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will be over soon😊
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thanks for all the comments(which have lessen i am having no idea why pls tell why it is? not more updates are left guys so pls comment.)

sorry for spelling and mistakes stay tuned for another update by few more hour😉

until then enjoy reading this

18.arya putr arjun aapne kaha ta aaj brata ka sandshesh ane wala hain(hubby arjun u told me today brother krishna's message is going to arrive today) .. woo he says haan ane wala ta... parantu pata nahi ab tak kyun nahi aya shayd wo ana hi nahi chahate(yes it was about to arrive but don't know why it has not yet arrived may be he doesn't want to come here). and smile she was shocked.. he openly was saying it ... she says aap satya kehrahe hain(r u saying the truth?).he says mein joot bolkar koi laaab nahi pane wala(what profit will I gain telling lie to u) ... muje nahi pata ab teri brata ka ane ka mann hain bhi ya nahi... shayd... usko(I don't know whether ur brother want to come or not, may be.) ,,,, she says aap asatya kehrahe haina(u r are saying lie right?).. he says mein kyun(why would i?)... before it.. draupadi s dasi comes... saying subhi was called by draupadi... arjun suddenly realizes draupadi may tell truth... so he divert saying.. subhadra dasi se kehdo tum apni arya ke saath waqt bitarahi hoo filhaal nahi asakti hoo(dassi tell dp that subhi is busy right now with her husband so she won't be able to come now) subhi sees him as she never saw him talking this way. Subhadhra sees dasi and she was in dilemma as she cannot tell such thing... as dp may feel bad. She says jiji se kaho hum todi deer mein wahan ajayenge... aur sirf itna hi kaho aur kuch nah, (she says just to say I will come shortly nothing more)she sees arjun.. dasi understood... she turns to arjun and ask ye kaise tareeka hain baat karne ki(how can u talk like this?)... he ask kyun sahi tarika(why I did not say anything wrong)... tum apni arya ke waqt bitarahi hoo satya to kaha ...meine(I told her truth that u r spending time with ur hubby).. she says aise baat jiji ko bura lagsakti hain(these words can hurt jiji)... he says wo to muje nahi pata(I don't know about that)... she says jiji ke saath muje bhi bura lag ta hain... Ye galat baat hain aur hum abhi jiji ke paas jarahe hain(along with her even I feel bad, this is wrong and I am going to meet her)... he says tum ja nahi sakti(u can't go)... she says mein avaish javoongi aur satya janoongi(I will surely go and find the truth)... he says hum tuje jaane nahi denge(I won't let u go)... she says aap hamein rok nahi sakte(u can't stop me).. he says avaishya roksakta hoon(I can stop u for sure) and smile reminding her of banishing door.. . she sees him and then smile and comes near and takes the water jug from there and moves ahead back and pour water in line making an line... he ask ye kya kar rahi hoo?(he ask what u r doing?) She then prays saying jab tak rajkumar arjun apni absabdon keliye maafi nahi mangte, hey agni dev inhein jaane mat dena(hey god of fire until he doesn't ask sorry for his bad words don't let him go)... and goes.. he smile and was about to step agni dev stops... he was shocked.. she says aapko rokna bhi hum jaante hain(I know to stop u too)... he says ye tum nahi janti hook i mein is agni ko buja bhi sakta hoon(u may not know i can put off this fire too) and takes his gandheev to shoot but to surprise it doesn't get off... he sees her who smiles saying... ye meine apni brata ki seekayi huyi prem jaap hain ye koi gandheevdari nahi bujasakte...(this is an love prayer thought by my brother which no bow men can blow off)and goes... he smiles and says parantu... prem karne wala avaishya buja sakta hain(but the person who has got love can surely put off the fire) and smile and says hey agni dev muje apni absabdon keliye shama karna(hey god of fire pls forgive me for my bad words and let me cross the holy fire) and steps the fire goes off.. . in time subhi had already walked fast towards dp to find the truth . but arjun to walks of fast...

Subhi reaches dp room and seeing her in hurry she ask what happened why she was in hurry she ask jiji satya batayiye brata ka koi sandhesh aya hain(sister tell me truth has message from brother Krishna has come?)... she says wo too aya(yes it has come but)... when she sees subhi and ask arya putr arjun ne nahi bataya tuje?(din't hubby arjun did not tell u?) She says nahi(no)... Dp then think why he didn't tell? And before she could say anything... dasi comes saying samgraghni rajkumar bheem ne aap ko bhojan chakne keliye bulaya hain... kaha hain jab tak aap nahi ayenge... wo kana banana nahi denge(she says queen, prince bheem has called u to taste the food, he told until u don't taste he won't make any more food)... she was like what? He says subhdara muje jana hoga varna pata nahi arya kya karenge(subadhra I need to go otherwise don't know what will he do?)... and goes... subhi was like jiji bhi chale gaye (even she went)... To kya hua(so what?) I will find it there itself and goes... in time actually it was done by arjun who meet bheem while walking fast and when he ask he says and bheem get idea and send dasi immediately who goes and tells her and bheem says he will go to kitchen and tell draupadi not to disclose and tell him to handle subadhra they hug and laughs... so subhi walks off and she bechara get confused with passage and as usual goes in wrong passage not knowing arjun was standing there waiting for his brother but subhi comes and clashes and he holds her and they end up remembering the forest time... he smiles seeing her. He ask itni jaldi kahan jarahi hoo?(where r u going in such an hurry?) she was taken back as how come arjun break that line of fire? He ask aise kya dekrahi hoo muje? (why r u seeing me in surprise?)He smiles saying kahin phirse mujse pyaar to nahi hogaya yadhav kumara subadhra and laughs(don't tell me u have all again fallen in love with me).. she gives him an fire looks and get up and says hum galti se is raste mein agaye... hum jiji se milkar sataya poochenge.(unknowing I came in wrong way, I was going to meet jiji to find the truth by asking her) he says poochlo kisi se bhi koi nahi jawab denge(he ask ask, whoever u want but no one will answer u)... and smiles... she says nahi brata yudi kabhi asatya nahi bolte wo satya avaishya kahenge(she says but brother yudishter never say lie so I will ask him he will surely say).. arjun was shocked... she smiles and goes... he was like going behind his wife . she walks fast making him run... almost...

She reaches yudi room. She was shocked as yudi was not there she learns yudi was busy with ministers. she then turns to see smiling arjun who comes saying agar tum apni naraz ko chod dogi hum kud tumse satya kahenge(if u leave ur anger, I will tell u the truth by myself)... she sees him and goes... he thinks until when u will be in anger.. at an moment everything will have to come an end even ur anger... but u look cute when u get angry... and smiles... she goes back too room but she locks the door she thinks bahut hogaya ab hum yahan nahi rahenge... hum swayan dwarika jayenge aur satya janenege... ab hum kiska intezaar nahi karenge parantu kaise jayein?(it is high time, I will leave to dwarika and find out the actual truth is after all for sure he won't tell nor let anyone and I cannot be quite until I learn truth of everything)She then looks around... she goes and open the cloth box and sees her dress which was very normal one.. and she changes it.. she then leaves the sandhesh in bed along with tied with an cloth which was in blue in color and goes off hiding herself.. In time bheem explained to draupadi about the matter as arjun planned to surprise with madhav arrival. She says arya ye teek nahi hain... subhadhra ko bahut kast horaha hain... usko satya batana avaishyak hain.. uski chere par bahut peeda ta(dp says hubby it is not right to hide truth from subadhra, she needs to know it, u did not see how much stress she had in her face)... he says mein samajsakta hoon panchali parantu ye kuch hi samay ko baat hain uske baad sab ki chere par kushiyaan jalke ki(he says I can understand panchali but it is matter of few more hour, then everybody will have only smile on their face)... she says parantu... ye teek nhi hroaha hain... man mein bahut ashwast ka vichar hora haina(but whatever happening is not right, I am feeling something wrong in my heart)... he says fikar mat karo... bus agar poochegi to kehdena.. tuje nahi pata(he says don't worry, if she ask u tell her u have no idea on it or just don't try to go infront of her and smiles)... she says ye sahi nahi hain arya(she says again it is not right)... he says bus todi samay ki hi to baat hain... madhav ko kabhi bhi askata hain(it is matter of few minutes, madhav may arrive at any time soon)... she says aap log bhi na us bechara bachii ke saath kya kar rahe hoo govind ko ye sab bura na lag jay... (she says what u people doing with that child is not right...hope govind doesn't get hurt with ur people deed after all she is his baby sister)

In time arjun was back to his katch(room) and sees the sandhesh he thinks ye kya hain kahin prem part to nahi(is this an love letter?) and smiles he was about to open when sahdev comes and says brata he turns he says brata arjun . arjun forget while talking to sahdev and goes ... here subhi was walking she have to get one godhi she sees an horse tied in bar which had the symbol so she then unties the horse and get over it as she was not able to see any one and get over and in time the person come and she give him coin saying she is taking away horse and will return it and fast starts to ride away the horse when he shouts saying this horse was not trained and need more training but she doesn't hear and drive off fast... he get tensed up and rushes towards rajmahal(palace) to inform nakul about it... saying one women took it off. Arjun comes out with sahdev and they reaches the dwaar(enterance)... as one soldier inform madhav arrived. arjun was happy thinking he arrived before than he said... he says bahut kushi huyi(very happy)... he thinks now subhi will be more happy seeing him there her anger will vanish when she sees her brother once in front of her and for sure he will explain her... and he can consoles her... he was dreaming and walking but he think am I forgetting something... But still he walks... all were present when madhav enters climbing down the chariot happily he walks and does pranipat and then he ask kaise ho saki? Swath to hona(how r u my friend u r fine?)... she nodes yes ... he ask aur meine tumhare saath keliye meri apni priya behen ko beja ta wo to nahi dikayi derahi(I send my beloved sister to u where is she not to be seen?) ... she says wo to aap uski arya se hi poochlijiye(that u ask to her hubby itself?)... and does his arrthi and welcome... arjun think omg.. madhav says avaishya(sure) and smile and she too smile indicating something was going on.. He says paarth and hugs him they share an cute warm hug he says madhav... he ask meri priya behen kahan hain paarth(where is my beloved sister paarth?).. wo kya apni brata se naraaz hain(is she is also angry with her brother?)... all laughs silently... seeing arjun when bheem says brata ka to pata nahi parantu meri priya anuj se naraaz hain(I don't know about angry on her brother but I know she is surely angry over my beloved brother)... and laughs he ask innocently brata bheem kya kehrahe hain arjun?(what is brate bheem saying arjun?) He says woo. nakul says satya kehrahe hain brata bheem... subhi bhabhi ko lagraha hain... ye saari sazish brata arjun ki kiya dara hain(nakul speaks, bheem brother is saying the truth after all subhi bhabhi thinks it was all planned by arjun brother)... Krishna sees arjun who nodes yes... he laughs asking meri behen kahan hain?(where is my sister?) in time that person come to nakul and informs about the women taking away horse and gave these coin and nakul sees it and madhav seeing it says ye to and tells them... these are gold coin of dwarika... and then that fellow says she was looking in hurry and informs that horse was untrained... arjun was shocked... he rushes back saying mein abhi aya(I will be back) and run towards his room and open the part and get shocked she had written all sadly of leaving there and going to meet her brother to know the truth and she won't be able to forgive herself if truth is something else... she also stated he may try to hide to her all truth but she will find it at any cost... he was shocked and had tears almost and takes his gandheev and walks back hurriedly all were walking inside as they thought it would be better they get inside an talk... when arjun walks fast he get clashed with madhav and he hold him asking paarth itni jaldi jaldi mein kahan jarahi hoo?(where r u going in hurry paarth?) He says muje jana hoga(I need to go) madhav holding each other by now... he shows wo ladki koi aur nahi subadhra hi tii (the girl was no one other than subhi)and shows him the letter and tell muje seekara hi jana hoga... wo jungle tak pounchne pehle hi muje use rokna hoga aur wapas lana hoga(I need to go fast and stop her before she enters the jungle and bring her back)... muje maaf kardijiye maadhav mein aapkii behen ko raksha nahi kar paya(forgive me madhav I couldn't protect ur sister)... he says nahi paarth(no paarth)... mein yadhi aise sochta tumse subadhra ka vivah kyun karta(if I have thought like that, why would I have let u get married to her?)... ye meri behen ko apni brata ke pradi bahut prem hain isliye nikalgayi hain parantu muje pata hain satya jante hii wow wapas ajayegi (this is my sister love towards her brother, that is the reason she went away but sure once she learn the truth she will come back)... waise meri behen ab tak junglon mein pounchgayi hogi... Kyunki usko gandheev ke saath saath godhi chalana bhi ache se ate hain bus usko achhi godhi chaiye varna(btw she must have reached jungle by now after all along with having knowledge of bow and arrow she also know how to ride horse, just that she need an trained horse) ... in time nakul says kya wo subadhra bhabhi hain(omg it means that was subhi bhabhi?)... brata arjun jaldi jayega wo godhi ab tak kabhooo mein nahi kiya gaya hain(brother arjun rush soon as the horse is not yet trained )... he nodes yes and muje jana hoga subadhra ko wapas lane keliye... muje adhesh dijiye(I need to go to get back subhi give me permission to do that madhav) ... madhav says avaishya paarth(sure paarth) ... he says pranipat to all even yudi and taking his blessing rushes off.. and climb over his horse with his gandheev and starts to ride fast...

Now what will happen will be able to reach subhi after all she is trained in horse riding...😉

guys hoping to see atleast 7-8 comments

Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice ya!! Eagerly waiting fr next part!! Will you update today?
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Originally posted by: maharjunfan

Very nice ya!! Eagerly waiting fr next part!! Will you update today?

thank u yes i will be updating in another few hours for sure😊 if i get comments other wise after few days 😊
but will give preview
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏 i like it, i hope the next part will come too😆
sometimes i'm confuse😕 with ur writing so i read it twice until i can understand🥱. example :Swath to hona(how r u my friend u r fine?)... she nodes yes ...
who is she? she is dp... maybe u can explain it before u put she on conversation. cause sometimes i can't understand the conversation of two person if u dont put their name😊. this is just my suggestion to ur writing, after all i like ur story very much😳😉
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Originally posted by: arjuna27

👏 i like it, i hope the next part will come too😆

sometimes i'm confuse😕 with ur writing so i read it twice until i can understand🥱. example :Swath to hona(how r u my friend u r fine?)... she nodes yes ...
who is she? she is dp... maybe u can explain it before u put she on conversation. cause sometimes i can't understand the conversation of two person if u dont put their name😊. this is just my suggestion to ur writing, after all i like ur story very much😳😉

i am so happy some one has come with suggestion this what an writer want thank u. will do that for sure...
thanks for liking and giving suggestion keep giving it will surely help me to make story better😊😊😊

i will try to sort this issue
😊

stay tuned for preview
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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this is an spl preview which i am giving which will be in update no 20 😊
so enjoy reading it


i have updates ready but without English translation if it ok with u people i can update and ask some one to translate 😊


arjun-he walks little away but crossing an tree he stops himself and thinks how mean she is I was trying to help her in-spite of her rude behaviour trying to console her... but she , she never understands me nor my feelings... I am trying to console her hoping some where I will start reducing her anger but nope she is so adamant ... he fold his wrist in anger.. but suddenly he turns sensing something and sees her weeping badly... he couldn't take it more he goes to her seeing her crying when her tears where falling over he face and when she was about to wipe he sit down and wipes her tears saying ye achha nahi lagta teri chere mein(arjun says to subhi that tears doesn't good look in her face)... she sees her parantu ye dene wale aap hain(subhi says to arjun that the tears are given by him)... and cries but he doesn't let her tear tears fall below her chin and hold it with his palm he keemti asoozon ko aise zaya mat hone dena(arjun says don't waste ur precious tears like this to subhi)... hum tumhare ankhooon se ye ashu nai deksakte(arjun says i can't see tears in ur eyes)... saying it she realizes his eyes too had tears
Edited by shavii - 10 years ago
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i hope u can update still with english 😉cause i dont understand hindi language. cause i come from indonesia😆😃
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Originally posted by: arjuna27

i hope u can update still with english 😉cause i dont understand hindi language. cause i come from indonesia😆😃

oh ok don't worry i will translate but later 😊 or will ask my friend to translate 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amazing update and preview waiting for the next part

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