Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th)

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shirinfarhaad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

I am so glad you decided update it, as usual awesome writing, waiting for the final part!!!!

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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Awesome! Waiting for so long and please please update final part soon. Hoping there'll be a happy ending ...

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rangprab

@rangprab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Part 2:

Her helplessness, her want to be around, her small acts of concern and her inability to think of a life without Rudra, all so elaborately and so beautifully written...

Part 3:

Rudra's knowledge and understanding of what his wife wanted with her little acts of leaving behind things for her family is so well expressed... And she left him nothing !!!!! This thought is going to see the return of the Jallad in order to bring her back... Aman was spectacular and a very important element in solving the puzzle...

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Hey Navin,

I am sorry I didn't comment earlier on any of your works. I could have left a "great update, continue soon" message but that's not how I roll. I believe that if the author is taking such pains to write down a spectacular update for you, you should atleast give appropriate feedback. But the fact is that I am in awe of YOU! Have been since the time you wrote about the show-that-must-not-be-named. And I was painfully aware that my words could never express the appreciation I really felt for your talent.

Today I read that you wanted to leave this forum. And I am not surprised. The atmosphere here is quite volatile these days and I am pained to see that many great postmakers and analysts have moved on or stopped posting. Add to that some of them even left IF due to various reasons. As a result the RR forum has really lost it's charm(IMO) and it's not as fun as it used to be. I myself am a fan of PaRud and it pains me to say that the story has really lost me. I cannot connect with what the characters are doing and the only reason I watch it at 9:30 pm religiously is my unwavering loyalty towards Sanaya, Ashish and the rest of the STELLAR CAST this show has. As SJ said a couple of days back, it's the acting (and the eye-candy) that is keeping us hooked despite everything. Coming back to the point, I saw the number of OSs dwindle, the creativity decline and the fights increase. Hence even I stayed away from the forum these past weeks, simply checking in to see some posts.

Now when I read your A/N I wanted to tell you something about your stories. I realise that the situation is uncertain and that you may never write on PaRud again. I completely understand and respect that. I wanted to thank you for giving us the Yesterday & Tomorrow series as well as your insightful posts.

Your writing is fantabulous, awesome, beautiful, lovely, great, amazing, astonishing, astounding, awesome, fabulous, miraculous, portentous, prodigious, staggering, stunning, stupendous, sublime, surprising, wonderful, wondrous, incredible, unbelievable, unimaginable, unthinkable, extraordinary, phenomenal, rare, sensational, spectacular, outstanding, smashing, striking, mind-bending, mind-blowing, mind-boggling, animating, energizing, enlightening, enlivening, exciting, invigorating, captivating, charming, enchanting, entertaining, enthralling, fascinating, interesting, capital, classic, crackerjack, divine, first-class, grand, heavenly, high-class, marvelous, par excellence, peachy, prizewinning, quality, sensational, slick, splendid, stellar, superb, superlative, swell, terrific, tip-top and top-of-the-line.

Believe me, I am not exaggerating or sucking up to you. You deserve all this and much more. I wish that we get to read more of your works. But the decision lies with you and no matter what, I will always wait to read something from Napster's pen!

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

hello there navin. i was on ur buddy list for ARSHI FFs and now for RR, im not getting any PMS. this is a brilliant piece, as usual. the way u have emoted paro during the preparation phase, the blatant romance by the jallad - all beautiful

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Loved it Navin. Me heart broken

I didnt get ur pm. please include me too😃

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mii14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Now this is what I call true happiness. Reading the update with your fantastic writing was just what I needed to wash that bitter taste out of my mouth. The bitter taste that came as a result if reading this vitriol that passes off as constructive criticism on this forum by some people who don't seem to find any positives in this taut writing, this well crafted characterisation that is brought to life by these talented actors who are spot on with their expressions, their emotions and light up our evenings. Why does one watch a daily soap? I for one come from a school of thought of watching 22-24 episode dramas that finish in four months. Great writing, super acting and finished in four months so then why bother with these unending daily soaps. For me it's been a few years because in those years I have avidly and faithfully watched three soaps - first the classic iss pyar ko and then the first three months of bade acche and now rangrasiya. For me rangrasiya is a far superior production, better story line, super dialogues and fantastic acting not to mention the sizzling chemistry between the leads and why is that so because they are masters if their craft and their characters are so well written. Not to forget the supporting cast who are also consistent and well written so then why this negativity and disillusionment. Navin baisa please don't stop posting or writing. This forum will be bereft of your talent and I will be truly depressed. Every time I have read your posts it's been like you writing down my thoughts. Bravo! Please don't stop.

Edited by mii14 - 11 years ago

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Radhika

@YellowBoots

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Woah! This was such a fabulous update! I can't wait to read the final part to see how you resolve it and give us a happy ending (no pressure 😆).

Please quit the forum and the show if you must, but don't ever quit writing.

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Hey napstermonster I'm a big fan of yr writings...and u leaving the forum is out of the question ...u hv forced me out today from my silent reader zone with yr foot note...kothau chole jawa hobe na...abhabei likhte hobe r amader shundor shundor golpo upohar dite hobe...tomar golpo guli actual tv serialtar theke hazar goon better...abhabe bhoy dekhale hobe na...

And I really want to know whether rudra will find Paro in this last part of Goodbye...I'm dying to know that...pls pls pls update soon...

Lots of love

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: dushturain
Hey napstermonster I'm a big fan of yr writings...and u leaving the forum is out of the question ...u hv forced me out today from my silent reader zone with yr foot note...kothau chole jawa hobe na...abhabei likhte hobe r amader shundor shundor golpo upohar dite hobe...tomar golpo guli actual tv serialtar theke hazar goon better...abhabe bhoy dekhale hobe na...
And I really want to know whether rudra will find Paro in this last part of Goodbye...I'm dying to know that...pls pls pls update soon...

Lots of love

Asholei Dushtu, naa?

Tumi jaanle kibhabe je ami Bengali? bepar ta more or less shobai jaane na, jodio amar hindi is atrocious enough je shondhe ho jonok. Puro flatter kore dila, ek dui line likhe, and amiyo gole jacchi brishti te ice lolly er moto--Ei bhabe bangla bole mon joy korar chestha ta puro puri unfair madam!

Kolkatar theke naki Dhaka?
Navin

Edited by napstermonster - 11 years ago

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