HI Sina dear... i had goosebumps all over reading this... cant the stupid CVs plan out something really really intense like u wrote...Vishal will nail it with all grace...uff so so so superb...Thanks dear...
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Thank you sooo much for continuing. Oh my for sure melted in the first half. and the second half so painful. This is how it should be in the show too. Realizing and repenting!πππ
Such powerful lines. I cld actually picture Balu (vishal) speaking those lines to veera in his low AYM tone! ππ Thank you so much for writing this.ππΌ and thank you for the PM
It was such a joy reading the update coz you wrote it so well i was really mesmerized when i read that scene where Baldev leans so close to her... aah so much intensity between VeeBa!!β€οΈ i wish CVs show something like this in the show...π³ Thanks for PMπ
It was so emotional. Baldev pierced her heart with his words but he is sad about it too. He's such a true lover. Great writing, Sina. Thanks for the pm. π
Not knowing that the object of her tears was standing outside her window,leaning against the wall,with closed eyes,and tears dripping down his handsome face..
Baldeva β€οΈThe very last line was heart wrenching dear π
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