OS: (old) : ~'Saath Hamara'~

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Posted: 2014-07-07T06:14:43Z

Hello alll ,, 
This is the OS I wrote long back when priya was angry with ram for hiding the that  ram & juhi's marriage was about to  happened ... & than she was not talking to ram & than finally Ram convinced priya.in peehu's bday party & than we got that beautiful RaYa dance on Lamha-Lamha song.. Yeah!! That one only...!!!  I am talking about #BALH episode 530 (peehu bday party) it was something in continuation to it ... Wrote it that time & I'm posting it now ;)  (this was my first Os)

~'Saath Hamara'~

( I'm continuing from Friday episode 530... party going well ... at last neha too joined them in peehu's birthday celebration.. they all had a great time together...)

*Later in night,, in green room..*
Ram standing near window.. thinking about how every thing is now going well between priya & peehu ... & finally every thing between priya & him is cleared.. (he is standing their with a relieved feeling. )
(Priya enter room ... she went to Ram... stood next to him...  she observed ram for a moment...& said with her sweet voice)
Priya : Mr. Kapoor!! (Ram turned to priya.. )
Ram : (with a smile... looking to her& smiling) haan...
Priya : app kya soch rahe h..?
Ram : aaj ke bare me hi soch raha tha Priya... finally sab kuch thik ho gaya ... Hame hamari peehu mil gai... muje bhot khushi hui jab usne hamari baato ko samjha aur feeling ki respect ki ...,, (taking a long pause) Aur phir ... (looking at her with a cute smile)
Priya : aur kya Mr. Kapoorrr...
Ram :  aur phir priya hum dono k beech bhi sab kuch thik ho gaya aaj... ...muje tum wapas mil gai ... m very happy ki tum ne muje maaf kar diya.. (ram took priyas hand) Thank you priya... tum maan gai ... nahi to mera to koi b plan kaam ni kar raha tha ... but tum samaj gai ... thank u priya, for coming back to me,,, ab tum mere saath ho... I'm feeling relived after 7 long years ...(Ram moved to hug her but she stopped him saying "aahhaann"..)
Ram with a confused look said.. 'array'
Priya: Mr. Kapoor hamere beech sari
misunderstanding clear ho gai h .. but aap bhool rahe hai ki .. we're still not husband and wife... so you can't ..
Ram : array ... tumhare liye mere
pyar se jayada wo divorce paper importance rakhte h... jo register bhi nahi hue...
Priya : nahi mr kapoor .. app ka pyar mere liye sab se jayada special h ... but(mischievously) phir bhi jo sach hai wo hai...
(Ram think for a moment & says) .. priya mere saath chalo...
Priya : kaha mr. Kapoor ..
Ram : oohoo priya !! kitna bolti ho tum .. muje par bharosha hai na ...
Priya : khud se b jayada bharosa hai muje app par mr kapoor... par bataiye to kaha ja rahe h hum...
Ram : agar bharosa h to phir ye sawal jawab choro aur chalo mere saath main tumhe 5 min de raha hu... jaldi se aa jao .. main niche wait kar raha hu tumhara ... 
(Saying this ram moved down
stairs...)
*in living room* 
Ram made a call..

*Next scene ...*
Ram stopped the car ...
Priya : mr kapoor hum kaha aa gae h ...
Ram : bhar to aao priya,, sab batata hu ..
(Ram Priya moved Out of car)
RaYa are standing out of a temple
Priya : mr kapoor hummm... yahhha... is waqt kyu aae h ...
Ram : priya tumhi ne to kaha ki hum married nahi hai... to maine socha ki jab hamare beech me sab kuch thik ho hi gaya hai ... to phir der kyu karna ...
"PRIYA KYA TUM MUJE SE SHADI KAROGI ..????"
Priya (with teary eyes,,, nods in yes)
(priya looking to him with tears in her eyes thinking ram aap muje se kitna jayada pyar karte h ... I promise I will always be with you )
(Ram gave his hand towards her, priya slipped her hand in his hand both moved towards temple holding hands...)

*in the temple*
Priya is supprised to see all the arrangements are done for their marriage ... (simple arrangements
but all necessary arrangements are done pundit ji present there.. ) 

Suddenly a voice came from behind "arayy waah aa gae tum dono"
Priya turned in supprised .. their best friends Neha & Vikram are their ... 
(Ram hug vikram & says ...) Thank you yaar vikram, meri help karne ke liye... raat ke is samay sirf tu hi hai jo ye arrange kara sakta tha mere liya... sab kuch ready kara diya h tune to...Thank you yaar !
(Now everything is cleard in priya's mind . That its ram vikram & nehas plan for marriage... at this very moment of night ... )
Neha : araay priya tum itni shock kyu ho...jab sab kuch thik ho hi gaya hai tumhare aur fatty ke beech to der kyu karna... chalo jaldi se tumhari & fatty ki shadi kara hi dete hai...
Vikram : haan ram chal ab der mat kar jaldi se phere le le priya k saath..

pandit ji started rituals... All the ritual r going on ...
Neha did the gadh-bandhan
Ram priya  took phere ...
Ram took mangalsutra from his pocket & tie it to priya ... Neha gave sindoor to ram. Ram put the
sindoor on priyas fore head...
All the marriage ritual are completed...RaYa declared to married...

Vikram & neha (in happiness) hugged RaYa ... & congratulated
them for their marriage...
All four are very happy ...
Vikram : ram dekha finally sab thik ho hi gaya aur ab to shadi bhi ho gai hai ...
Neha : main bhot khush hu tum dono k liye...
Perfect RaYa eye lock(blushed)... (Neha chough mockingly ..)
Neha : Waise Ram & priya main tumhe yaad diladu hum log abhi mandir me hi h ...
#RaYa blush
Neha : to ram priya chale ab...
Ram & priya: ab kaha jana h ...
Neha: (mischievously says) .. array tum dono ki shadi ho gai h... to wedding gift to banta hau..
 aur meri aur vikram ki taraf se tum dono k liye ek surprise gift ready hai,, Tum dono k liye room book kara diya hai . HOTEL WESTINN me...:p
#RaYa shocked & embarrassed.. trying to escape eye contact looking here & there. .
Ram : vikram yaar kya kar raha hai ... sambhalna apni pagal biwi ko... kuch bhi bole ja rahi h ...
Vikram : (smiling) tu ghabra kyu raha h ram neha to sirf mazak kar rahi h ...:D
All four laughed ...
scene freezed

Thats it ..
Toh how was it ... plz give honest rplys ...
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Posted: 2014-07-07T06:33:14Z
 hey  sorry  i am  late  

just  reserved to  comment  first..

wow it  was a lovely  OS. 

i too wished to see their  secret  wedding.  

that  was so  pretty .  

vikram  neha  did their  wedding ..

westin in the  end is  so  good. 

keep  writing  more.. 

thanku  for the  OS 

Edited by luvbalh - 2014-07-08T22:17:31Z
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Posted: 2014-07-07T10:02:30Z
AwesomeStarStar
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Posted: 2014-07-07T10:32:06Z
Very nice story pls do write more and pls pm me next tym
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Posted: 2014-07-07T12:19:38Z
lovely update..
enjoyed reading..
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Posted: 2014-07-07T12:50:54Z
Glad now everything is fine between Raya
They are getting married again
VikNeha was always their for them
lovely os on Raya
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Posted: 2014-07-07T14:41:08Z
Clap lovely os.. Smile
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Posted: 2014-07-08T22:23:28Z
n res comment.. 

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