocked because everytime they started talking again, it happened again.

Ay: what is happening with them Sakshi? Tumne kuch aisa waisa unke drinks me milaya tha?( did you put something bad in their drinks)

Sa: maine sirf kuch aisa dala hai ki jab bhi yeh dono kuch bura bolenge tab ine bathroom jana hi padega (I only put something that whenever they will speak something bad they will have to go to the bathroom)

Ay: acha aur tumhe yeh kisne bataya ki woh tjees aise kaam karti hai?
(really, and who told you that that thing works like that)

Sa: woh sab choro and concentrate on the case (leave all of that). Let's work

Ay: omg in all of this I almost forgot the case, chalo (let's go)

Ayesha dragged Sakshi away from there

Sa(in her mind): Ayesha ask so many questions, she has done a good job to be a cop, thank god I diverted her mind

The voice: you told her about the potion, A. So she had to ask about it

Sa: Shut up I didn't ask you M

Ay: let's go

Sa: yeah ( in her mind I will talk to you later)

Meanwhile an hour ago

Sameer was driving and got to the address of Jagan kaka, he got of his car and went to his house and knocked on the door.

S: Jagan Jagan

Someone opened the door and asked the person: where's Jagan?

That person answered: jahan pe koi Jagan nahi rehta hai( no person named Jagan lives here) as he tried to close the door but Sameer put his foot and pushed the door open and pulled his collar, took out his gun,put it on his head and asked againbut more rudely: Jagan kaha hain?

That person(very scared): tabele main(in the stable)

S: tum kaun ho? (who are you)

That person: I am his nephew, he called me to help him with the preparations to go to the village

S: take me to him

They were walking among the buffalos and cows when Sameer saw two persons standing infront of him, he took his gun but the nephew of Jagan hit his hand and the gun fell down, then a fight began between the four Sameer hit first the nephew then the other person to the left when suddenly someone hit him with a barrel and he fell unconsious.


i was supposed to post in december but anyway

i hope you guys like this chapter

happy thanksgiving


Edited by VirMan505 - 10 years ago
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It's awesome update sima dear
All girls were looking great
Samjun was lost in Riya nd Aisha
Who is sakshi
Does she an Angel
Those who possess magical powers
It's superb update dear
Hope sameer was fine
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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WELL I READ IT IN A GO JUST LOVED IT..UPDATE SOON
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Awesome story
read in one go.
So sakshi is riyas angel.
Lets see age age sak kya kya karti hai.
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Nice update so sakshi came for helping riya
Update soon
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awesome update
loll choree scared to wake up riya 😆 😆
sometime she become more dangerous then samjun 🤣 🤣
awe chotu was so excite to see his 11.30 wali 😉 😉
so sad ETF holiday got cancel 😒 😒
samjun never stop their argue
Sameer called Aisha & told her abt com want to meet
god arjun again got angry on riya for not receiving his call fast
but I just love riya's answer 👏 👏
bravo sheri riya arjun ki toh hawa nikal gai 🤣 🤣
oh god Sameer by mistake hit the door on Aisha head
sasha cute eyelock 😳 😳
so com's friend wife goes missing
that's why he want them to solve the case without letting know to anyone 👍🏼 👍🏼
god shriza tom & jerry 😆 😆
thank god Aisha saved the girls bcoz they didn't go for shopping so they didn't know what to wear
samjun was getting angry that girls didn't come on time 😒 😒
shree was scared to see them angry poor guy
loll samjun got lost to see riya & Aisha 😉 😉
even shree was looking at liza in shocking state 😲 😲
god that shashank & his mom so proudy 😡 😡
shree was trying to control his laugh seeing riya's state 😆 😆
god shree said ariya r married 😲 😲
hell that aunty how dare she talk abt riya & parent 😡 😡
arjun try to control situation but riya blast on that aunty 👍🏼 👍🏼
shree & arjun was shocked to see riya's angry avtar bcoz they know riya never lost her cool
loll sakshi mix some potion in their drink 👏 👏
when they bathmouth abt other they got problem 🤣 🤣
god Sameer in trouble why he went alone?
hope arjun will come on time to save Sameer
continue soon
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CHAPTER 8 B

When Sameer was gaining consciousness they were searching his pockets when they found his badge in which is stated he is an ACP. They showed it to the other members

The first goon spoke: you should have killed Jagan when you had the chance but you didn't listen

Second goon: the neighbours saw me with him, main kaise marta isse wahan? (how could I kill him there), agar uski laash waha milti toh we would be arrested(if they would find the body there then)

Jagan kaka was held captive by the third while the fourth one was holding Sameer captive by holding his arms

The first goon told the the other goons: let's kill Jagan in the night so everyone will think he went to the village

The second goon: what about him? As he pointed to Sameer

The first goon: let's kill him too

Sameer who already gained consciousness but was still feeling weak told them: stop dreaming and surrender yourself. Tell me where mrs Kalki Desai is?

Jagan kaka: Kalki ma'm ko kya hua (what happened to her)

S: she is missing since she gave you money in the morning, maybe these people are hiding her for more money

The second goon: yeh humpe galat ilzaam phasha raha hain( he is putting allegations on us) let's kill him here

After saying this they dragged Sameer to the open place to kill him.
The two goons were holding Sameer's arms while the first goon took out his knife and the second goon was just watching.

The first goon was about to stab Sameer, he closed his eyes when suddenly the first goon shouted in pain and Sameer opened his eyes. He was shocked to see Arjun behind the goon and saw the goon was stabbed in the leg with his own knife by Arjun.Then Arjun flipped the first goon and threw him on the ground. The other goon tried to hit Arjun but Arjun was faster, he hit the goon so bad that he fell down with a thud. The other goons left Sameer and Sameer fell down on his knees because he was still feeling weak. The goon attacked Arjun but he hit them both on the stomach and they fell in Kasmir and Kanyakumari(*just kidding*)

Arjun then went to Sameer and made him stand on his feet and said: bas kya Sameer? (enough now)

Sameer answered: "nahi abhi bhi baki hai ( no there is still some left)Arjun" as he stopped a goon from hitting Arjun with his hand and he kicked the guy in the stomach and Arjun hit him in the face

They silently thanked each other but then Sameer asked: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?(what are you doing here)

Arjun just said: never leave someone alone "when going on a mission" you never know when the person needs help

Arjun just walked away from there and called the commissioner and asked to send back up to arrest the goons

Sameer just watched Arjun and said: kaash Arjun tum yeh baath khud samajh sakte ( if only you would understand this yourself)

Arjun came and said: Rathor, police will be here any moment.

S: good we need to take Jagan with us to Desai house he will tell us why he took money from mrs. Desai

Arjun just nodded.

After the goons got arrested they took Jagan kaka to the Desai house to know why Mrs. Desai gave him money

After a drive of a few minutes they reached the house. Sameer and Arjun thought of using the back door to go inside

S: I will call Mukesh and tell him to get us and ask him to assemble the team there

A: fine with me

Sameer called Mukesh and told him they were at the back door, Mukesh came to get them and asked them what happened.

A: not here let's go to the room and talk there

Mukesh nodded and took them to the room where the team members were waiting for them

The team was a little concerned about Sameer and Arjun because they were slightly injured but didn't show it, they decided to leave it for now and concentrate on the case while Sakshi was thinking"the way they are behaving seems like it will take a long time to complete my mission and don't even dare to answer me back M" while making faces

M: fine, meet you later

Jagan kaka started explaning why he took money from mrs. Desai

J: sir mujhe sach main nahi pata ki Kalki ma'm kaha hain( I really don't know where she is) unhone mujhe paise zaroor diye teh taki main gaon jage apna zameen ko wapas lene ke liye aur apne daughters ke shadi ke liye ( she did gave me money but only to go my village to get my land back and to get my daughters married) lekin mujhe pata nahi kaha woh gayab (but I don't know where she has dissapeared )

Jhanvi intervened and said: he is lying, baa inhe 1 lakhs kyun dengi, unhone khud inko naukari se nikala hai(why would baa give him 1 lakhs, she herself fired him)because he bought cheap and bad ingredients and took the money which was left

J: unhone aisa kaha zarroor tha aur woh bhi jaan thi hai ki woh jooth tha(she did say that and she knew that it was a lie)

A: unhone inko kaunsa tjees ki hera pheri karte howe pakra tha?

Jh: yesterday he bought ghatiya(bad quality) red chili powder from the market aur baa dekhte hi inka khel samajh gayi thi( and when baa saw it she knew what was going on)

Arjun gestured to Chotu to bring the chili powder box when Chotu brought it, he tasted it himself and said: nothing is wrong with the chili powder, achi quality ki hai, badhiya, theeka aur first class(good quality, good and spicy and is first class). Kalkiji would never make a mistake this means Jagan kaka is telling the truth

Deniv: phir baa ne inhe nikala kyun? then why did she fired him)

J: Rajeev bhai aur Pooja babhi ki vajase (because of)

P: yeh kya bekwas karrahe ho kaka?( what nonsense are you saying)

J: yeh dono baar baar mujhe 50 thousand ka karz jaad delata teh, par main lauta ta kaise, akhir meri tankha kitni thi. Jab maine Kalki ma'm se baat khi to unhone meri halat ko samjah aur who boli ki Jagan tum apne gaon wapas chale jao aur yeh lok tumhe aise nahi jane denge aur issi liye unhone mujhe naukri se nikal diya, mera karza maaf kardiya aur unhone bhi mujhe paise diye apne daughters ki shadi ke liye. Mere nephew ko bhagwaan kabhi maaf nahi karega, usse lalach agaya tha,sir woh mujhe maar kar paise harapne ki koshish ki, you both saved me sirs. I will never forget this (these two would always remind me of my debt of 50 thousand, how would I repay them, my earnings is not that much. When I spoke to Kalki ma'm she understood my plight and told me to leave for my village but these people will not let you leave that easily that's why she fired me, she forgave my debt and gave me money for my daughters marriage. God will never forgive my nephew, he became greedy, he tried to kill me and take the money)

A: that's ok you can leave

After Jagan kaka left Sameer asked the Desai's to leave them alone for a while so the team can discuss the case developments. When they left Arjun and Sameer asked everyone if they found clues in the time they were absent.

Sakshi spoke first: arre sirs aap log pehle apne injuries ko medicines lagaye warna jab aap bahar jajenge toh people will get suspicious (first put medicines on your injuries or when you go outside then) hai na (right) as she asked everyone.

Riya and the others nodded yes

Sameer wanted to say no but he knew Sakshi and everyone were right

S: fine, bring the first aid box and Rawte you also put medicine on your wounds it's not a request it's an order

A: fine"sir"

Sakshi just nodded and gestured Liza to bring the box. Sakshi thought of something and said: arre sirs aap log khud matt lagaye let Riya and Ayesha help you because if the medicines are not properly put on the wounds infection can happen ( don't do it by yourself)

Riya and Ayesha were about say no but one look of Sakshi puppy dog face they could'n say no( *it was just the beginning of blackmail by Sakshi*)

Liza brought the box, Sakshi took it and pushed it in Riya's hands and told her: Ri tum Arjun sir ko dawai lagawo aur Ayesh tum Rathor sir ko(you put medicine on Arjun and Ayesh you on Rathor)

Arjun was going to yell at Sakshi but controlled himself because he had to get forgiveness from Riya and Sameer didn't mind because he knew Sakshi was right

They sat on the sofa Riya started cleaning the knuckles which were a little scraped from bashing the goons while Ayesha was putting medicines on Sameer's head. Sakshi in her mind was saying"well Arjun sir I know you wanted to blast my head off but later you will thank me, kyun M?(right)

M: yeah right pata hai mujhe (I know that)

Sakshi said to M: oho angry? No worries abhi main mood theek karti hoon just wait and watch (I will lift your mood in a bit)

Riya was busy cleaning the wounds when suddenly Arjun hissed when she put the antiseptic, she blew on it to cool down the pain when their eyes suddenly met as if asking if it's better now while Arjun just nodded and Riya began putting the medicine on his wound

Ayesha was having trouble to put the medicine on Sameer's head because of her bangles and her clothes, she was saying in her head"yeh Sakshi ko main chorongie nahi, it's so difficult to put medicine on his head he isn't even trying to bend down a little Sadu kahin ke"(I am not going to spare Sakshi)(he is such a Sadu)

As if Sakshi heard her she said: arre Rathor sir aap thoda apne head bend kiyie taki Ayesha teekh se medicine lagapaye( bend your head a little so Ayesha can put medicine correctly)it's difficult to put medicine this way

Sameer was about say something when he saw everyone agreeing with Sakshi, he just nodded and to much surprise of Ayesha and everyone he bend down a little without complaining but silently saying in his head" damn it" and sometimes hissing in pain while Ayesha blew a little on the wound.

Choreeiza were astounded to see such a scene infront of them, Liza whispered in Sakshi's ear: wow Sakshi you are amazing, where were you all this time?

Sakshi whispered back: in the sky(naughtily)

L: what? (startled)

Sa: just kidding

When suddenly both Riya and Ayesha said done everyone came out of their reverie, Riya and Ayesha started laughing and said: same pinch.

S: hogaya (are you done)? Can we get back to the case? We are back to square one

Everyone nodded in agreement except for Arjun but the girls were angry that the two airhead ACPs didn't even say thank you even Sakshi was a little angry and Choree knew that they wouldn't say thank you to them

A: so tell us if there are any developments in the case in our absent?

Trying to control her anger Riya said: sir no one saw her leave nor they have seen her in the house that's for sure

A: And anything else?

Ay: sir I don't think she even wanted to leave the house because while we were helping Liza in the room I saw the jewellerie box open and they are quite expensive and if she wanted to leave she would have closed the box before going outside, she wouldn't left it open like this

S: but she left it open

Ch: sayad woh ek aath minute ke liye bahar gayee ho(maybe she went outside her room for a few minutes)

R: maybe it was an emergency

S: we thought the emergency was Jagan kaka but that's no more relevant

R: Mukesh aur Deniv ki intercast marriage huwi hai and it seems like Mrs Desai was not happy with her( their marriage was an intercast marriage)

S: Rajeev bhi ek financial problem se guzar raha tha aur paison ke leke he had a fight with her Mukesh told me that(was undergoing financial problem and for money)

Sh: sir there is one more family member in the house, Dhanesh kaka the brother of the husband of Mrs Desai, he is a drunkard he only drinks and stays in his room

L : and there is the younger brother, he doesn't have a say in the house according to the servants

Ay : aur uski wife Jhanvi she is pregnant and is currently the apple of Mrs Desai's eyes because it's the first grandchild. Pooja and Deniv both had miscarriages

S: call them back here I think we need to question them this time

After a while

R: I don't understand this why do you keep calling us? The guests are getting suspicious

S: I understand but we need to ask a few questions

A: did you have a fight with your mother?

R: this matter is between me and my mother, aapko inse kya lena dena (why are you inferring?)

A: humara lena dena aapki maa ke gayab hone se hai aur iss baat se, and according to the will you have a share in the property( we are here to investigate your mother's dissappearance that's why we are interfering)

R: Mukesh are they here to help us or accuse us?

P: for your kind information Mukesh bhai always argued with baa because of Deniv

M: why are you accusing me for? Bhai had a big loss in business and he wanted sell his shares but baa did not wanted to happen.

R: what are you saying Mukesh?

M: the truth, they need to find baa that's why they need to know the truth

R: I am your elder brother

M: when did you ever behave like one?

P: Mukesh bhai and Rajeev bhai

M: you keep quiet

R: don't infere

J: why are you always telling him to keep quiet and humiliate him? atleast don't do it infront of strangers

P: you don't start Jhanvi just because you are pregnant baa gives a lot of attention to you

Then everyone started argueing blaming each other for many reasons when suddenly Preeti came there and said: chup hojaye, you hid such a big news from me, can you guys never stay a day without fighting? Baa is missing but do you care bhai? Without baa I am not going through this engagement. Agar baa kuch huwa toh main aap sab ko kabhi maaf nahi karongi( if anything happens to baa then I will never forgive you)

Then Preeti ran from there and the family members ran to her to console her

Shree to Chotu: itna drama (so much drama)

C: I agree

A: if you want to separate water from soil then you have to shake it and when it's done then you can see the water clearly

S: I can't see nothing clearly Rawte and we don't have much time left

A: you will see Rathor

S: why are you guys still here? Get back to work

Everyone: yes sir

While they were going outside Riya went to get her mobile and Arjun quickly came to her and said: "thank you Riya for putting medicine on my injuries" and he quickly went outside. Riya was in shock mode when Sakshi came to her and shook her and asked: kya hua Ri, tum teekh ho( what happened Ri, are you ok)

R: haan I am ok but it seems like Arjun sir theekh nahi hai, he said thank you to me (isn't feeling fine)

Sa: wow you should be happy he said thank you this time, let's go now we will tell the friends later let's first solve the case

Riya nodded and went outside with Sakshi but she didn't notice she winked looking at the ceiling

In the hall

Some guests were asking Mukesh where Mrs. Desai is, Mukesh told them she will be joining very soon and that she was resting

Arjun was wandering around when he saw a child wearing huge sandals running around while the mother is trying to catch her, bumped into Riya. She held her while her mother came to get her. Riya asked the little child: whose sandals are they beta?

The little child answered: mumma ke hai

Riya asked her mother: didn't she wear her sandals from home itself?

The mother: ofcourse she did, nobody leaves the house without wearing shoes

The mother took her daughter with her while scolding her.

Arjun saw the whole scene then suddenly he went to Pooja and asked her to come with him

He took her to Mrs. Desai's room and asked her if anything was missing

P: kuch gayab nahi hai (nothing is missing)

A: are you sure? Not even the shoes?

P: yeah I am sure

A: does mrs. Desai has more shoes other than these?

P: I am telling you, everything is here. I know all her stuff and where it is

Arjun called the team again in the room

A: I need to tell you guys something

S: hurry up Rawte we haven't got all day

A: wahi toh kar raha hoon "sir"(that's wat I am doing)

Sameer controlled his anger by fisting his knuckles

A: so as I was saying if Mrs Desai planned to go outside she would have worn her shoes but when I checked her wardrobe none of her shoes are missing and her jewellerie box was open which had expensive jewelleries. No woman leaves such expensive jewelleries box open like that which means she was getting ready not to leave but was getting ready for the function. And the last one if somebody had kidnapped her people would have noticed it.

R: matlab( meaning)

A: matlab she is still in the house, just hope we will find her in nick of time I hope she is still alive

S: in the morning Mrs. Desai went to the mandir then she came back then uske baad kissine usse jaata huwe nahi dekha aur ghar mein nahi dekha ( after that no one saw her going outside nor in the house) then wat happened with her that she vanished from her own house

A: whatever happened to her Rathor it happened it the house and someone from the house is involved in her dissapereance and is trying to hide it. Yeh baat to zahir hain ki Mrs. Desai is not in her room, she must be around here somewhere and we need to find her very quickly(it is very clear that)

S: everyone you need check every nook and corner of the house, if you find any clue inform me quickly understood? And Shree tap every member cell phone if they get a suspicious call report to me immediately and remember every member is now a suspect

Everyone: yes sir

They separated to look for more clues and Shree was busy tapping the phones of the family members. Arjun was passing by Prafool's room when he saw him and Jhanvi in the room, he went to the room asked Prafool: what are you doing here? The function is going on downstairs

P: I am mainting the expenses account of the function, Rajeev bhai told me to do so

J: aap yahan? (you here)

A: I needed to ask you a few question. Did Mrs. Desai tell you where she was going or did she give some information like an appointment? Try to remember

J: nahi baa mujhe bina bataye kahi jati toh nahi hain(no baa never goes anywhere without telling me)

She sat down to eat her pickles then Arjun asked: do you suspect anyone? Is there someone who wants to hurt her?

J: there's no one who wants to hurt her, she loved everyone

A: but not Deniv

J: baa doesn't believe in intercast marriage but that doesn't make her bad

Scene shifts

Rathor was asking Deniv some questions

S: when did you saw Mrs. Desai?

D: in the morning, I went to ask her if she needed anything, she never went outside without informing and on the engagement day I highly doubt it. Do you think baa is in danger?

S: maybe, that's why we are asking questions

Scene shift to Shree where Arjun and Sameer are narrowing down the suspect list

A: we have ask direct questions to the persons who would have a motive to kill Mrs. Desai. Suspect no 1 Rajeev, motive financial crisis and Mrs Desai wouldn't let him do separate business, no 2 Deniv motive Mrs. Desai wasn't happy with her marriage with Mukesh and her orthodox thinking and rigid stand can also be a cause

S: Prafool bhi to hosaktha hai(it can also be Prafool). Mrs Desai didn't let him have any right in the house

A: so the suspect no 3 is Prafool and the fourth one is Dhanes kaka the drunkard

S: that's rule out, he is always drunk and because since we came here he hasn't even left his room

Shree was a silent spectator of this conversation when suddenly he saw someone was making a call outside

Sh: sir there has been an interesting talk with Rajeev's phone

The conversation went like this

A person on the phone: kaam hogaya( is the work done)

R: abhi nahi(not yet) because there's a function going on and lot's of guests then how can I

The person on the phone: if the job doesn't happen untill this evening then the deal is cancelled

The conversation ended...

S: Shree tell everyone to keep an eye on Rajeev and find out who the caller is

Sh: yes sir

Meanwhile downstairs Riya and the others where keeping an eye on Rajeev when she saw Shashank looking at her then he suddenly ran away from there(*we know why and where*) Riya was first startled but shrugged it of while Sakshi was smiling mischieviously

Riya saw her smiling and was about to go to her when she saw Rajeev going upstairs.

R( using the microphone): sir Rajeev is going upstairs

S: allright everyone follow him to see where he is going

Rajeev passed the corridor where Chotu was helping a few servants with some boxes

Ch: sir he is going to Mrs Desai's room

Rajeev looked around and went inside and started looking in a trunk for something and when he found it our 2 favorite ACPs made a dhamakedaar entry with their guns.

A: jhuke raho warna kal tumhari shokshaba tumhari photo ke neechein main public jhuke hogi( stay bended or else tomorrow at your funeral at your photo public will bend)Samjhee ya samjhaun

R(scared but still asking): kkk kya matlab hai aapka(what do you mean) this is my house and this my baa's room. How can you enter without permission

A(sarcasticcly): "kamaal hai after making you understand you didn't understand" and he grabbed the file what Rajeev was holding and read it

A: waise yeh pura ghar aapka toh hai nahi, downstairs there is a function going on, your mother is missing since morning and you are here looking at house papers( this whole house is not yours ) now do one thing now try to make me understand and I will try to understand

R: I.. I.. I had some work to do that's why I came here

S: don't lie Rajeev you will deeply regret it. We know that today you spoke to a private financer on the phone and you mortaged the house without anyone's knowledge am I right

R: lekin main aur kya karta I didn't have another option(what else should I have done) and baa didn't wanted to help in the business

S: that's why you disappeared her

R: who?

S(yelling): where's your mother Rajeev?

Raj: baa...? mujhe kya pata. I don't have anything to do with the disappearance of baa( I don't know)

S: kitni achi baat hai. right time pe she disappeared so you can do your dealing very easily( how good is this)(at the)

Raj:I admit that I have done wrong with mortaging the house but I don't have anything to do with baa's disappearance

A: because of your actions is making me become formal to informal, tell me where you were at 7:30-9:00 am?(loud voice)

Raj: I was with the caterer you can ask him

S: that we will do but until the case isn't solved and your mother is not found, you can not leave the house samjhe ...?

A: ya samjhaun?

Raj: samajhgaya(scared)

A: out

After Rajeev left Sameer contacted Riya

S: Riya ask the caterer if Rajeev was with him at 7:30-9:00 am

S (to Arjun): eventhough he was with the caterer he could have done this with someones help. Iss case main..(in this case)

A: bohot hi sawaal hain aur hume jawab dhoondne se milenge(there are lots of questions and we will find the answers by finding it) and for that we have to go to the root of this family. Mrs Desai hired a lawyer right?!

Scene shifts to the meeting with the lawyer

The lawyer: yes I handel the legal matters of this family

S: where there any changes in their legal matters?

The lawyer: well Mrs Desai did make some changes in her will

A: changes? Which kind of changes?

The lawyer: she transferred 70% of the property and business to Prafool's name, she was very happy with Jhanvi's pregnancy that's why she did it but that didn't go well with the other family members, there were contstant fights between them and in tne end she gave in and told me to make another will so everything can be equal again between the brothers

S: so did you make another will?

The lawyer: ji(yes) I did make another will lekin abhi tak Kalkiji nai signature nahi kiye(but till now Mrs. Desai didn't sign it) she wanted it to handel this after the engagement

S: this means Prafool is still the owner of 70%

The lawyer: yes just untill Mrs. Desai doesn't sign the new will

A: we need to talk to Prafool

Scene shifts

P: I don't understand ACP? Isse mera kya lena dena(what do I to do with this)

S: after your mother disappearance there's nobody to sign the new will that means you are still the owner of most of the property

A: waise bhi you must be tired of working beneath your brothers , why would you want to go back when you got such a good opportunity

J: dekhiye you can not blame my husband just like that

S: that we will find out after full investigating

Then Arjun and Sameer left from there

Scene shift to Shree

Shree was busy tracking while eating which Riya brought for him when suddenly he saw that Mrs. Desai phone was on

He informed everyone that the phone was on of Mrs. Desai

S: find out the location Shree

Sh: yes sir

Ten minutes later

Sh: sir the phone is inside the house

S: everyone spread around the house and Shree keep calling if it rings you will hear it if it's on vibrate it will flash hurry up

Everyone including the ACPs and Sakshi were looking for the phone when Chotu heared a ring tone of a mobile

Ch(on the microphone): sir I hear a mobile ringing in Dhanes kaka's room

S: you go to room fast

Ch: yes sir

S: Shree cut the call

Shree cut the call and said: kaat diya sir(cut it)

Ch: sir awaaz ban hogayi (it stopped ringing)

S: Shree call again

Shree called again and Chotu heard it again

Ch: sir it's ringing again

S: Chotu try to go in the room without making any noise we will be there shortly

Chotu broke the lock very quietly and went inside and he started looking around when he saw the mobile lying on the bed

Ch: Shree mobile mil gaya( found the mobile)

He started searching for clues, looked inside the closet then he heard a door creaking, he took out his gun and went to the door and saw that Dhanes kaka was unconscious lying on the bathroom floor

He tried waking him up but with no success, Sameer came in and after him Arjun and the rest followed after him

Ch: sir he is unconscious

S: "Dhanes kaka wake up" Sameer also tried to wake him by shaking him

Arjun scanned the whole room and saw empty bottles of alcohol lying around the room

Arjun saw Sameer trying to wake up Dhanes but he wasn't getting up so he went to the faucet, took water in a glass and threw it on Dhanes and got instant reaction while the team was amused by Arjun's tactic

Dhanes kaka woke up starteld and started to look around to where he was

A: sharabhi hilane se nahi utha, paani phekne se utha hai( you can never wake a drunkard by shaking him but only by throwing water on him)

Sameer shook his head and told Chotu to put Dhanes kaka on the bed and started interrogate him

S: yeh mobile yahan kaise aaya(how did this mobile end up here)

D k: I don't know

S: when did you last meet Mrs. Desai?

D k: tum kaun ho bhai aur mere ghar main kyun sawaal puchreho?(who are you and why are asking me question in my own house)

S: police and if you don't answer my questions properly then I will arrest you take you away infront of the guests for kidnapping, not having permit for drinking and keeping alcohol and for interfering in our work

D k ( a little scared): kidnapping?

S: answer the question. When did you last meet Mrs. Desai?

D k: kal raat ko dekha tha in her room (yesterday night I saw her)

S: raat ko? Kyun? (in the night)(why)

D k: I wanted money for my booze so I had to ask her because all the money she keeps it with her hm(scoffing at the last part) she wants that everyone must beg infront of her for money even her sons. Yesterday she even threathened Deniv to leave Mukesh and she would get the money she wanted but Deniv denied and told her she loved Mukesh not his money but they stopped talking after they saw me. Deniv left from there and I asked Kalki money but she refused then I threatened her that I will tell Mukesh she threatened Deniv after that she gave me money and I got my booze and I drank it all

A: after that?

D k: after that I went to the bathroom and I slipped and fell, that's what I think seeing that I am hurt. And if you want to ask me more questions then come back when I am awake

And before anyone blinked he was unconscious again

Sa: arre yeh phir behos hogaya (he again lost his consciousness)

R: I highly doubt that he has anything to do with Mrs. Desai's dissappearence

S: how can you say that Riya?

Ay: sir he is not even in his senses, he can't even walk straight

A: and his watch broke and is pointed at six and it's not even six yet that means he fell unconscious at six in the morning

Ch: and Mrs. Desai's mobile abhi kuch der pehle hi on huwa hai (just got on)

A: aur yeh khud on toh hai nahi mobile kya on karega and if the mobile was ringing he could have turned it off (and he is not even half alive how can he even turn on the mobile)

Ch: aur sir when I came in I had to break the lock, it was locked

S: I think your theories are right that means only the person with duplicate keys can do it, the person came put the mobile here and went away

Scene Shifts

S: Rajeev, in this house who has duplicate keys?

R: duplicate key are always with baa. Kyun, kya huwa?(why, what happened)

S: no reason

R: "then excuse me for a while" he left from there

S: instead of solving the case the case is getting complicated

A: it will get solved Rathor, jurm karne wala shana nahi dershana hota hai aur phasta dershana hi hai

Meanwhile downstairs

Shree and Chotu were waiting for their seniors for further notifications when a girl came and gave a note to Shree and went away

Sh: dekha girls admire me Chotu since collage I used to get a lot of letters, I used to be a playboy

Ch( rolling his eyes): pehle read the note Shree I mean playboy Shree

Sh(raising his collar and read the note): please tell your body builder friend I like him the name is Lalita and number is 987...

Sh:it's for you, waise bhi she is not my type (disappointed)

Shree gave the note to Chotu but Chotu crushed it

Sh(shockingly): yeh tu kya kar raha hai(what are you doing) kitna muskilo se ek love letter milta hai aur tu(it's so hard to get a love teller and you...)

Ch: mujhe iski koi zarroorat nahi(I don't need this) I am already commited

The girls came there

Sa: commited? What is commited?

R(shocked): tume commited ka matlab nai pata?( you don't know the meaning of commited?

Sakshi nodded no.

L: are you feeling well? You are a journalist and you don't know the meaning of commited?

Sa: what does it have to do with my job? I know the meaning but why is Chotu saying he is commited?

Ay: oh god Sakshi he means he is already in love with someone

Sa: o with whom?

Ayizaya: his 11:30 wali aur kaun?(who else)

Sa: achcha like that

Everyone: like that (they started laughing watching Chotu blush)

Sameer called them on the mic they stopped laughing while Sakshi was amused again by the way they were scared of their boss

S: guys bring Deniv here we have to ask her few questions

L: yes sir

Riya went to Deniv and said: aap se kuch baat karna hai(we need to talk to you)

Scene shift

S: why didn't you tell us that the night before the engagement you and Mrs. Desai had an argument?

D: I didn't tell you because I didn't wanted to create differences between mother and son

A: you can go

After Deniv left

S: damn it time is running out and we don't have a lead


so another chapter is up

hope you guys like it, i like action movies but writing action scenes is still a little though for me so please forgive me if there is any mistake

enjoy



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