(ON HOLD)Vidarth FF: Sinner and the Saint .. Imp Note Page 67 - Page 2

Originally posted by: rajasree

VERY NICE OS I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF YOUR STUFF. KEEEP WRITING

Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..

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First of all,I love you for writing something what I wanted to read so desperately from the past couple of days,where Parth will be at Vidushi's mercy.You made that happen.Thank you.

Now the OS.

"Again that shaking. God knows, what those dumb-ass doctors are doing. Free of cost became a criminal. Thank goodness for the assistant job, warna degree ki jagah haath mein Qaidi waali slate lekar photos khinchti meri. Gave them so much money. Ab kya Power of Attorney chaahiye for correct diagnosis."

Can I say that I was actually laughing at Vidushi's monologue.You captured her thinking process so aptly.😆 That's so her!!

LOL... I myself laughed at the "Power Of Attorney" line..

"Yeah right, Keep looking at her. May be she'll help". She closed her eyes and slapped herself for such a disgusting jealousy pang.

Poor girl.

Yeah.. Show mein again it's not clear whether she knows about Arpita or not.. Kyunki as usual sab kuch Sirf Sanyukta ko hi pata hai..

"Hell??.. You don't even know an ounce of what a f**king hell is. Your girlfriend... She is in HEAVEN... right? But you, you just THINK that your life is a hell. You don't know what an actual hell is Parth. I know it." She said gazing hungrily at his lips.

Oh god!! this part was intense!! Damn Parth Kashyup!! I hope from next time you will think twice before you say something in front of her!!😆

Hehe.. yeah .. That was my way of venting out frustration regarding PAPITA.. 😆

Panting heavily, she grabbed his collar "Good that you never button up your shirt. Saved a lotta mess." Before he could comprehend what she meant, she attacked his chest with wolf bites. His lips parted and his wrist twisted to be free. "Aaah" he growled as she licked the hollow of his neck. Licking all the way upto his chin, she bit it. "Vids pleaseee.. You have to open my hands.. Please"

Keep begging buddy!! You are at her mercy now!!😈😈

Oh yeahh... 😆😆

I keep what's mine.

Like a boss!!!👍🏼

Like VIDUSHI.. 😆😆

THAT... THAT IS HELL.. YOU WANT SOMETHING, RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU, BUT YOU CAN'T GET IT. YOU GO NEAR BUT GET PUSHED AWAY.." She yelled in a choked voice. "Now, We have something in COMMON" .. She said with arrogance.

That's our girl!!👏

FIRE BRAND SHE IS

With that she stomped out of the lab, leaving behind a craving-for-more and baffled Parth.

What happened Parth jee?? cat got your tongue??😆


I am gonna read it again and again!! And I am gonna enjoy parth's misery just like a perfect sadist!!!😈🤬😈

Such a true Vidarth Fan.. 😆

Originally posted by: a2zahid

that was very good . keep it up

Originally posted by: Param_love

Lovely OS

keep it up

Thanks for pm

Love

Bushra

Originally posted by: zahranaseem

Okie now!!! Am not a fan of party and vidushi am more into sandhir...but I must say u nailed it...love every word of it...even though it was ur first os...but still it is written so beautifully ...amazing work...loved the part when vidushi showed him the real hell!!! Ufff u killed it yar !!!! Hats off!!! Hope to get some more from ur side!!! Love!!

Originally posted by: Moony87

😳😳.. Thank you.. Initially I was also not their fan, but then Vidushi forced me to be their fan.. She loves him.. Like crazily.. And Parth hates her . Like Crazily.. 😆😆😆.. And that made me ship them .. They are FIRE.. Thank you so much for liking the OS to this extent.. 😳😳 .. Well we don't know Vidushi's real problems .. but yeah Parth's hatred affects her badly... Quite evident in the show.. 😉😉

Sure will try to write more as soon as something excites me in SH.. 😊