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Posted: 18 years ago
Okeay guys here is my update,
RECAP: Moved to CANADA…

It was a beautiful September morning, the window was open, he could here the next door neighbors mowing there lawn, he went out on his bedroom balcony, with only his "Addidas" shorts on, and a dog tag hanging around his neck…he hated the smell of cute grass…it made his nose feel funny…he went and shut the window, and he heard his neighbor…wow really liked him…Ms. Smith…an old 65 year old…
Smith: Good morning Pram (she couldn't pronounce his name…it REALLY annoyed him!)
Prem opened the door, and yelled: Morning Aunty!
She frowned at the word aunty…
Smith: your up early..
Prem: not for long…kids are getting up soon- today's the first day of school.
Smith: I'm sure they'll love it…
Prem: yeah they will
Mukti was tired she could hear prem yelling…
Mukti: PREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He laughed and shrugged at Ms. Smith…
Prem: Got to leave now, wife's awake!
Mukti: prem, what is wrong with you! You're too loud!!!!! I swear you keep this up; I'm going to sleep in the guest room!
Prem: NOOOO…then I'll miss your cute snoring
First she blushed then thought for a moment…
Mukti: HEY! I do not snore!
Prem: your asleep, how would you know?
Mukti: well…umm…your asleep too…how would you know? And if you're awake…what are you doing then?
Prem: looking at you!
Mukti: once a kid…always a kid
Prem: HEYYYYYYYY! That's mean!
Then he thought about it…and realized she was right….and then frowned…
Mukti: okeay, fine you're also a very adorable kid
Prem: ewwwwwww no, I'm a hot husband now….
Mukti: I swear by god prem, shut up, or I'll throw this lamp at you…I need to go to sleep…and drop Tina off…
Prem: the school is a street down from here jaan- she can walk…
Mukti: NO! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PREM!!!!!!!!! WHAT IF SOMETHING HAPPENS TO HER!!!!!!!!
Prem realized he shouldn't have said that…mukti was really paranoid about the kids safety…
Prem: okeay, jaan relax…I'll drop Tinoo off
He kissed her forehead as she went back to sleep….

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First into Jai's room he walked in, he saw jai all set and ready, with a nice "Addidas" orange colored shirt and jeans, he had gelled hair, and he had his "J" pendent….
Prem: all set and ready little buddy?
Jai: Dad, don't call me "little buddy" I'm not little…
Prem: nope, your still little, always will be….
Jai: Errrrrrr…go bother piya
Prem: okeay, I'll bug you later…plus I have to see what that girl is wearing- you cant trust that girl!
Jai laughed as his father sighed…

He opened the door to Piya's room, it looked like rhino's had rampaged through there…for once her room was a mess…
Prem: when did you have the part princess, and how come I wasn't invited?
He heard a laughing noise come out of the washroom, as she stepped out in a mini skirt and a pink tang top….his jaw dropped open…
Prem: pi….pi…piya……
Piya: DAD!!!!!!!!!!!
He jolted up in surprise and confusion
Prem: huh?
Piya: PUT ON A SHIRT!
Prem: huh…why? Am I fat?
Piya laughed: No, Disha (hehehe I included you Disha!) is coming over!
Prem: your point being?
Piya: dad….ummm…how do I say this….you look like my brother…..and if…she starts…umm staring…or in our generation "checking you out" then I will die of embarrassment
Prem was shout to say "how is that possible" but then laughed…and was about to walk away, when he realized something..
Prem: princess..
Piya: yeah dad?
Prem: change out of that thing right now?
Piya: yeah, I was thinking of wearing the blue tang top- your right- I should…
Prem shot a angry look…
Prem: PIYA! I DO NOT WANT HULLAGINS DRULLING ALL OVER YOU!!!!!! CHANGE OUT OF THAT THING RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!
Piya frowned and walked into her closet and took out a pair of caprice...
Piya: these okeay?
Prem: below your knee's then there fine with me
Jai was trying to catch a breath, he couldn't stop laughing, and then piya threw a book at him
Piya: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LAUGHING AT!!!!!!!!!!! GET LOSTTTTTTT! NOW!!!!!!!!!!
Prem: Jai, girls her age can get very catty, stay away, and you'll live to get married…
Mukti laughed when she heard that, and came down to the room…
Mukti: Prem…
Prem: AH! Soo the queen of the kingdom is up!
Mukti: prem, you of all people shouldn't be saying 'stay away from girls' jai"…
Prem: why?
Mukti: because you were always with an entourage of girls- better yet 'groupies'
Piya: EWWWWWWWWWWW! DAD!!!!!!!!!!
Prem laughed and walked of to Riya's room.

Prem: BOXER!!!!!!! Are you here?
She laughed and came out with black caprice and a white tang top…
Riya: good morning dad!
Prem: good morning, now, are you ready?
Riya: yup, piya di took out my cloths for me…
Prem: piya- chose – your cloths?
Riya: yeah…
Prem: and are the ones you're wearing the ones she chose?
Riya: nope, she chose I dress; I looked like a frog in it- so I changed…
Prem: Riya…
Riya: yes?
Prem: remember- what ever piya chooses for you when it comes to cloths- you look like a frog- so don't wear it…
Riya laughed and walked off…
Prem: REMEMBER, my suggestion!

The door bell rang, and Jai ran to open the door, it was Tina…
Jai: what the hell are you doing outside?
Tina: Jackie ran outside!!!!!!!!
Jai: my god!!!!!!!! PIYA!!!!!!!!!!!! TAKE CARE OF YOUR DOG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Piya walked downstairs, and picked up this cute little dog (I gave the picture, because I don't know the bread!)…



Piya: jai, stop being such a jerk, be nice to Jackie!
Tina: di, take care of him- he's your dog- but he follows me!!!!!!!!! He ran outside, I had to chase him around the yard…god he is fast!
Piya: okeay, sorry Tina, and thanks
Tina: no problem, I'll go change…

She came out 10 minutes later in caprices and a blue tang top- Riya had put it out.
Kids: DAD HURRIES UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem came out, in a pink polo shirt, jeans, and his Louis Vutteon pendent- looking great as per usual, as he seated everyone in the car, and noticed Jackie he smiled..
Prem: morning little guy, go inside, Mukti's there- by Jackie! Piya I hope you weren't planning on taking him to school
Piya: no….
Prem: good. Where's your friend "Disha" dose she need a ride?
Piya: no, she goes to a private school; she's coming after school with her sister Nishi.
Prem: okeay.
Prem: BYE BASNATI!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR VEERU LOVES YOU!!!!!!!!!
Kids: DAD!!!!!!!!!! Let's go!!!!!!!
Prem sat in and turned back…
Prem: come on, can't a married fellow romance his wife?
They laughed…
TO BE CONTINUED!

Hope you liked
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Thanks
Love
Reeha

PS: i really dont know what happend to the rest of the pages....was it always like this or was i just hallucinating? 😕 😆
Edited by reeha...k - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Prem: Jai, girls her age can get very catty, stay away, and you'll live to get married…
Prem: remember- what ever piya chooses for you when it comes to cloths- you look like a frog- so don't wear it…
Prem: come on, can't a married fellow romance his wife?
😆
YAY 😛 😛 😛 i'm the first one!!!!! those three lines made me laugh so hard! i'm sooo happy that u updated (though i kinda pestered you into it. 😆 )
keep up the awesome work. i LOVE❤️❤️ ur fanfic!!!

and i don't think u were hallucinating, just a minute ago there were 111 pages....... so either someone got rid of some comments or something... or u and i must be taking the same kind of drugs. 😉 j/k 😆😆

Edited by iluvmanoj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 😆 i'm glad that they made you laugh...it took me forever to think of them 😃 and yes alexandra (i hope i spelt that right!)....you did prusued me to post it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

u spelt it right... 😊 good job, now if you could spell everything else good that'd be awesome! 😆 j/k..... i'm in such a good mood now that u updated!

*ps: jackie is so cute!*

Edited by iluvmanoj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 😆 dont worry i know my spelling stinks!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 my mom says she's suprised i can actually spell my name 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 😆 oh reeha.... ur so funny.... but i wasn't serious.... though u could be using spell check 😕 ...
j/k 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
suprisingly...i do man- but i guess my mistakes are so bad- the computer cant even bother to try anymore 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆
that happens to everyone.... i was so embarrassed, i handed in an essay, and then it was all red 😕 ... the spell check didn't work very well for me... *sigh*

but at least we can still understand what u r trying to say... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
thnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxx to Reeehhaaaaa
Yo thnx for using my name.....i am soo happpy....yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol...ilove it....Prem is always going to be kiddddiiiiiee...hahahah...LOL...love it love it..!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
reeha dude its so good, the only thing thats making me smile at the moment!!

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