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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Great update
Everyone is happy tiniest ishus reports r normal
Ahh Raman overheard mihika
Now he will think ishu is unhappy with him
Update and continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel13

Great update

Everyone is happy tiniest ishus reports r normal
Ahh Raman overheard mihika
Now he will think ishu is unhappy with him
Update and continue soon

Buddy can I copy your GIF in signature
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Nice...everything is good and suddenly kahani me twist!!! Like it ..plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates !
Loved it
Raman heard what Mihika said 🤢
Hope he doesn't misunderstand Ishita though and thinks she's not happy with him
And wonder how he'll react when he'll know the news too 😳
Eager to read the next part
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Update soon i wanna read when she tells raman about it yaar !!!!!
and his reaction !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
part 4

Scene starts in Ishita's roo.Raman was sitting there alone he was thinking what he heard from Mihiks's mouth.

He is happy with the fact that Ishita can give birth to a child.It makes him s much happy as it made Ishita.But Mihika's words that you would be happy if you have married Subbu. This broke Raman .He never accepted but he never had guts to think Ihita was not in is life even for a day.

Then his mind goes to past incidents in his life.

First he remembers the scene where he blames Ishita and her mother to be gold diggers.

Then Mr and Mrs Iyer in jail because of his misunderstanding.

Ishita's engagement getting cancelled because of him.

Then he remembers about Mihir Mihika incident over that MMS made by Romi.That destroyed happinesss in Iyer house.

Then their engagement,he reached it late by almost 6 hrs.He is just trying to imagine embrassement faced by Ishita and her family.

Then he left her alone in party leaving her among people she don't know on second day of their marriage.

Then Ishita's tears when Ruhi got hurt and Raman refused to give blood .

Then the embrassement Iyer's faced when Ishita got accidentally drunk by Raman's mistake.

Then he doubted her before everyone when she was trying to help his sister.

Then he made her to apologize to Adi even though she din'd do any mistake and tears Ishita had that moment is still hurting him.

Then she helped him in his business deal but he blamed her not knowing the truth completely.

Then he left her when she needed him most in Param's fiasco.He could still remember how Ishita begged him to believe her.

Then over Amma' accident and he supporting Shagun for Adi.

Then Ishita loosing her license to practice which she loved most.

There are tears in Raman's eyes seeing this.

Raman clears his eyes seeing Ishita coming to room.

Ishita don't know how to start but she neither had any plan.She gently kept reports before Raman.

Ishita "Raman aap kabh aye?Mujhey bulaaya kyon nahee?"

Raman "Kuch deer pehley?"

Ishita "Main aapkey liyen coffee laon?"

Raman nods yes and she goes for it looking at Raman whether he is seeing reports or not.

Raman takes reports in his hands and was happy over the fact Ishita is allright and her happiness is restored.

Ishita was thinking to tell Raman that she loves him .She is making strategies on how to tell Raman.(It is actually a war to tell Raman something)>

Ishita reaches their room with coffee.She sees him looking at reports.

Raman "Tumney fir sey apnaa checkup karwaaya aur abh tumhey koi problem nahen hain."

Ishita smiles at this.

Raman "Tum maa ban sakthee hon.Who sirf ek aath hain naa jho tumhey har baar ghaav dethaa raha."

Ishita was silent.

Raman "Uss wajaha sey tumhara poora zindagee badal gaya tha.Shayad aaj tum Subbu sey shaadi kee hothee aur khush rehthee."

Ishita was confused listening this words.

Raman "Ruhi key liyen tumney mujhsey shaadi kee thee.Ek beti key liyen."

Ishita want to shout loudly that she loves him and all that dosen't matter anymore.

Raman "Ruhi key liyen mera gussa taaney sab kuch sehthey aye.Ruhi key liyen."

Raman "Kitnaa kuch sahan tumney iss shaadi mey sirf Ruhi key liyen.Param iss ghar mey,tumhaara license aur naa jaaney kitney."

Ishita "Raman aap yeh sab kyon keh rahen hain?"

Raman "Aaj tumhaarey zindagee mey ek dukh door hogaya.Tumm maa ban sakthee hon.Aur tumhey ek beti key liyen iss na chahey rishtey nibhaana naheen padega."

Ishita was shocked listening this Raman was talking about their separation.This could'nt be thing what she will be expecting in her nightmares.She could trade any thing to be with Raman.

Raman "Han tumm abh ek maa ban sakthee hon.Apney khud kee bache .Tumhaarey zindagee mey kitney problems aye merey wajaha sey."

Raman "Now you are free from it.Tum jaa sakthee hon.Aaj tum kissey bhee ladkey sey shaadi kar sakthee hon jho tumhey pyaar karey respect karey tumhey har baar khush rakhey.Not like mee I have just bee reason for your sorrows."

Raman "Main Neil sey baath karoonga .Agey key formalities who dekhega."

He tells her and was going outside giving her her reports.

Ishita was shattered by this.She thought this news will bring happiness in her life but this instead is making Raman to go away from her which will never be ready to do.

She then looks at her reports as they changed whole story now.Old ones brought Raman in Ishita's life while this one is taking Raman away.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous update
Awww ishu thinking how to tell Raman about her feelings
And here Raman recalling eachbhurt ishu got cuz of him
Glad he realized but that made him to MU ishu
Now he wants to free her
Wonder how will ishu tell him that she loves him
Update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel13

Fabulous update

Awww ishu thinking how to tell Raman about her feelings
And here Raman recalling eachbhurt ishu got cuz of him
Glad he realized but that made him to MU ishu
Now he wants to free her
Wonder how will ishu tell him that she loves him
Update soon dear

Buddy I palnned it already.Will be updating in ten minutes.

Then can I copy your signature of Ishraru
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5

Scene starts in Ishita's roomwhile Raman was going out Ishita looks at her new reportShe gets sad seeing it as they are separating her and Raman.Then she notices something shinning over report those are his tears.What ever he said was for Ishita's happiness and he would be never be happy if Ishita was not there with him.

Then Ishita understood that Raman heard Mihika's words and got depress himself.

Then Ishita taking initiative filled with sorrow and anger stopped Raman by holding his hands.

Ishita then locked door from inside.

Ishita "Raman aap kya keh rahey they.Aur ek baar kahiyen."

Raman controlling his sadness.

Raman "Ishita main tumhey iss rishtey sey azaad karna chahtha hun.How long will you be in this forceful relation for ..."

The moment Raman was about to finish his statement he received a tight slap from Ishita and it was unexpected.

Ishita "Raman mujhey dekhkey kahiyen.Aap fir sey kahiyen."

Raman "Ishita tumhaarey saarey problems merey wajaha sey hain.Issliyen tumhey bethar yahi hoga kee tum mujhsey doo jaon..."

Again another tight slap from Ishita .

Raman was shocked seeing this.

Ishita "Aap kyan soch rahen hain sab boliyen.Samney boliyen"

Raman "Mereay wajaha sey tumhaarey amma appa ko jail jaana pada.tuhey bhee.I have never kept you ..."

Ishita gave another tight slap to Raman.

Ishita "Raman sach boliyen bahaana nahen.Hum alag hongey tho Ruhi ka kyaa.?"

Raman "Ruhi tumhaarey saath jayegi.Tum chahey tho..."

Ishita gave another tight slap to Raman.

Ishita "Ruhi merey saath ayegee tho aap kya karengey .Poorey zindagee Akeley."

Raman don't know how to calm Ishita.

Raman "Ruhi iss ghar mey aye bhe tumhaari wajaha sey .Who tumhaarey saath hi khush rahegi..."

Raman was unable to finish statement because Ishita was not stopping her activities.She once again slapped Raman.

Ishita "Raman mujhey sach chahiyen.Merey akhey mey dekhkey batayiyen kee sach kyaa hain."

Raman "Kyaa sach Ishita.Hummaree shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen thaa..."

Ishita gave him another one this time it was more hard.

Ishita "Raman fir sey boliyen."

Raman "Ishita hummarey shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen huan tha.Yeh baath tum bhee jaanthee hon.Aaj tumhey iss rishtey ko nibhaney kee koi jaroori nahen ha..."

Ishita gave him another one.Raman was not getting angry his frustration is getting out.

Raman "Tum kyaa thab sey maar rahen hon.By what..."

Ishita gave him another one.She was sure in JHANSI KI RANI mode but issue is Raman is in Majboor Bahlla modevinstead of Ravan Kumar to counter it.

Ishita "Jho main poochungi sirf usska jawaab ayega aapkey moo sey.Who hhee sach."

Raman "Tum kyo kar rahen hon yeh sab?..."

Ishita gave him another one .Raman's face is becoming red with slap marks.

Ishita "Raman sach bathayiyen."

Raman "Tumm iss shaadi mey khush nahen hon..."

Ishita gave another tight slap for Raman.

Raman "Mihika ney jho baath kahan shaaya sach..."

Ishita slapped him once again.It is not what she want to listen.

Raman "Sach hain.Mujhey laga tum iss shaadi mey khush nahen hon..."

Ishita slapped him once again.She will continue it till she is satisfied.

Raman "Issliyen mainey soch kee tum i..."

Ishita did her part as it is not what she want to listen.

Raman "Iss shaadi sey free ho jaon..."

Ishita did it again ,

Raman "I LOVE YOU..."

Ishita gave him another slap.

Raman "Yeh sach hain jhoot nahen."

Ishita "Aapney itnaa der kyon kiya.Issey pehley bathaana tha."

Ishita hugs Raman saying this.Alas she succeded in making Raman do what he was supposed to.

Ishita "Raman I love you so much.Main aapkey bhina reh nahee sakthee."

Ishita thn continues "Raman main jaanthee hun hummarey shaadi Ruhi key liyen huen thee lekin yeh baath hummara dil kabhee nahen jaan paya."

"Aap apney aaap mey kasiey soch liyan kee merey saarey problems key reason app hain."

"Jaanthe hun hummarey rishtha pyaar sey nahen adjustments sey suru huan hain.Lekin humney ussey apnaa liyan hain.Humey kabhee bhee yeh nahen laga kee aap alag hon."

"Use parmeet aur license key wajaha aap kasiey hon.Aap ko bhee nahen patha na kyaa huan tha.Fir bhee aapney hee sort kiya uss issue ko."

"Raman main kabhee itnaa khush nahen thee jitnaa main aapkey saath hun.I always loved to spend time with you even in our quarrels."

"Raman aap nahen hothey tho main naheen jaanthee main aaj kyaa hothee .Aap mera hmmath hon Raman.Main jitney bhee ladaayi ladi who sab aap key liyen ladi hum.I could'nt imagine myself away from you."

"Raman aap jaanthey hain.Aaj main imagine bhee nahenn kar pa rahe thee kee who report galath nahee huey hothey tho aap merey zindagee mey naheen hothey.I never loved Subbu.Main galath thee.Main sirf aapsey pyaar karthee hun.I just love you."

"Raman Ruhi hummari beti hain aap ussey bantney key liyen tayyar ho gaye"

"Raman jab sey mujhey patha chala kee main maa ban sakthee hun.Mera dil mey sirf ek hee cheez hain.Main sirf yeh soch rahen hun kee app kitnaa khush hongey hummarey bacchey sey.I am just thinking of our child."

"Fir aapney tho door honey kee baath kar rahey they."she is broken and breaks into Raman's hus .

Raman hugs her to console her.

Raman "I love you too Ishita I just love you."

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous update. SAKIV best one among all of your dream track. Please continue it

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