My VEEBA OS Collection#2:OS-DILWALE DULHA Le Jayenge!!!,Prt2,pg-6... - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Loved it Sina ji...
Update soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
HI Sina dear... i had goosebumps all over reading this... cant the stupid CVs plan out something really really intense like u wrote...Vishal will nail it with all grace...uff so so so superb...Thanks dear...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Thank you sooo much for continuing. Oh my for sure melted in the first half. and the second half so painful. This is how it should be in the show too. Realizing and repenting!😭😭😭 

Such powerful lines. I cld actually picture Balu (vishal) speaking those lines to veera in his low AYM tone! πŸ‘πŸ‘ Thank you so much for writing this.πŸ‘πŸΌ and thank you for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
It was such a joy reading the update coz you wrote it so well  i was really mesmerized when i read that scene where Baldev leans so close to her...
aah so much intensity between VeeBa!!❀️
i wish CVs show something like this in the show...😳
Thanks for PMπŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
VeeBa scene was very romantic tho it was too emotional.i want veera to open up her heart.only then she'll get her baldev back
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
It was so emotional. Baldev pierced her heart with his words but he is sad about it too.
He's such a true lover. Great writing, Sina. Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Now that was heart wrenching πŸ’” ,oh my poor ballu i was crying along side him πŸ˜­, it was damn touching Sina πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Thank u for the PM! 
Awww.!! Really iam touched by this OS! Very well written as usual!! πŸ‘
Ballu crying! πŸ˜­ Looking forward for ur next part!
Hope u will continue ur other works too..!! Glad u r back! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
  Not knowing that the object of her tears was standing outside her window,leaning against the wall,with closed eyes,and tears dripping down his handsome face..
 Baldeva β€οΈThe very last line was heart wrenching dear πŸ˜­

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome updateTfs for pm πŸ˜ƒ