The Wish: A Maaneet fanfic *DISCONTINUED*

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Hey!

This is Dee...short for Dia.

This is my first work on Maaneet.

Please read the prologue and tell me if I should continue?




The Wish

Prologue

As the rays of the sun washed down upon the world on this special day, four grown men tiptoed into the most special room of Kapoor Mansion.

They were Maanav Kapoor, Raj Kapoor, Yash Kapoor and Mohit Kapoor.

Maanav Kapoor is the proud owner of Kapoor Empire and four lovely children. He loved his wife very much but unfortunately, she had passed away when their youngest child was only 3 years. He had never married again and brought up all his children with utmost love and care and instilled all the morals and principles of a good human being in them.

Raj Kapoor is the eldest son of Maanav Kapoor. He is married to Nisha Kapoor. He is the CEO of Kapoor Empire. He is quiet and reserved but very serious when it comes to work. He was forced to grow up before his time when his mother passed away. His wife understands him and they are very much in love with each other.

Yash Kapoor is the second son of Maanav Kapoor. He is the co-CEO of Kapoor Empire. He is a very jovial person. He is very much in love with his fiance, Meera, who owns a boutique.

Mohit Kapoor is the youngest son of Maanav Kapoor. He is impulsive and vivacious. His main interest is cars and bikes. He is not interested in business but can do wonders in the boardroom if he wants to.

All these successful men have two things in common.

First, they are drop dead handsome and girls die for their one glimpse.

And second, there is one princess who rules these four hearts. The princess is the life of the Kapoors', Geet Handa. The four men can do anything in the world for her. Though she is pampered, she is not spoilt.

Geet Handa is the life of the Kapoor Mansion. She is bubby, vivacious and loved her family to bits. Her father and her brothers are her superheroes and Nisha is a mother figure. Her best friend is Meera. She is doing her masters in Interior Designing. She is innocent and her brothers have shielded her all throughout her life. She is beautiful and every boy's Dream girl. She had taken up her mother's maiden name Handa instead of Kapoor.

Today is a very special day for the Kapoors. Their princess is turning 21 today.

As was the custom, the four Kapoor men surrounded the fairy sleeping on the bed and sang the birthday song.

Geet woke up with a smile on her face and hugged her father and brothers.

Geet: Thank you so much! It's a lovely start to my birthday!

Maanav: Happy birthday princess! May this day bring lots of happiness for you.

Mohit: Get ready and come down fast. The cake and the presents are waiting.

Raj: Yes. And Nisha is also getting impatient. She'll have my neck for breakfast is you don't come down fast.

Yash: Meera has already called thrice to ask if you've woken up. She's on her way here.

Geet: Fine coming. Just give me 10 minutes.

The men left the room.

After thanking Babaji for the lovely family, she started getting ready.

Precap:The birthday wish


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Dia_Kapoor - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice

continue soon


Thank you so much!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _lehar_

interesting prologue
continue soon


Thank you so much!
I will post the 1st part in a few days time.
Edited by Dia_Kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful part..pls cont soon dia..
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Loved the first part
geet's birthday and what wish will geet ask for
please continue and please update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you guys!
It means a lot!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start add me to your buddy list
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only one word JHAKAS prologue,,,,😉
alrdy waiting 4 prt 1...😛
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congrats...
nice start...beautiful prologue...
waiting for birthday wish...

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