Originally posted by: serendipity.
Can you give me a list of ALL the places i have to EDIT my comment on!??!?!!?!? 🤣
This one im editing AAJ HII! PAKKA! Subbu ki kasam!!! 🤣
🤣 🤣 PM karoon ya yahi post kardo? 🤣
HII! 😃
Subbu ki kasam khaai thi, i HAD to do this! 😆
Hayee hamara Subu bach gaya 😛 😆😆
I had a great great time reading this OS Aani, it was very different from your usual work. You usually are extremely high on content and think from a lot of angles, are conceptual... This obviously was no less, but you focused on the sort of cliche, more awkward moments, focusing on IshRa's physical call and attraction, that is basically AMAZING, and a fun, HOT read! :D
😆😆😆 this was DIFFERENT for me too 😳 since it had to be an extension of a scene which couldn't have an actual story to it... I did what I could and am humbled with the response 😳 Also thanks for calling this HOT 🤣 makes me proud I can pull this one off too 😎 😆😆 you have no idea how nervous I was about posting this 😳
The whole thing, it was so so similar to what actually happened you know... the Bhallas ka aana, the Raman ka hiding away his inner feelings and badhti hui physical attraction with regards to ishita with his taunts, mocks and super awesome one-liners, and i LOVEEED Ishita here! 😆 hah. but still always in-sync with her character, being worried for hubby dearie, owning to the fact of her caring nature overall... but this was PURE BLISS <3
Like I said to Lucky in my reply I was being true to the spoilers and was keeping this PG18 😆😆 so had to have the family back... also knowing Ishita, she is such a caring soul of course she would rush to help Raavan Kumar even if he shocked the daylights out of her with that out of the blue smooch 😆😆 and RKB being RKB had to have retorts and disguise how very much bowled over is he by his biwi 😉
HAHAHA I LOVEEED How Raman almost put the whole blame on Ishita of her not just checking him out... but... you know... FEELING him Out and Out! 🤣 🤣 and then typical... Ishitas lecture and all he could think of to stop her from it was... well THE OBVIOUS! haha. wish they'd do this in the show. goes so well with their characters and situation! 😆
😆😆 this is courtesy RKB and his ATTACK comment 🤣 🤣 in SBS or SBB he infact uses the words mujpe toot padne ka irada toh nahi 🤣 🤣 as if he would OBJECT or could do that if Ishu truly sets her mind at seducing him 😉 ... so of course when he tries to act highhanded she has to bring him down, which will I hope sometime in the future lead to show' RKB following in the footsteps of my RKB 😉😆😆
and aah! THE KISSS! <3 <3 How amazingly perfect WAS it?? ☺️
Raman's gulp! 🤣 << i could sooo see Karan Patel's face there! :P
Would you call me crazy if I said I did too 😆😆 somehow I had this image of him doing it because when I was writing this part I remembered how he reacted when he opened that box on their SR and was zapped to see its a condom!! 🤣Absolutely LOVED the OS and the fact that even after the kiss nothing changed :) they were back! LOL amazing!
I aim to please 😳NB IS A ROCKSTAR FOR MAKING YOU WRITE OUT AND OUT CLICHE AWKWARD ROMANCE! 😃
Meri request bhi poori karo? :( SUBBU. JEALOUSY. PLEEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! LOL
😆😆 I am glad you liked this ,,,you did tell me once you are all for cliches 😛 and of course Subu aaye to sahi ek baar, I would storm the forum with his fics 🤣 I simply need to see them - Ishu Subu and Ramz in a frame together once for inspiration to strike me😳
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