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Originally posted by: allseasonrain
Bonkeo keo sorry bole Di...sorry because I hurt you nah, didi's duty is to keep bon happy always 😊pls continue writing ... ap actually na novel likho... dekhna bestseller hoga...thank you, but that's dream don't if it's ever gonna be true...Rahi bat is os ka as usual mind blowing...just loved it...thank you 🤗
Originally posted by: hpatgiri
Oh God !! The last part was so emotional... I almost cried. I m so touched by this story that words are failing me to describe it. 😭 Devpratim saved his Devpriya from the evils of the society but in doing this he had to give pain to his love and go through the same pain himself.
I especially loved the last part where both Devpratim & Devpriya embraced and finally confessed their love and poured out their heart to the other & the final embrace of love & life with Muralimanohor, their God being the prime witness. ❤️
And ur poetry once again is excellent.
But I am also sad that this was the last chapter 😭. I wished to read devpartim's & devpriya's pure and unconditional ❤️ story more.
Hope u come up with more new and touching stories 😊 😊
Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick
Oh now I am blushing...☺️
I start this story and its sequel out of curiosity. But when I start reading...I can't put it down. It is so expressing and mesmerizing that I have no word to describe...Its like my describing Lord-Lady...what is impossible yet possible for me...impossible if you try to describe them and possible if you realize them...
This story make me realize it once again...😳😳
😳😳
About Bankim Chandra's Devi Chowdhurani...yes...she was indeed Devi Maa. She bestowed her compassion even on her oppressor... That is what a empathetic, affectionate person does.
By the way it is one of my favourite Novel too...
Devapratim's effort and realization is amazing...as you said he is the true human created by Lord...yes that he was 😊
ABout Prakriti ke anek roop...wow so you too love Lord's hermit side too😳.. now I am jumping onto the cloud9.I respect Him very very much, He symbolizes consciousness..only the pure Purus of this universe..
And lastly...you are welcome.🤗🤗
Originally posted by: scarletmalik
the last part was fantasticly amazingly beautiful👏
nd it was emotional too😭ur poems were also very beautiful👍🏼loved the last part where they finally confess their love nd their lord Muralimanoher is the sole witness to thisloved it❤️thank you 😳hope that u will soon come up with another beautiful story soon😊I will whenever I can manage some time again...😊
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