OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content* - Page 14

duuude.

Originally posted by: suds.

duuude.

i cant even. 

i am unable to even.

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!! <333

You dont want to even...??? hehehe...I'm totally confused. Enlighten me oh suds...(I hope I'm teasing my old friend Suds with questions about what she simply CANNOT do after reading a hot-wala One Shot----if not, egg will be meeting face momentarily...) 

OOH I forget the dhakdhak on Paro.. so gonna try it out.  Somebody gonna be in trouble if heartbeats don't speed up😛

Originally posted by: napstermonster

You dont want to even...??? hehehe...I'm totally confused. Enlighten me oh suds...(I hope I'm teasing my old friend Suds with questions about what she simply CANNOT do after reading a hot-wala One Shot----if not, egg will be meeting face momentarily...) 

Okay so I thought I'd read the entire series first and then comment, and mind you NM bannasaa you've just made me go all gaga. It was like, I could imagine it all happening- whether Paro hurting while being mercileslly tortured or while she went through immense pleasure. Vividly written series, seriously. It was like fire and ice, both at the same time!

um, can I go a little critical, though?
Your Hindi reminds me of certain Nand Kishore a.k.a N.K, I'm sorry not being sarcastic it was just, I found it cute and funny *hides my face and runs away*

Jokes apart, you've really really poured out emotions so well.
Oh, boi! Take a Bow. :D

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Radhika

Originally posted by: fire_whisky

Okay so I thought I'd read the entire series first and then comment, and mind you NM bannasaa you've just made me go all gaga. It was like, I could imagine it all happening- whether Paro hurting while being mercileslly tortured or while she went through immense pleasure. Vividly written series, seriously. It was like fire and ice, both at the same time!

um, can I go a little critical, though?
Your Hindi reminds me of certain Nand Kishore a.k.a N.K, I'm sorry not being sarcastic it was just, I found it cute and funny *hides my face and runs away*

Jokes apart, you've really really poured out emotions so well.
Oh, boi! Take a Bow. :D

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Radhika

Edited by napstermonster - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Yaar, I'm a dyed in the wool Bangladeshi--not even a Calcutta chokri, with their dual languages! My (admittedly terrible/totally hodgepodge) Hindi is derived from a childhood watching repeats of Diwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge,  every Hindi Pop song that DID'NT make it big in Mumbai and ended up on Dhaka's streets and  bad Doordarshan telecasts! Just you wait, woman--aaj ke baad, all Hindi dialogues will get PMed first to you !😆😆😆 

Awe.. No No, I wasn't complaining...  ☺️ And woah you're from Bangladesh amazing!
And, I'd be obliged to review the hindi translation anytime you want! 😆🤗

Great writing...Made me go all awww for a change 😳
U r a rockstar!!!! napsterrockstar 😃

Such an amazing and passionate OS napstermonster.I loved the way you had written about what Paro had always wanted ,but her Bholenath gave her more than what she had asked.The passion between Paro and Rudra can only happen between two soul mates who were tuned to each other..Thank you for writing such an wonderful OS👏👏👏.

Love the story.