OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content* - Page 11

They love each other so much..

Beautiful!!👏 

@Napermonster..I read it and it was beautiful..I will give you a detailed comment on this as this was too passionate to just end in these few lines...Tomorrow wil comment pakka😳

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This was by far the best OS of your series...Romantic, passionate, intense yet cute and not even one inch seemed vulgar..All credit goes to you👏👏..how do you do it?...Very nice..The way the scenes were written we could feel and visualize them so easily. I tried to find out which part was my best but could not as each scene and part was lovely.

 Do continue with more such OS😳...One suggestion. why do you say mennu?..it looks a bit punjabi..She speaks manne..(me) I think..😊

I loved it.

The passion now between them is indescribable.

They are made for each other.

Amazing update.

Wonderfully written

This was just beautiful. I don't think I have the words to describe just how amazing this was. The way you intricately weave the magic of Rudra and Paro and all the emotions they are going through is utter perfection. Paro's musing on all that she had dreamed of with all that she has been blessed with shows how far this young beauty has come with the blessing of The Lord above and her husbands love. 

Bring on the next one girl. Can't wait 👏