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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

oh my god... ur story is beyond expectations... i just love it the way u write... nd moreover the way you are giving us surprises by updating soon... waiting for the next or haan... i jussst loooveee ittt... or haan the next announcement may be that jodha will be mallika e hindustan.. bcoz for me... no announcement is more important than to increase the value of jodha in eyes other... or it may also that he may ask sorry infront of everyone... nd announce that now onward whatever jodha will say.. i will think it as god's sign... etc etc...😉😉

Aapke suggestions zaroor use karungi next chappy!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u... always my pleasure.. nd i will love it if u will use my suggestion in ur next👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii GUys!!
First of all I am tremendously sorry! Aaj update likhte waqt thodi si distract ho gayi thi! Akdha ki pics dekhti hi reh gayi!!😳
SO here goes the next chappy..:

RECAP: Jodha got angry and decided to teach him a lesson. So she leaned closer to his face and pretended to kiss him. And she was right, Jalal closed his eyes. Jodha immediately ran from there and shouted "Aankhen Kholiye Shahenshah!! Aap hume nahi pakad paaye!!" Jalal opened his eyes in amazement and saw Jodha running away.

He smirked at her wittiness and said, " Aakhir kab tak bhaagein gi aap Jodha? Humari mohabbat aapko humare kareeb le hi aayegi.."

PART:5

Jodha is running through the harem, smiling,giggling. She was feeling out of the world. She couldn't control hersef now. She had lost her heart to Jalal and she wanted to scream it so loud that every single soul in the world could hear it. She couldn't see anyone... all she could see was his innocent and charming face, his mischiefs, his love confession and... and his guilt expressions. She remembered how he didn't dare to even look in her eyes and apologise. How badly he was feeling guilty. Her face had a cheerful look a moment ago and now it completely changed as she recalled the terrible condition of her love. His tears started flowing from her eyes.

Jalal who was going from there noticed Jodha and also saw her crying. He mistook his behaviour for her tears. "I am so sorry Jodha... I should have never insulted you.. Lekin ab main apni galati par rounga nahi. Balki usse sudharunga." He said to himself. "I'll surely make it up to you Jodha... that's my promise."

Jodha quickly wiped her tears and said to herself: "Jodha ab tujhe beete kal ko bhulna hoga. Tum hona Shahenshah ko sambhaalne ke liye. Woh bhi iss ghatna se avashya hi shighr bahar aa jaayenge." Saying so she again smiles and blushes at the same time remembering their love confession and also the Hamida sequence.

"Shahenshah bhi naa... Humare aur ammijaan ki aawaaz mein bhed hi nahi kar paaye. Kaise baatein kar rahein the ammijaan ke samaksh." She murmurs as she cheerfully runs to her chamber.

Jalal listens to her murmurs and smirks. "Mohabbat mein kisi shakhs ko uski aas paas ki khabr nahi hoti.. khabr to bas apni mohabbat ki hoti hai.. Humara bhi to yahi haal hai Jodha."

Jodha was running through the harem when she accidently clashed with Ruqaiya, who was fumed because of her fight with Hoshiyar.

FLASHBACK-RUQAIYA'S CHAMBER

"Huzoor! Kamal ho gaya huzoor! Aap sunengi to yakin nahi karengi..." Hoshiyar exclaimed as he entered her chamber without her permission.

"GUSTAKH!! NAMURAD! Tumhari himmat kaise hui humare hojre mein humari ijazat ke bina ghusne ki! ( she slapped him hard and he fell on her feet)

"Muafi huzoor! Humse galti ho gayi.. Khabar hi aisee thi..."

" Kya duniya khatm ho gayi jo tum mare jaa rahe ho hume bataane ke liye??"

" Huzoor. Jodha begum aur Shahenshah ka talaq nahi hua. Balki Shahenshah unhe apni bahon mein uthakar apne hojre mein le gaye!" ( She did not know the whole story)

" BADTAMEEZ!! ( another hard slap landed on his face) Aisa ho hi nahi sakta. Jalal ke liye to napaak ko chuna kya.. use ek nazar dekhna bhi gawaara nahi hai! Abhi isi waqt humari nazron se dur ho jaao! Nahi to tumhara wo haal karenge ki tum khud se nazren nahi mila paaoge!"
FLASHBACK ENDS.

"Dekh ke nahi chal sakti Jodha BEGUM" It was evident from her voice that she was mad at Jodha.

" Kshama chahte hain Ruqaiya begum.. humara dhyan kahi aur tha." She folded her hands in a sincere apology request and turned to move. But before she could, Ruqaiya pushed her and said " Gustakh! Tumhari himmat kaise hui humare saamne aane ki? Aur apna yeh dhong kisi aur ke saamne karna. Hum tumhe chodenge nahi..." She raised her hand to slap her but immediately a hand stopped her hand. It was none another than Jalal.

"Yeh aap kya kar rahi hain Ruqaiya begum? Aap Jodha begum par itni choti si baat ke liye utha rahi hain? Waise bhi galti keval unki nahi thi.. Aapne dhyan kyu nahi diya bataaiye hume?" Jalal asked her angrily. He could not stand someone hurting Jodha,HIS Jodha.

"Yeh aapko ho kya gaya hai Jalal? Iss mamuli BANDHI ke liye aap hume daant rahe hai? Aisa kya jaadu kar diya hai iss to kodi ki..."

"RUQAIYAAA" Jalal shouted as he raised his hand to slap her. Ruqaiya eyes widen in fear as she saw this new face of Jalal. He never talked to her in high tone,let alone slap her. She ran from there, her eyes continuosly shedding tears.

Jalal turned to Jodha and said, "Unhe muaf kardijye Jodha... pata nahi kaise unhone yeh gustakhi ki... " Before he could complete his sentence Jodha placed her fingers on his lips and replied, "Shahenshah.. Ruqaiya begum kisi baat ko lekar dukhi thi. Shayaad isi liye unhone humse yeh sab kuch kaha. Isme unka dosh nahi tha." Jalal was amazed at her purity and divinity. "Aap itni paak-saaf kaise ho sakti hain Jodha?" He asked her with an innocent and charming face. Jodha blushed at his compliment. Jodha turned to go from there but Jalal quickly grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him. Jodha crashed on his chest, her head deep dug in his chest, her cheeks crimson red.

"Hum aapse behad mohabbat karte hain Jodha..." He whispered in a sensual tone.

"Hum bhi.." She replied with equal passion.

Jalal suddenly broke the hug and said, "Accha Jodha begum, jaldi taiyaar ho jaaiye. Aaj aapko Diwaan E Khaas mein aana hai."

"Diwaan-E-Khaas mein? Kyon Shahenshah?" Jodha asked, surprised by this sudden program.

"Baaki sawaal baad mein. Abhi kuch hi der mein Diwaan-E-Khaas shuru ho jaayega. Aap taiyaar ho jaiye. Hum aapko lene aa jaayenge."

Jodha nodded and greeted Jalal. She quietly returned to her chambers and sat it front of Kanha.

" Aapki leela bhi niraali hain Kanha... aapne humara vivaah us vyakti ke saath kar waya jisse hum ghrina karte the. Aur ab hum unse itna prem karne lage hain ki unke bina ek kshan nahi bitaana chahte??"

Jodha stood up and quickly changed her clothes. She wore a beautifl yellow lehenga. She also wore the ancestral necklace which Hamida had gifted her in meena bazaar. She was looking like Allah's angel. She was beautiful not only from outside but also from inside. Her purity, her divinity increased her beauty manifold.

Jalal came in her hojra and was dumbstruck seeing the beauty in front of him. Her deep doe like eyes, her red cheeks, her soft rosy lips. He was completely mesmerised by her. Jodha was way too embarrased seeing Jalal intently staring at her. She went near him and shook him. That was the moment he came out of her beauty spell.

"Hum acche nahi lag rahe kya??" She asked with a childlike tone.

"Mashallah! Khuda ka noor aapke chehre pe nazar aa raha hai Jodha. Aapki ek nazar kisi ka bhi katl kar de.."

"Bas bas.Diwaane-E-Khaas ke lye vilambh ho raha hai." She turned to go but Jalal caught her wrist and pulled her back.

" Thodi der baad chale jaaye Jodha..." He slowly moved towards her and Jodha, she was continuously moving backwards. Finally Jalal captured her between hi mand the wall. HE leaned closer and kissed sensually on her cheeks which turned red due to his kiss.😳😳😳 He moved to her rosy lips but before he could kiss her, she pushed him back. " Chaliye Shahenshah!!!"

" Jaise aapki marzi begum sahiba!" He replied and they both walked together hand in hand to the court. 😳

DIWAAN-E-KHAAS

All present in the court were surpirsed seeing their Shahenshah and Jodha begum walking together hand in hand. Shahenshah never do this!!

Jalal made his way to the throne whereas Jodha took her seat amongst the other harem women.

Jalal addressed the court, " Hum jaante hai ki aap sab yahi soch rahe honge ki aaj humne aap sab ko yahaan itne kam samay mein hazir hone ka hukm kyon diya. Lekin humare hisaab se iss elaan ke liye isse behtar waqt aur nahi ho sakta tha."

Entire court was filled with murmurs. "Aisa kya hai jo Shahenshah kal tak ka waqt nahi kar paayein??" Jalal raised his hand, ordering everyone to be quiet.

"Aaj hum jo karne jaa rahein hain, wo aaj tak kabhi kisi ne nahi kiya hoga. Hum Jodha begum is darkhwast karte hain ki woh humaare saath aake baithe."

Jodha's heart skipped a beat as soon as he completed his sentence. "What? He wants me to sit beside him? Why?" She quietly stood up and went near the throne and stood there, facing Jalal. Jalal grinned. HE knew that she will never ever sit with him like that.

" Hum aaj se aur abhi se Jodha begumko Mallika-E-Hindustan ghoshit karte hain. Agar kisi ne bhi ( looking at Ruqaiya) Mallika-E-Hind Begum JODHA ki tauheen ki toh uska sar kalam kar diya jaayega!"

He observed the expressions of each and every one present there, most of them seemed happy regarding his decision. But not all, He could sense that many begums like Pinaz and Ruqaiya were mad at him for taking this decision. But it actually didn't matter to him. Finally, his eyes met with those doe like eyes of hers, widen in shock. He saw a strange mixture of love,shy, shock and many other expressions. He smirked as he assured her with his eyes.

"Junglee Billi!" He thought.

Jalal stood up and clapped twice. A bandhi came towards him with a tray in her hands. It had something covered with a silk cloth on it. Jalal took the tray from her and dismissed her. He took off the cover from the tray and unrevealed a beautiful diamond studded crown waiting to adorn her head. Jalal crowned Jodha as Mallika-E-Hind.👏👏👏 Hamida came forward and took all of their balla( bad luck) and blessed them.

And guys!! D-W-K abhi baaki hain! hehe...

Regards,

Anushka..

Edited by Anushka8722 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update👏
ur writing is amazing 😃
loved it 😃
jodha is now mallika e hind 😃
update soon😃
first to comment 😆
Edited by SARA4444 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

superb update... contonue soon but long chapi ok love u

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii Guys!
First of all, there are many things which I wanna discuss with you... I have a good news! My vacations are starting from 18th May till 30th June so I will be able to give you all more frequent and long updates!
Coming to the bad news, they are two:
First is that now I will not update tomorrow or day after as I have my English exam on Monday and seriously maine kuch bhi nahi padha hain!
Second is that I have been selected for the leadership camp( Wait, that's not a bad news!😉😉) regarding which I will have to go to Camp bagicha, Ramgarh in Uttarakhand. As its a school trip so I will definitely not be able to communicate wid u people by any means. It will take place for 3 days as far as Gaurav Sir told us. I'm not sure of the exact dates. I'll get the circular on Monday nd then I'll inform you all. I hope that you people will wait for me to return. But it will be after 18th May thats for sure!!!
Hope you'll not forget me and my ff...
Love you all!!!
Regards,
Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SARA4444

amazing update👏

ur writing is amazing 😃
loved it 😃
jodha is now mallika e hind 😃
update soon😃
first to comment 😆

Me blushing now😳
a tight 🤗 for you !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

superb update... contonue soon but long chapi ok love u

zaroor!! AB I guess monday ko hi update milega but a long one which will be nice...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you sooo much !!! I feelso happy nd out of the world wenever I read your comments!!!
Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow wow dear😊😊. i knew it this is going to happen😆. that selfish ruqu i just hate her😡.finally our jodha became jalla's mallika🥳 .nicely written .continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm🤗

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