(ON HOLD)Vidarth FF: Sinner and the Saint .. Imp Note Page 67 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

*swaying to the song A lot like Love by Barrie Gledden*

*eyes widening on seeing a Vidarth OS*
Aha!

Buddy, that was hot and intense! 🤣 God damn! Brilliant description and the way Vidushi kissed him and let go of Parth as soon as his hands reached to touch her was like a punch to the gut (his gut, of course!) Okay, well, maybe mine too... 🤣 But, that was so damn good! 🤣 Awesome work!
You described her 'Hell' to the T, because it is so true and what she actually goes through, every single day.
It's time for Parth to suffer now. And yes, Vidushi shouldn't ever be Arpita, and Parth should get it in his head that Vidushi will definitely not be Arpita, because both of them are way too different and unique in their own ways. And he should stop comparing the two. But sometimes, people just can't help it.

I am glad Vidushi realised that she is her own person and doesn't need to be like anyone to please someone. She is stubborn and has different means of getting jobs done, but she does have a heart of gold. A heart that beats for Parth here.

You know, when it comes to situations where people scold someone to be like someone else, almost every time, the person can only take so much of being compared to someone else, and being told to be like them. And that is exactly what's happening to Vidushi here.

Annie


Am so happy that my aim to write this OS is somewhat succeeded .👏👏. SO happy that you connected with Vidushi.. 😳😳 ... She ,for me, is the darker version of Randhir.. Randhir if stays aloof to fight his demons.. Vidushi plays dirty to hide her demons.. 😭😭 ..

Yeah.. I am so waiting for Parth to get affected by her in a restless way. 😳😳 .. I so.. so .. loved it myself when I wrote that pushing away portion.. 😆😆 .. Yep , his hatred is her living HELL.. Am so happy that she is nowhere like Arpita.. that girl got on my nerves.. PAPITA were a diabetic couple... 😆😆😆

Yeah.. whenever he says learn form Sanyukta.. I am like.. 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes


True.. Parth always tells Vidushi to learn from Sanyu .
Lol. Yes, learn from Sanyu. Learn to watch the 'love' of your life get beaten up.
Vidushi should learn from Sanyu.. Totally

But.
Annie I agree with everything!


LOL .. So damn agree with you ASH.. Its an insult to anyone to tell them to learn from Sanyukta.. Vids is bitchy, but us bitchiness mein bhi class hai.. 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes


True.. Parth always tells Vidushi to learn from Sanyu .
Lol. Yes, learn from Sanyu. Learn to watch the 'love' of your life get beaten up.
Vidushi should learn from Sanyu.. Totally

But.
Annie I agree with everything!


First of all, when'll you hug me back?! 🤣

🤣 Oh, you got me all cracking up here, Ashu! 🤣 🤣 That girl is seriously mad now! 🤣 Now I just want her to get one of the biggest shocks she could get in her life to make her come back to her senses! 🤣 The girl is getting on my nerves right now, by being all Sati Savitri! I don't dislike or hate the part where she cares for her family, but she is slowly losing the respect that all people had for her fighter spirit and her passion for engineering which is slowly being snuffed out.

She was supposed to still fight and find another way to get out of this mess.. Well, she has done it once, she could've done it again. I mean the second I heard her father saying to listen carefully to what her beauticians say and not apply anything on her face without permission 🤣 I was like that could've been such an awesome thing to do again! 🤣
And her family... I dislike her family very much now. Maybe Sanyu's respect and love for her father stopped her from stopping him from burning all her books. *nodding to myself*
*sigh* So complicated, just like reality... 🤣

And damn, Vidushi should know by now that trying to get Sanyukta to fall, is like pulling herself down deeper and deeper! 🤣 Girl, you a unique chick, although, sometimes I feel like murdering her, but she does something that makes me go all 'aww' on her! 🤣 Well, not really the 'aww', but still! 🤣
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


First of all, when'll you hug me back?! 🤣

🤣 Oh, you got me all cracking up here, Ashu! 🤣 🤣 That girl is seriously mad now! 🤣 Now I just want her to get one of the biggest shocks she could get in her life to make her come back to her senses! 🤣 The girl is getting on my nerves right now, by being all Sati Savitri! I don't dislike or hate the part where she cares for her family, but she is slowly losing the respect that all people had for her fighter spirit and her passion for engineering which is slowly being snuffed out.

She was supposed to still fight and find another way to get out of this mess.. Well, she has done it once, she could've done it again. I mean the second I heard her father saying to listen carefully to what her beauticians say and not apply anything on her face without permission 🤣 I was like that could've been such an awesome thing to do again! 🤣
And her family... I dislike her family very much now. Maybe Sanyu's respect and love for her father stopped her from stopping him from burning all her books. *nodding to myself*
*sigh* So complicated, just like reality... 🤣

And damn, Vidushi should know by now that trying to get Sanyukta to fall, is like pulling herself down deeper and deeper! 🤣 Girl, you a unique chick, although, sometimes I feel like murdering her, but she does something that makes me go all 'aww' on her! 🤣 Well, not really the 'aww', but still! 🤣


So true.. Last time she had applied that extra time bleach.. usi ka asar ho gaya hai us 2gm ke bhoonse par which she has in her skull.. Saare ideas whitewash ho gaye lagta hai.. 🤣🤣

Bhai that books burning to reminded me of 70s ki movie.. 😆😆.. Sataayi hui heroine and krooor pita.. 😆😆😆

Vidushi.. Yeahh.. she is a BABE.. 😳😳 .. Waste kar rahi hai for apni importance by giving so much importance to Sanyunkta.. jiske paas aisi family ho, Aisa Vacuum ho skull mein, Aur SAMEER ho.. use Vids ki kya zaroorat.. 😆😆😆

She should just keep messing around with Parth buoyy.. 😆😆😆.. Her scenes with Parth make me go.. "Wooo.. Wooo" 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Moony87


Am so happy that my aim to write this OS is somewhat succeeded .👏👏. SO happy that you connected with Vidushi.. 😳😳 ... She ,for me, is the darker version of Randhir.. Randhir if stays aloof to fight his demons.. Vidushi plays dirty to hide her demons.. 😭😭 ..

Yeah.. I am so waiting for Parth to get affected by her in a restless way. 😳😳 .. I so.. so .. loved it myself when I wrote that pushing away portion.. 😆😆 .. Yep , his hatred is her living HELL.. Am so happy that she is nowhere like Arpita.. that girl got on my nerves.. PAPITA were a diabetic couple... 😆😆😆

Yeah.. whenever he says learn form Sanyukta.. I am like.. 🤣🤣🤣🤣


We all connect with Vidushi in many ways that people can count! 😛 Actually we connect with all the characters, be it any situation or emotions.. We all have a little Randhir, Sanyukta, Vidushi, Parth, Kaustuki, YoYo, Jiggy and Sahil!

Aha! Darker version of Randhir eh? I like it! 🤣 Classy actually, really. It sounds better too! 😉
Yeah, Randhir does tend to pull away from people and also from himself, when it comes to personal life and emotions. But Vidushi is like a woman who loves to challenge the devil, and defy every single rule set out in the game she plays. For her it's war, and she can win it. There her determination is commendable, but engineering not so much, according to her. If she puts in more effort into her studies, rather than snooping around, she may top again and actually gain good knowledge and be self-satisfied, 'cause she put in effort to be there! 🤣

OH MI GAWD!!! PAPITA?! 🤣 🤣 🤣 What the?! I had to read thrice to understand what you meant here! 🤣 Ahahahahahahaha... Yup, Diabetes all the way! Spice nahi thha! But, that flashback of Arpita tying a blindfold on Parth's eyes was kinda naughty. And boy, did Ankit look hot in those shorts! 🤣 Wish, Vidushi gets to do something naughtier with him! 🤣
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


First of all, when'll you hug me back?! 🤣

🤣 Oh, you got me all cracking up here, Ashu! 🤣 🤣 That girl is seriously mad now! 🤣 Now I just want her to get one of the biggest shocks she could get in her life to make her come back to her senses! 🤣 The girl is getting on my nerves right now, by being all Sati Savitri! I don't dislike or hate the part where she cares for her family, but she is slowly losing the respect that all people had for her fighter spirit and her passion for engineering which is slowly being snuffed out.

She was supposed to still fight and find another way to get out of this mess.. Well, she has done it once, she could've done it again. I mean the second I heard her father saying to listen carefully to what her beauticians say and not apply anything on her face without permission 🤣 I was like that could've been such an awesome thing to do again! 🤣
And her family... I dislike her family very much now. Maybe Sanyu's respect and love for her father stopped her from stopping him from burning all her books. *nodding to myself*
*sigh* So complicated, just like reality... 🤣

And damn, Vidushi should know by now that trying to get Sanyukta to fall, is like pulling herself down deeper and deeper! 🤣 Girl, you a unique chick, although, sometimes I feel like murdering her, but she does something that makes me go all 'aww' on her! 🤣 Well, not really the 'aww', but still! 🤣


🤗 Here you go!!!!

I finally got hold of my laptop thank the gods!!
I will not comment about Bitchyukta. I'm sorry!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Moony87


So true.. Last time she had applied that extra time bleach.. usi ka asar ho gaya hai us 2gm ke bhoonse par which she has in her skull.. Saare ideas whitewash ho gaye lagta hai.. 🤣🤣

HAILAAH!! 🤣 Nice connection eh! 🤣 Sach mein! Abhi aisa lagta hain yeh total obsessed ho chuki hain Sanyukta se! 🤣

Bhai that books burning to reminded me of 70s ki movie.. 😆😆.. Sataayi hui heroine and krooor pita.. 😆😆😆

🤣 🤣 Total Baap thha yeh line! 🤣

Vidushi.. Yeahh.. she is a BABE.. 😳😳 .. Waste kar rahi hai for apni importance by giving so much importance to Sanyunkta.. jiske paas aisi family ho, Aisa Vacuum ho skull mein, Aur SAMEER ho.. use Vids ki kya zaroorat.. 😆😆😆

CORRECT!! Vidushi should spend her time now wooing Parth and drooling over him and yeah, helping pay off the amount she stole for Parth's supposed 'free' test! XP The girl is seriously too damn in love with him, but oh well, can't blame her, since we love watching the two together, be it in any situation! 🤣

She should just keep messing around with Parth buoyy.. 😆😆😆.. Her scenes with Parth make me go.. "Wooo.. Wooo" 😆

🤣 Exactly!☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes


🤗 Here you go!!!!

I finally got hold of my laptop thank the gods!!
I will not comment about Bitchyukta. I'm sorry!


Aiyyoo.. *hugging you back*

But why? Disappointed, Annoyed? 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
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Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


Aiyyoo.. *hugging you back*

But why? Disappointed, Annoyed? 🤔


*hugging you back again*
I don't wanna concentrate on what makes me angry.
I loved the fact that Vidushi is openly a bitch and is willing to go all the way for Parth,
I just find it so Ironic.
😆
Did you get the link I scrapped you? I need ur opinion if I should include Sandhir or not.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


We all connect with Vidushi in many ways that people can count! 😛 Actually we connect with all the characters, be it any situation or emotions.. We all have a little Randhir, Sanyukta, Vidushi, Parth, Kaustuki, YoYo, Jiggy and Sahil!

Aha! Darker version of Randhir eh? I like it! 🤣 Classy actually, really. It sounds better too! 😉
Yeah, Randhir does tend to pull away from people and also from himself, when it comes to personal life and emotions. But Vidushi is like a woman who loves to challenge the devil, and defy every single rule set out in the game she plays. For her it's war, and she can win it. There her determination is commendable, but engineering not so much, according to her. If she puts in more effort into her studies, rather than snooping around, she may top again and actually gain good knowledge and be self-satisfied, 'cause she put in effort to be there! 🤣

OH MI GAWD!!! PAPITA?! 🤣 🤣 🤣 What the?! I had to read thrice to understand what you meant here! 🤣 Ahahahahahahaha... Yup, Diabetes all the way! Spice nahi thha! But, that flashback of Arpita tying a blindfold on Parth's eyes was kinda naughty. And boy, did Ankit look hot in those shorts! 🤣 Wish, Vidushi gets to do something naughtier with him! 🤣


Nahiii. I don't have any ounce of Kaustuki in me pileeejj.. I am no one's PA.. 😆😆.. Plus m not so Confoojed like Sanyukta.. Raam jaane kya chaahti hai chhori jeevan se.. I think all she needs is GREASE.. 😆😆😆.. She is the happiest while sniffing them.. Perfect Addict.. 🤣🤣

LOL .. The kinda HOTS she has for Parth.. SHORTS kya kuchh nahi bachega.. She'll RIP him off.. 😆😆

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