Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th)

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Asholei Dushtu, naa?

Tumi jaanle kibhabe je ami Bengali? bepar ta more or less shobai jaane na, jodio amar hindi is atrocious enough je shondhe ho jonok. Puro flatter kore dila, ek dui line likhe, and amiyo gole jacchi brishti te ice lolly er moto--Ei bhabe bangla bole mon joy korar chestha ta puro puri unfair madam!

Kolkatar theke naki Dhaka?
Navin

Hey navin,

Lol u r too cute...it will sound really creepy but say hello to yr biggest stalker me myself Brishty begum. Tomar akta post porechilam jekhane likhechila u r from Dhaka.. I'm from Dhaka too...yr Hindi is perfect!!! Atleast for me coz I can't speak Hindi at all...whenever I'm in the forum I look for yr posts...u hv a gift girl ...and I'm not a writer at all in any way.. ..Dui tin line Lekha amar kache Everest joyer moton...hence the silent reader...amar j goldie status dekhteso that all came from " totally agree" "tfs" "pls update soon" kind of comments. Keep rocking

Ps. Amar naam kintu shudhu brishty not begum

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

You bring out the emotions, the pain , anger, disillusionment and hope with such intensity...ouf!!!!

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

This is such a beautifully written story . I am glad you will continue on the forum. Looking forward to more of your posts.

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mona

@automaticstart

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

omg i missed it out completely i was having exams n was not regular here till today n the first thing i read it is .
i dont know how u do it everytime i am speechless . i am sure not will do justice in competition of ur writing .any praise anything.so aman sa is on mission . i am sure it is just the matter of time they will find her but i am waiting for the jallad reaction.
n plz dont ever think of leaving this forum . about negetivity it just nafrat ka ilaaj sirf pyaar hota hai .

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Smokyeyes2014

@Smokyeyes2014

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

napstermonster,

yet another beautiful story from you; missed this earlier, i was on vacation all of June. Eagerly waiting for the ending chapter. Pls. write more often and on Rangrasiya, Rudra and Paro deserve more odes from a writer as good as you 👏

Hope you can look beyond the the negative vibes, and realise that a truckload of your fans wait for your stories.🤗

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Napster... you have magic in your hands...!
Lovely writing... the description of the gifts... feelings... was just awesome.
I agree... forum is too negative. people are too materialistic.

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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Napster sa,

Awesome magic with words. I don't know how I skipped this update. I don't want to stop in the middle and waiting is horrible...

It's 1:30am now and just read your story. I can not sleep now 😉

Can you please give us next part soon!

🤗

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Divya

@DivI10

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Awesome Update baisa.. the feel the emotion breakdown really I didn't feel I'm reading felt lik I'm watching them thanks for your grt grass writen Napster.. I really loving your Updates story or analysis or any post really ur gift writer..

thanks Napster baisa.