Your writing is amazing, like poetry which has special fragrance to it Some of the romantic lines were amazing
Will you let me love you
Stop me sanam
I am really hoping to see more of such lines, I love how you built their romance subtle and soft!
As for the drama part of it loved the whole Dealing with the cracked mother - loved it
The only part I was not a big fan of was the chilly eating one, I never liked it in HDDCS either so maybe didn't enjoy it here also
But your writing lovely just lovely
pls continue soon
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