Originally posted by: priya_remix
Tadaaa!! Here I am!
I know you must be thinking this girl is there to torture me and eat my head when I m not updating and now that I have updated where is she?
Frankly even after the torture I gave I had not expected an update so soon as I knw you too busy and that u needed time to sort out things about this story!
I can completely understand that. Esp with LRR I had so many things planned in my head but the story did not go that way! Instead with every update the track kept changing and hence even I took a 10 to 12 days of break from updating it.
Now even though I have the whole story plotted out on my pc I dont know if it will end up that way!
I think I should apologise to u for pressurising you to update. You seriously need a break from Love me! Guess you can focus on ur other updates who are longing for your attention. After all they are your babies too mumma!! 😆
Okay now to the latest update. There are many wow points -
Loved that Kalpi took a stand against Raghav just for her mom even though she loved him so dearly. You could see she was almost there and I thought she would hug him after caressing his face when he pleaded her not to go! But no she composed herself and walked away with dignity! It was needed just to prove to Raghav that he should not have USED her to get back to Kamla!
Separating a daughter from a mother is no joke and he was about to challenge this relationship with his based on lies, revenge and betrayal. Yes he has betrayed Kalpi by making her believe that everything between them had just happened and was not his 'PLAN'. However she cant help herself as she has already fallen for him and the emotional turmoil that she is going through is like a storm within her. To choose between her mom and Raghav was not easy for her! But being a dutiful daughter she did what she thought was right!
But I am waiting for the day when she realises that he had touched her claimed her only after she was legally his wife. In fact he has never touched her or taken advantage of her as Kalpi Jadhav but had made her his knowing she was Kalpana Raghav Singhania! That would give a new dimension to her image about Raghav. He has not been with another woman since he has touched her and this itself proves his loyalty to her.
Mostly people do remember things that were spoken to them when they were in coma. Will Kalpi get flashes where Raghav had spent innumerable and endless hours talking to her and caressing her and whispering to her?
Kamla has to reveal the truth to Kalpi as this too would help Kalpi empathise with Raghav as to why he what he did thought that does not justify his actions.
Loved Maya thoroughly in ur ff! Infact I feel you have used this character to optimum best as she plays along as a perfect friend who does not hesitate to whack her friend for his stupidity and being a wonderful support to Kalpi not forcing her opinions on her and letting her be. Also handling Kamla as she is going to be a mother soon she has already started realising Kamla's worries and fears and relates to it!
Though I too felt that I missed the spark in your update which is normally there I am not able to put the finger on exactly what. Maybe this was a forced update and I really repent for pressurising you. Please take your own time and collect your thought before any more updates. And dont be disheartened the update was really good but the angelpureness was missing! 😊
I know you will come back with a bang in ur next update. And I trust you to take the story forward in the right direction.
Really appreciate your efforts fuzz I know how difficult it is to type out the story when u r not in the right frame of mind.👏👏
U r a ⭐️! 🤗to u and kisses too!
Pssst I know you got depressed because I refused to do the pole dance for you! Promise I will do it this time only for you! 😆 Love u...
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