ajab kasak ki ghazab kahani LAST PART POSTED!

So guys this is my first and hopefully not the last trying at writing fan fiction. Here is how I would like to run this idea. I will go ahead with my stories in parts. A new part will be posted every 2 days until the end of the story. So if there a new part posted today then another 1 will be posted on Saturday. after reading the part your job between now and Saturday is post what you think will happen in few lines.

Here is part 1:

The scene is Karan is in the office doing his work when
he gets a envelope delivered to him.

Karan opens it and there is a car key inside with a note.
The note reads "Aaj shyam 5 bajay mein office ke nichay apka wait karungi"
Karan gets all excited thinking in his head sakshi has planned a surprise for
him. Karan looks at the time and it's 4:45 PM so he starts packing up
everything and goes downstairs.

Watchman :saab aapki gaddi parking garage mein hain.

Karan goes to the parking lot and beeps the car. As he walks
towards the car he sees a girl with long hair is sitting in the passenger seat.
Karan ke dil mein to laddoo phoot rahe thay. He opens the car and sees it's a
beautiful girl sitting in the passenger seat but it's not sakshi.

Karan: aap kon ho

Unknown girl: mein woh
he hoon jisne aapke liye woh note bheji thi.

Karan : Sorry you may have send it to the wrong person.

Unknown girl: nahi apke liye he thi.

Karan: I am sorry lekin mein apke saath nahi a sakta

Unknown girl: aana padega agar tumhe tumhari biwi salamat
chahiye

Karan is all worried so he goes with her. In the car ride
unknown girl is saying some bakwaas. Karan is not paying attention he is driving
where the girl directs him. Suddenly she tells him to park the car at a busy
place.

Karan: Meri biwi kaha hai aur hum idhar kyun aaye hain?

Unknown girl: Kyunki mein aap ke saath thoda waqt guzaar na
chahati hoon

Karan: lekin aap ho kon?

Unknown girl: (Kaas ke karan ka haath pakad leti hai) mein jo hu wo apko pata chal jayega

Just than Karan sees sakshi coming from other direction.
Sakshi walks towards Karan.

Sakshi: Karan ye sub kya hai?

Karan is shocked to be caught red handed

End of part 1

Edited by gothope - 9 years ago

Yeh toh ghazab hogaya
Mere khayal se story ka name ajab kasak ki ghazab kahani hona chahiye tha
Good work
Keep writing

This is gr8! hope👏. How I wish the cvs read this.
Poor Karan, phaas gaya😭
waiting for part 2😃.

Nice one..!
So according to me what will happen next is:

Nice start !
Different concept
Loved it :)
Do cont soon nd pm me

Thanks everyone. But I am more curious to know what you guys think will happen in part two

I think its Sakshi's plan to call up the girl to surprise Karan

Hmm...I want to see a jealous Sak n a misunderstood Karan😆

Good morning everyone Thank you for your kind words and few ideas. But here is your part 2

Karan: Pata nahi iss ladki ne muje kaha ki tum khatray mein ho aur muje isske saath jana padega tumhari salamati ke liye.

Sakshi: Karan aab aap kuch bhi maat bolo. (and she walks away)

Karan: Arre Lekin mere baat toe suno (walks behind sakshi)

Unknown girl: (runs behind both of them)

Sakshi: (starts running in a lonely saadak) Karan aap jao muje nahi bat karni apse

Karan: lekin Sakshi meri baat toe suno

Sakshi: Karan aap chale jao uske saath muje aapka chehara bhi nahi dekhna

Karan: Sakshi suno tum jo samaj rahi ho wo nahi hai

Sakshi (run towards a soom saam area and it's pura andehra)

Karan:  (comes there) Sakshi tum kaha ho, Sakshi yaar suno toe sahi 

(No response for good 2-3 minutes)

Karan: Arre yaar yeh kya ho gaya Sakshi kitni naraz hogi

Sakshi: Mein naraz nahi hoon ( standing with a handsome hunk as the  Lights come on)

(Lights are from electric series in a big heart shape)

Karan : Aab tum muje bataao yeh sub kya hai  aur yeh kon hai 

Unknown girl to Karan: Tum kitna bhaag te ho

Karan: Abhi tum ruko mein apni biwi ke saath baat kar raha hoon

Unknown Girl:  *Screams AHHH

End of Part 2

Start predicting  the future

OMG, the end was totally unexpected..!
Why did the unknown girl scream??