a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 29

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

aswom updatee

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Awesome update👏

loved it❤️

sharon is so sad😭

she thinks swayam loves radhika😲

bt she is wrong😊

he loves her😃

n he finally said it😃

yes!!yes!!!😃

hope he said i love u 2 her in a lover way n nt bst frnd way😡

will be eagerly waiting fr d next update😊

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi aka ur diii🤣

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

gosh this was an emotional update alas as expected Sharon doing mahanta cause this is so called loved u didn't think abt u r self finally swayam realised importance of Sharon in his life hey that was a sweet shock he finally said ilu yeee I'm happpy now update soon

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Diduuu
M gonna kill u!!!
Urghhh
No comments! 😡

Originally posted by: nature2

Awesome update👏

Originally posted by: nature2

Awesome update👏

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

heyy u updted
which is a very pleasant surprise
i wanted to read ur update n u as ususal
never fail to live up to my expectations
whtr it be sharon's guilt n her love for him
her dialogues whr emotional
it was heart touching to see her so selfless 
she justified tis saying

''Love is always patient and kind. It is never jealous.

 Love is never boastful or conceited.

 It is never rude or selfish.

It is always ready to excuse, to trust,

to hope, and to endure whatever comes."

an applause to u for sketching a character like tis 

u made her swayam's sharon today

the very prose is so beautiful

that i m numb after reading it

''.because her existence in his life
was an adjective and he her noun...
she was the imprint and he , her nostalgia...
 His existence was futile without her presence...
she was the resonance in his
otherwise non-resonating life.''

This is beautiful writing.
 It wasn't just the writing
 that was perfectly evocative,
it was the subject

last of all swayam said those words to her
it definitely made my day 😳
i m so excited to knoe wat sharon's reaction
is gonna be 🤪
all in all a very nice beautiful update

u r definitely a writer
who writes with skill,
showing intelligence, surprise,
 and command of language
hope tat u give us update of tat other ff too
waiting for ur updates

-rosy

Originally posted by: ritz15

awesome update

dii i have to tell u this that u r an exceptional writer

the way u showed swayam's pain was heart wrenching

nd sharon loves him so much ki she was ready to lose him

nd finally the best part swayam confessed that he loves her bt u r so bad u left it on a cliffhanger

ab u need to update vry fast

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

omggg...  awsm update...  finally he said it. 

plz update soon... 

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Damn the chap :o so emotional 

And I never imagined Swayam would cobfess his love for Sharon before she herself :o

And when he realized it 

Guess the fear of losing Sharon was enough to make realization hit him 

U better update soon for hanging it in mid air 

Updateee