Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...
its awesomely well written ππΌ
great one Aani βοΈ keep it up β€οΈ
Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...
its awesomely well written ππΌ
great one Aani βοΈ keep it up β€οΈ
Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Aani, I for one, am glad you took the plunge to write this π It was well worth it
see ya in the next one...
Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore
Goodness! That was phenomenal! I had so much fun reading it!
The kiss was timed rightπ I wish you hadn't ended it.
He cannot let anything happen to her, EVER. She is too good
for her own good, may be that is why god intended he marry her - she needs
someone to keep her safe and out of harm' way at all and any time.
This is Ishita ...in Raman's eyes...She is too perfect for his imperfections...that makes him resist his growing feelings towards her...
Concern comes naturally to Ishita and when its for Raman ..the way of showing care is way too different..loved her irritation and complaints about his carelessness about his injury ...and the kiss...its after effect ..everything was beautiful ...can't wait for them to confess in any of ur fictions..
Originally posted by: _Deepika_
Awww...such an adorable piece of writing ...poor IshRa trying so hard to control themselves and failing miserably...loved Raman's soul talk about his description about Ishita as Sona..his concern and possessiveness was so divine...
He cannot let anything happen to her, EVER. She is too good for her own good, may be that is why god intended he marry her - she needs someone to keep her safe and out of harm' way at all and any time.
This is Ishita ...in Raman's eyes...She is too perfect for his imperfections...that makes him resist his growing feelings towards her...
Concern comes naturally to Ishita and when its for Raman ..the way of showing care is way too different..loved her irritation and complaints about his carelessness about his injury ...and the kiss...its after effect ..everything was beautiful ...can't wait for them to confess in any of ur fictions..
Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
This is absolutely divine!! I enjoyed reading it dear.
I was really disappointed that the Bhallas reached home too early n hese two didnt get the opportunity to get all over each other trying to release from the curtain prison but i am happy after reading this!
Superb!!
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