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Part 1- Below
"Ghrina karte hai hum unse..."
"Nafrat karte hai hum unse ammijaan!!!"
Both Jalal andJodha said simultaneously. It had been a week since their seperation. Things were getting worse in Agra and Amer was no less. Jalal had returned to the old cruel and ruthless SHEHENSHAH JALALLUDIN MOHAMMED. It seemed that someone had had taken out life from Jodha. She looked so pale, so weak.
**FLASHBACK**
Diwaan-e-khaas
Guards
announced
the arrival of Shehahshah Jalalludin Mohammed. An enraged Jalal made his way to
the throne and ordered the guards to bring Jodha in DWK. Hamida was shocked
whereas Maham and Ruqaiya were happy.
"What is Jalalupto now?" Hamida thought
As soon Jodha arrived in DWK, she gave a long angry glare to Jalal.
" Begum Jodha ne mughal saltanat ke saath gad... gaddari( his voice glitched saying that) ki hai. Ye chori chupe kisi shakhs se milti thiwo bhi raat ke ghane andhere mein. Hum inhe abhi isi waqt Amer lautne ka hukm dete hain.
He turned to Adgah Sahab and continued, " Adgah sahab Raja Bharmal ko yeh paigam bhejwaya jaaye ki wo.. jald se jald Agra aaker humse mile
Adgah who was shocked listening to his words nodded. Everyone in DWK was shocked beyond words..
"Was
Shehenshah saying the truth? Is Jodha begum characterless? Is she taking
revenge from Shehenshah?" Entire court was filled with these murmurs.
Jalal
roared "Diwaan-e-khaas barkhast" and walked out of the court without
looking at
anyone.
Jodha
was shocked to the core listening to his words. She felt as if she had died,
her whole world had come crashing down. She
collapsed on the ground, crying profusely. Hamida ran to her, made her stand up
by her shoulders and hugged her tightly.. " Bas Jodha. Beta hum jaante
hain
Jalal ko koi galat fehmi hui hai. Aap aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti. Hume aap par
bharosa hai beta." But to no avail. All her encouraging words seemed to
only
add to Jodha's pain. "Unhe.. unhe humper vish..vishwas nahi hai
ammijaan" she
said, crying
" Kis vishwas ki baat kar rahi hai aap Jodha begum.. haan?" Ruqaiyya said, sacarastically. "EK gair mard se raat ke andhere mein milne ke bawjood aap chahti hai ki jalal aap par bharosa karen?? Kabhi nahi.. Sach to yeh hai Jodha begum, ki aapki sacchai Jalal jaan chuke hain.. Aur ab aap humesha ke liye Agra aur Jalal ki zindagi se bahar ho jaayengi. Ruqaiyya mocked her and started laughing nefariously. All the other harem women started accusing her of being a characterless woman. "BAS!!! AB HUM JODHA KE KHILLAF EK LAFZ NAHI SUNENGE!" Hamida bursted on all harem women. "Chaliye Jodha.." But Jodha couldn't even get what is happening around her. Her mind was stuck on his cruel and harsh words... "" Begum Jodha ne mughal
saltanat ke saath gaddari ki hai. Ye chori chupe kisi shakhs se milti thi wo bhi raat ke ghane andhere mein. Hum inhe abhi isi waqt Amer lautne ka hukm dete hain.
**FLASHBACK** ENDS
" Unhone humare charitr par ungli uthaai hai maasa. Hum unhe kabhi kshama nahi karenge... Kabhi nahi!!" She shouted. She could still feel the pain inside her heart.. the same heart which started loving Jalal...
*AGRA- JALAL'S CHAMBER'*
"Unhone mughal sultanat ko dhoka diya hai ammijaan. Unhone begum ke aude ko sharmsaar kar diya hai.. Hum unki shakl bhi nahi dekenge" Roared Jalal. By now he had clearly understood that one should never trust anyone.. not even his own shadow. He was not only hurt.. much more than that. He had started trusting Jodha, loving her.
"Jalal... beta hum tumhari ammi hain. Tumhe humse apni takleef chupaane ki zaruraat nahi hain" Hamida said. She put her hand on his shoulders, trying to comfort him.
Jalal turned and immediately hugged her and sobbed in her arms. Hamida carressed her head. She knew he loved Jodha.. and she knew very well that Jodha loves him too. </font>
"Kyun ammijaan... Jab hume unse mohabbat hone lagi thi tab hi kyu... kyun??" He sobbed terribly like a small child. " Jab sab kuch theek ho raha tha tab ye..."
" Himmat rakho jalal. Sab theek ho jaayega."
" Kuch theek nahi hoga Ammijaan. " He broke the hug and looked at Hamida with raging eyes. She was fearful of this look of Jalal
" Hum.. Hum Jodha ko talak denge.." Jalal said in a firm yet broken tone.
PRECAP: JODHA RECEIVES PAIGAM FROM AGRA REGARDING TALAK.. JO SHOCKED
Hii Guys I know this is a bit boring but I promise ki agle part mein kaafi saare twists and turns honge.. thode to likes bante hain na yaar.. And this chapter is dedicated to my dearest Nancy di and Shahbhavini di!! The nicest persons I've ever met.. ANd guys I've read almost every story of Akdha and some beautiful writers I know are: Tanhiat, Azra, Pallavi, Indu, Nancy di and Shahbhavini di and Sreshtha di.. I'm sorry I know I've not commented but I love all your works... hats off to you all
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