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panchaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick
aww...Me too like and adore My Prabhu and Mata.

Durga puja within a month!!!😃

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sania_58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

darun, asadharan.

kono kotha hobe naa.khub bhalo.

naa, ar kichu bolar bhasa nei.

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

I wait eagerly for ur pms and u r saying that u disturb me.. :P
Anyways.. Reserved! Will comment soon Aftr readin

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: panchaali

🤗aww.. i can really write a lot on your story.. i feel.. but wont do justice to it.. probably... Somewhere your story touched my heart..coz it was about an unconditional selfless love... so many shades of this pure emotion.. and that too in front of Lord himself..

Let me put lyrics of one song..that often came in my mind for your devpriya.. 😳

Heere moti main na chahoon
Main to chahoon, Sangam tera,
Mai to teri saiyaan, tu hai mera,
Saiyaan, saiyaanaaan
Tu jo choole pyaar se, araam se mar jaaun
Aaja chanda baaho mein tujhmein hi ghum ho jaaun mai,
Tere naam mein kho jaaun,
Saiyaan, saiyaaan.

Mere din khushi se jhoome gaaye raatein.
Pal pal mujhe doobayein jaatein jaatein,
Tujhe jeet jeet haaroon, yeh pran-pran waaru,
Haye aise main niharu, teri aarti utaaru.
Tere naam se jude hai saare naate,

Ab baawara hua mann,
Jag ho gaya hai roshan,
yeh nayi-nayi suhagan,
ho gayi hai teri jogan,
koi prem ki pujaran mandir sajaye.
Saiyaaan, Saiyaaan

courtesy- Saiyaan (song from Kailash Kher)

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panchaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: riti4u

🤗aww.. i can really write a lot on your story.. i feel.. but wont do justice to it.. probably... Somewhere your story touched my heart..coz it was about an unconditional selfless love... so many shades of this pure emotion.. and that too in front of Lord himself..

Let me put lyrics of one song..that often came in my mind for your devpriya.. 😳

Heere moti main na chahoon
Main to chahoon, Sangam tera,
Mai to teri saiyaan, tu hai mera,
Saiyaan, saiyaanaaan
Tu jo choole pyaar se, araam se mar jaaun
Aaja chanda baaho mein tujhmein hi ghum ho jaaun mai,
Tere naam mein kho jaaun,
Saiyaan, saiyaaan.

Mere din khushi se jhoome gaaye raatein.
Pal pal mujhe doobayein jaatein jaatein,
Tujhe jeet jeet haaroon, yeh pran-pran waaru,
Haye aise main niharu, teri aarti utaaru.
Tere naam se jude hai saare naate,

Ab baawara hua mann,
Jag ho gaya hai roshan,
yeh nayi-nayi suhagan,
ho gayi hai teri jogan,
koi prem ki pujaran mandir sajaye.
Saiyaaan, Saiyaaan

courtesy- Saiyaan (song from Kailash Kher)

This a wonderful song by Kailash Kher, you are right, it fits Devpriya's emotions perfectly 😃

Thank you for writing this in this thread 😃

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panchaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: sania_58
darun, asadharan.

kono kotha hobe naa.khub bhalo.

naa, ar kichu bolar bhasa nei.

Dhonnyobad bon 🤗

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panchaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar
I wait eagerly for ur pms and u r saying that u disturb me.. :P
Anyways.. Reserved! Will comment soon Aftr readin

actually your res box in the part 4 is not filled yet😔..that's why I thought may be disturbing you

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Gayatri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

I read them...I shall comment in detail...now am from mobile...,

Sorrry for being late...😭

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582445

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Panchu the ending was amazing .. I can't express what I feel properly .. I remember in "Nahanyate" Amrita once said why Rabindranath Thakur's Puja porjay songs often sounds like "pream porjay" songs n vise versa .. I too feel HIS love songs often sounds like devotional songs n devotional songs like love songs .. Then I understand HE, the Man whose philosophy is synonymous to life love n divinity felt that both don't have much difference

you know about my story what I wrote on the same concept i.e. "donohi ek khuda or muhabbat" .. I am sucker of this theory ..it is the devotee who makes the God subject of devotion else i is just stone idol .. it is human love and sensibility that make a person HUMAN else they are like every other mortal beings

Here I love how one man and one woman rise in love .. the norms of society, chain of their own ego n limitation finally breaks down and the unspoken love finally won over every odd ..may be they won't be union won't be physical but in metaphysical world the union is of souls

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panchaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..
I read them...I shall comment in detail...now am from mobile...,
Sorrry for being late...😭

It's okay I will wait 😊

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