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Originally posted by: Brahmaputra
" I felt myself sinking in his arms. I felt myself alive and breathing again under his breath. This was not the love I longed for. This is more, more than what I longed for. His love surpassed the blemish of my flesh, sept deep in my soul, like a gleam of fresh rays lighting a room darkened through ages. I could feel him, as near as I am to myself, his love healing unseen scars of my hurt, I realise my endless wait comes to an end as he held me in himself and joined himself eternally in me... My love becomes my Lord and my Lord becomes my love!"
wonderful quote⭐️ the bold part lines are the theme of my story...that's why this one OS took months to write...It was not an easy topic for me...
I am speechless Panchaali. What a perfect ending you dashed off- the most precious jewel of the crown! I always like stories like these, coming to an end reminding the soothing, blue rays of moon falling over vast landscapes in night. I love reading such stories. I'm slightly less a lover of sunny, bright, passionate stories though I seriously read them and admire the efforts behind them. Sometimes it is not a grand writing style, but the depths that a simple word could reach, catches the reader in me. For that, I must say you did a wonderful job writing this story. Though I consider your OS on Duryodhan as the best one among your creations ready by me till date,I have to shed lot of tears before writing Duryadhan OS, you know I was planning to write about 3 characters of Mahabharat individually 1. Karna 2. Duryadhan 3. Draupadi..later I noticed that I don't have much time, still I wrote Durydhan. Many great ones wrote about Karna and Draupadi, many more will write, but how many think about Duryadhan! I have never became such emotional before writing any pieces in my life...the one that will always stay close to the reader in me will be this one. I'm very glad I did not miss reading this in spite of being busy. Thanks a lot for writing this.😊 Thankz for giving this OS your time 😃
(I know you don't mind my typos. Still I'm editing them. LOL)No I don't mind yaar 🤗
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