You are absolutely right... The confrontation I had originally planned for was going to be really sweet and romantic and in their bedroom... Where she would leave him for her mum even after knowing that he loves her. The reason I chose this route in the last moment because I felt the story would end quicker and there would be no angst between them. So I have kind of reversed it.
Before she would have found out everything without meeting Ragav, that would have been several chapter with very little Ragna. Something I knew the readers would not be happy about. Now she will get to know everything through Maya with lots of Ragna scenes hopefully.
Please don't ever stop giving a true opinion. It does not hurt me. If anything I am pleased because it helps me see where I am erring. I welcome critism that will help me and the story.
You know the reason I always ask for feedback is because to me the story is average. I connect differently to the story, the chapters are not that impactful when I write, because I have thought of it for so long and in so many angles and because I know where it is heading there is no surprise element. When readers say wow or amazing without giving details. I feel very lost because I don't understand what was wow or amazing.
Your feedback, di, Natasha, Priya, mini, charu, oh gosh hope I didn't forget anyone else... They are detailed and it helps me understand and see what is amazing or not in the chapter. It helps give me direction and steer the story accordingly.
Thank you so much for that... Coz without u guys I don't think the story would be where it is. Mwah
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Thanks Fuzz for understanding what I was trying to say. After posting my comments I was really worried how you were going to take it or whether I was successful in telling you what I felt. Also I was wondering if I had bashed you without reading properly. Then I read the story twice and found that my opinion remains the same. Then only I felt like checking if you had commented.
I think what you did seems rushed up but it's the only option or as you said the story will be over soon. Let her realise his love slowly. Let them fall in love all over again. But you are among the few people I know to whom I can comment frankly. I value your friendship too much.
I just read that you asking everyone whether we want you to rewrite the chapter. I would say no and follow what you thought initially. I wouldn't want a forced update. I have immense faith in you as a writer and as always I'm in awe of you and your stories. It's just that you have always given updates par excellence and so we can't accept anything below that. Don't rewrite your story just for our sake. Concentrate on how to move it forward. We will always support you with our comments till you get bored with our extra long ones. Love you, Mwaah!
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Ooh the romantic bedroom scene I had thought off, I know where to use it... Oh bless I am glad I didn't use before.
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