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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -misty--love-

ok..that is the 5th part..

PART 5
It was a new start for them when they had each other's support..their eyes full of love making us fall in love with them again...they were still in the tenderness and wonder of the moment but naintara's sucide attempt dragging khurana family into it...maaneet were forced to delay their wedding, maan was in guilt to not been able to fulfill his mishty's wishes but now geet maan singh khurana was with him to share his worries, his responsibilities and his guilt.
Geet was back in khurana mansion and their being together bought the small yet sweet moments where maan would tease his mishty and the sherni would counter attack leading to those cute and passionate moments. They passed another step of their relation when geet watched in awe as a tear slipped out from his eye watching their little angel on the screen, geet couldn't hole on and worded out her feelings in front of him and as expected maan singh khurana could never let his mishty down and he created an incomparable way to express his love for her..making the snow fall in delhi for the first time.
Though problems came infront of them as naintara and brij but their love was stronger to overpower such problems. Maan was always there between geet and problems and all hearts wept with him as he chose geet over the baby.But this time they didn't lose and maan came back with his geet to tie in the lifelong bond of marriage. The rasams of wedding bought out the cute fights of them..the majnu msk teasing his sherni geet,be it in the sangeet, their adorable fights in the bachelor party, his desparation to apply haldi on his mishty's face. But this led to the most endearing wedding of the tellyworld, everything about the occasion spelt love and devotion. Problems came in many ways but they stood strong in front of them..be it when they fought just after few days of wedding, but their nok-jhoks on and before their honeymoon never let their love loose and those small and delightful moments made the viewers wish for such an imperfect yet the perfect life.

is it fine..or it needs any change..tell me so that i can take care of that in the 6th part..
Edited by -misty--love- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
neha... the tables are perfect... just check the colouring of the two siggies that I have given.. there is some problem and our college has banned facebook... someone posted really insulting and derogatory comments on our placement officer... so will be off from facebook for a week..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -misty--love-

ok..that is the 5th part..

PART 5
It was a new start for them when they had each other's support..their eyes full of love making us fall in love with them again...they were still in the tenderness and wonder of the moment but naintara's sucide attempt dragging khurana family into it...maaneet were forced to delay their wedding, maan was in guilt to not been able to fulfill his mishty's wishes but now geet maan singh khurana was with him to share his worries, his responsibilities and his guilt.
Geet was back in khurana mansion and their being together bought the small yet sweet moments where maan would tease his mishty and the sherni would counter attack leading to those cute and passionate moments. They passed another step of their relation when geet watched in awe as a tear slipped out from his eye watching their little angel on the screen, geet couldn't hole on and worded out her feelings in front of him and as expected maan singh khurana could never let his mishty down and he created an incomparable way to express his love for her..making the snow fall in delhi for the first time.
Though problems came infront of them as naintara and brij but their love was stronger to overpower such problems. Maan was always there between geet and problems and all hearts wept with him as he chose geet over the baby.But this time they didn't lose and maan came back with his geet to tie in the lifelong bond of marriage. The rasams of wedding bought out the cute fights of them..the majnu msk teasing his sherni geet,be it in the sangeet, their adorable fights in the bachelor party, his desparation to apply haldi on his mishty's face. But this led to the most endearing wedding of the tellyworld, everything about the occasion spelt love and devotion. Problems came in many ways but they stood strong in front of them..be it when they fought just after few days of wedding, but their nok-jhoks on and before their honeymoon never let their love loose and those small and delightful moments made the viewers wish for such an imperfect yet the perfect life.


just cut the lenghth a bit more... thats it... 5, 6 lines less than this.. thats it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drashtirocks1


just cut the lenghth a bit more... thats it... 5, 6 lines less than this.. thats it...

yaar..its nearly the same length as of the first four parts..as in all parts are nearly 13-14 lines in my notepad..
if we cut out 5-6 lines..it would look odd..i think we should go for symmetry..and even then if u insist i can cut out max 2-3 lines..
tell me soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -misty--love-

yaar..its nearly the same length as of the first four parts..as in all parts are nearly 13-14 lines in my notepad..
if we cut out 5-6 lines..it would look odd..i think we should go for symmetry..and even then if u insist i can cut out max 2-3 lines..
tell me soon

i think we already putting in 10 tracks.. remove the para spacings.. make it continuous.. i'll do that for the already given parts... and then after removing spacing and all.. make sure none of the track exceeds 10 lines.. can be less but not more...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drashtirocks1

i think we already putting in 10 tracks.. remove the para spacings.. make it continuous.. i'll do that for the already given parts... and then after removing spacing and all.. make sure none of the track exceeds 10 lines.. can be less but not more...

10 lines of my notepad..😆
because can't make it less..really
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Posted: 11 years ago
is it fine..perfect 10 lines..😆
PART 6
The past entered in their perfect life once again as they met dev in shimla on their honeymoon. Maan's accident forced geet to take help from dev, even though that would have been the last thing in her mind but could she leave any stone unturned to save maan's life. Maan was safe with his wife's prayers and gods blessings. The viewers witnessed another cute moments that were always a breath of fresh air. Their relation percieved another blow when maan got to know that geet took dev's help to save his life leading to another misundersanding between them. It wasn't that he doubted geet, he was guilty to be a reason that geet was forced to seek help from dev. But, as always maan went overboard in his anger and he had to ask forgiveness from geet but this time she wasn't ready to fogive for the pain he inflicted upon himself and her.
Maan was devastated when he got to know that geet has suffered a miscarriage while he was out for some deal. Their lives were crushed again and this time the blow was such that it was their own pain that drifted them apart. Maan couldn't see his cheerful and full of life mishty bound in the four walls. He tried every way to keep geet away from the pain but his means led geet more to darkness and dev's intrusion was what made the matters worse. Though dev was trying to help, but may be he forgot that he was interfering in a couples matter and maan's insecurity and pain made him hurt geet unknowingly when he got to know that geet has forgiven dev and she left maan not knowing where she was heading to.

Edited by -misty--love- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -misty--love-

is it fine..perfect 10 lines..😆

PART 6
The past entered in their perfect life once again as they met dev in shimla on their honeymoon. Maan's accident forced geet to take help from dev, even though that would have been the last thing in her mind but could she leave any stone unturned to save maan's life. Maan was safe with his wife's prayers and gods blessings. The viewers witnessed another cute moments that were always a breath of fresh air. Their relation percieved another blow when maan got to know that geet took dev's help to save his life leading to another misundersanding between them. It wasn't that he doubted geet, he was guilty to be a reason that geet was forced to seek help from dev. But, as always maan went overboard in his anger and he had to ask forgiveness from geet but this time she wasn't ready to fogive for the pain he inflicted upon himself and her.
Maan was devastated when he got to know that geet has suffered a miscarriage while he was out for some deal. Their lives were crushed again and this time the blow was such that it was their own pain that drifted them apart. Maan couldn't see his cheerful and full of life mishty bound in the four walls. He tried every way to keep geet away from the pain but his means led geet more to darkness and dev's intrusion was what made the matters worse. Though dev was trying to help, but may be he forgot that he was interfering in a couples matter and maan's insecurity and pain made him hurt geet unknowingly when he got to know that geet has forgiven dev and she left maan not knowing where she was heading to.


hey you can go more than that... 11 or maybe 12 😆 i just meant that for fun.. hope u didn't take that too heart 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
no, i didn't take it to heart😆..but since it is looking complete with 10, so i think thats fine..if it looks incomplete, then tell me, i'll make the required changes.
PART 7
Maan knew he has hurt geet deeply and he had to work hard to get back his mishty. So the lover msk left his regime to find her, coming over all the obstacles. It was a tough time for the viewers watch them so close yet so far from each other. The arrogant and egoistic maan singh khurana made every heart fall in love with him again when he became a driver just to woo back his mishty. He did everything, you could never expect maan to do, for her. Geet was deeply hurt by his accusations but his becoming the driver touched her heart. He did everything to keep her family's honour intact and his such heroic acts made his mishty's heart melt and she could no longer remain angry with the majnu khurana when he could bring the world down just for her. But even after they got back together, maan didn't reveal his identity to her family just because he wanted them to trust him with their daughter and the situation got worse when dev entered into the picture again. The hide and seek game gave us many adorable and delectable moments, not to forget when maan said "geet, mein papa ban na chahta hun.."..each heart melted in the passion that his eyes and her blush depicted on the night in the jungle. And maan managed to make her family come in terms with him even after his identity was revealed and he took his mishty with him promising her family to take care of his love for ever, not knowing what the future held for them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
all are perfect till now...

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