(ON HOLD)Vidarth FF: Sinner and the Saint .. Imp Note Page 67 - Page 3

Originally posted by: zahranaseem

Absolutely , I believe if u r good from inside it naturally shows the way u act with others...and the main prob of vidhushi is the way she deal other people...she is took good for the person she loves...(parth) but she always create trouble for others and parth is exactly the opposite...he likes helping his friends I guess that's wat make parth pissed off .. he doesn't like vidhushi much!!! Even I had no interest in parth and vidhushi until I read us is!! I have heard that vidhushi will b paired with samir in up coming track...lol

Originally posted by: Moony87

Yeahh.. again an unrealistic pairing.. Real life mein aisa nahi hota.. Oh thanks.. M glad my OS could make you like them a bit.. Yeah read that.. LOL .. I guess that's a jealousy track for Parth.. 😆😆.. Sameer will play "Parth" in Vidarth.. 😆.. Well seriously if they pair them up.. That'll be the death of me.. I like vidushi for her intensity for Parth.. She love him exactly the way I would want a female lead to be.. Passionate, Intense.. completely into the guy.. 😳😳😳

Btw.. Have you read my FF.. The Sanyals' Salvation ?

Originally posted by: zahranaseem

Yah I read ...and I like the part where randhir explain the 6 stroke engine to Sanyukta ...the intensity was ufff!!!!, I use to admire the way u write before but today u just left me wid no words...u actually make readers imagine the actual situation through ur wrriting and that is a bigggv thing!! And yah coming back to the show I dunt know wat they want...v were so much in to sandhirbut now it will take ages for them to fall in love again..and it took us time to accept viduh and parth as a couple but they ruined it all...dam u CVC!!!

Originally posted by: Moony87

Hehe thank you.. 😳.. Yeah when I write I want readers to visualize. Yeah even i love that chapter.. 😆😉😉. About the show.. they not only ruined the show.. mere mind ko bhi block kar diya.. Kuchh soojh hi nahi raha what to write now.. bas Gaaliaan aa rahi hain dimaag mein... Sandhir ko kuchh zyaada hi explore kar diye ye log.. isliye socha Vidarth par likh dein.. Viewer tension ke maamlein mein sabse chilled out couple hai.. 😆

Originally posted by: zahranaseem

Hahaha so true!!! An viewers apni frustrations ahan nikalen??? Some times I really feel k u people r writing stories so well!! They should take some ideas from the form ...in k dimagh in Jo fabulous twist Maya busy sy t way better hamary apny writers h...lol

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

OMG Chandni this is good...wait this is GREAT, fantabulous, hot and little dark. I wanted to read something like this for a while. You are powerful writer sweetee. You have a distinct style of writing which I crave and adore.

Vidushi always fascinates me for the sheer shades present in her character. I really love her boldness, strength, wicked way of getting things done but overpower the mighty Parth that too physically is something only she can manage. And Parth is literally molested by her!!! I gulped at the thought of it. It must be steamy and hot. Poor Parth. At Vidushi's mercy must be beyond nightmare for him.

But the agonizing ending (pun intended) for Parth is what really coming for him in future.I liked the way you etched Vidushi's character. You wrote through her head and heart to give soul to this VidArth. LOVED it.

P.S I liked your earlier profile name more.That has some mysticism attached.

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">*swaying to the song A lot like Love by Barrie Gledden*</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">*eyes widening on seeing a Vidarth OS*</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">Aha!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">Buddy, that was hot and intense! 🤣 God damn! Brilliant description and the way Vidushi kissed him and let go of Parth as soon as his hands reached to touch her was like a punch to the gut (his gut, of course!) Okay, well, maybe mine too... 🤣 But, that was so damn good! 🤣 Awesome work!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">You described her 'Hell' to the T, because it is so true and what she actually goes through, every single day.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">It's time for Parth to suffer now. And yes, Vidushi shouldn't ever be Arpita, and Parth should get it in his head that Vidushi will definitely not be Arpita, because both of them are way too different and unique in their own ways. And he should stop comparing the two. But sometimes, people just can't help it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">I am glad Vidushi realised that she is her own person and doesn't need to be like anyone to please someone. She is stubborn and has different means of getting jobs done, but she does have a heart of gold. A heart that beats for Parth here.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">You know, when it comes to situations where people scold someone to be like someone else, almost every time, the person can only take so much of being compared to someone else, and being told to be like them. And that is exactly what's happening to Vidushi here.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006699">Annie</font>

Originally posted by: andy1245

superb :-)