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Posted: 11 years ago
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ABHIJEET mind migling so many Information received by so many people during this case as...

DAYA: khair yahan jo bhi Young bacchy aatay hain na, lagta hay Drug Addict hain... Yaar Un kay Eye balls Move Nhai krtay, magar haan Bar mein kuch Nahi hay.. wo Pehlay say Tunn lagtay hain... magar yaar (confuse) wo 2/3 haftay baad ghayeb ho jatay hain, Dikhtay Nahi...

JOHN: NITIN KUMAR ka asal Dhanda Gadiyaan Smuggling karna tha... Us kay baad achanak ye Ghayeb ho gaya... phir Do saal aaram karnay kay baad... GEORGE KOTRAY ek NRI hay aur jahan tak thora buht pata chala hay... German ki Govt nay Usy Jilawatan, boly tou Tari parr kr diya hay...

ABHIJEET (murmuring): asal Dhanda, Smugling, George ek NRI, Germany sy bhaga aur NITIN nay Usy Panah di... Gaadiyun ki Smugling, GEORGE ka yahan aana... O My Gaauddd...

SALUKHY: kya hua ABHIJEET.?

ABHIJEET: nahi Sir...

He was Moving Outside, when SALUNKHY stopped Him and giving Him a Book with a Supplementry Question...

SALUNKHY: ACP say Mulaqat hui, (ABHIJEET nodded in NO) (SALUNKHY added) ye Tumharay liyey Us nay bheji hay...

ABHIJEET (taking Book and ask in Shock): aap kesay mily...?

SALUNKHY: Main Us ka Personal Dr hun, Usy Strain Kum karny ki dawa leni parti hay jo kay BP check karny kay baad dii jati hay aur Wo Dawa Meray pass hay kyunkay sirf Australia mein milti hay (ABHIJEET face gives a Big Smile) (SALUNKHY added) ye Tohfa Tumharay Boss nay Tumharay liyey bheja hay...

ABHIJEET nodded in Yes and takes that Book with Him, Shuffling that during Journey either call RAJAT and asked about His Order was Fulfilled by PURVI and Him and He responded in Yes...

ABHIJEET covering Stairs and found a Page marked as Folding, He moved ahead as He knew that ACP sent Him some Information through it... ABHIJEET after Entering ordered PUNKAJ and SHERYA as...

ABHIJEET: Tum dono zara is Address pr jao aur Apna Gift lay kr aao.. (to Rajat) in ko Gaming Sites ki Details, SACHIN aur FREDDY kay jeetnay ki timmings aur Email ID with Password kay do aur Address bhi samjha do...

RAJAT moved Head in Yes and ABHIJEET went inside Interrogation room and started to open that Marked page and taken out a Letter, He started to Read as...

ABHIJEET, DAYA nay RAMAN ka Account kyun Hack karwaya, wo bhi Ek Professional Hacker ki Help ly kr... is kay baary mein Mujhy kuch malum nahi...

RAMAN SAXENA, ek Kaamyaab Businessman hay, magar pichly kuch Months say Usy ek Aadmi MICHEAL GEAR kay sath dekha ja raha tha... IB kay anusar ye Aadmi ek German hay jo kay Jali Passport pr yahan aaya hua hay... ye ek Jilawatan bhi hay... isi wajah say DAYA ko Main nay Mission mein bheja jo sirf RAMAN SAXENA kay Business kay baary mein jaankaari pr tha... DAYA nay Mujhy Us kay Do Hidden Partners ka bataya magar Naam jo Us nay diyey, Un mein MICHEAL GEAR nahi tha...

Main nay IB say Contact kiya tou malum hua kay ye Banda gadiyun ki Smuggling kay duwara yahan pohancha hay, magar IRAN ki Sarhad pr ye pakra gaya tha, wahan say ye Nikl bhaga hay aur wahein say IB ko pata chala kay ye Aadmi Jaali Naam aur passport say yahan reh raha hay aur isy yahan dekha gaya hay RAMAN kay sath...

DAYA nay Do Naam Mujhy diyey, NITIN KUMAR aur GEORGE KOTRY, pr MICHEAL GEAR ka kuch malum nahi...

DCP nay achanak aa kr jub ye kaha tou Mujhy DAYA ko bachany kay liyey ye kehna para kay Orders Main nay diyey thy, kyunkay filhal DAYA kahan hy Mujhy nahi malum aur Generally kisi Civilian kay account ko Hack karwana Crime mein aata hay aur Main ny ye bhi socha kay kahein IB tak baat Nikl gayii tou DAYA kay career pr Daag lug jayey ga, Mission say Wapsi tou choro, koi Charge bhi lug sakta hay...

The Letter finished here, ABHIJEET was totally Confused as the Person named GEORGE KOTRAY having the same background, ACP Sir wrote and JOHN given to ABHIJEET so who is that MICHEAL GEAR...!

ABHIJEET coming out from Interrogation room in Thinking, He opened DAYA laptop and after few seconds, the Same Angry comment showed on Screen after opening NOTEPAD, automatically with...

Hello again, Sr Inspector ABHIJEET

Before ABHIJEET write something, Another Line coming up with...

Urf ABHIJEET, Boss and ABHI...

ABHIJEET shocked, He started to Write as now DAYA gave Him the Right to Write...

ABHIJEET: aby, Sahab kya chah rahy hain... haan...?

DAYA (with Wink icon😉): Tumhari Chutti.

ABHIJEET became rash but now Cursor started to Write in Speed, ABHIJEET just playing the Role of a Reader...

DAYA: kuch nahi hoga, kal isi liyey pehlay Tumharay Personal lappy pr ye Software try kiya tha, Code dalwaya hay, Firewall Disable kr day ga... Khair batao kuch pata chala, BTW, Main nay NITIN ko Dhoond liya hay...

ABHIJEET (write): dekh raha hun Dimagh Buht chal raha hay Sahab ka... DAYA, ACP Sir nay SALUNKHY Sir kay hath Letter bheja hay, magar Un ka kehna hay kay IB nay kisi Germany say Gilawatan (Proscriber) MICHEAL GEAR ko RAMAN SAXENA kay sath dekha gaya tha, ye Banda IRAN ki Border pr Jali Passport pr pakra gaya tha, pr wahan say Wo NITIN KUMAR kay through Smuggle ho kr aa gaya, pr Mera Khabri ye saari Information kisi GEORGE KOTRY kay baary mein keh raha hay...

DAYA: matlab Do Admi aur Background Aik...

ABHIJEET: shayed, kyunkay abhi Sir ka Letter parh kr Mera dimagh kuch aur keh raha hay...

DAYA (confuse icon😕): kya..?

ABHIJEET: Aadmi tou Aik hay DAYA, ab wo MICHEAL GEAR ho ya GEORGE KOTRY, haan shayed Naam Do hun kyunkay wo wesay hee Fake passport pr hay... yaqeenun Hulya badal kr hoga ya shayed Costamic Surgery bhi karwa lii ho, pr RAMAN SAXENA kyun Us say Blackmail ho raha hay...

DAYA: Boss, Tum nay RAMAN ki kundli dekhi hay..?

ABHIJEET: haan kyun..?

DAYA: pichly 1 saal mein Us ka Hidden Partner saamny aaya hay, magar NITIN say Us ki partnership sirf 8 Months Purani hay aur NITIN, Us kay Business ka 71% ka malik hay...

ABHIJEET: ain, matalab NITIN, RAMAN ko Blackmail kr raha hay...

DAYA: malum Nahi aur haan Us Gaming Site pr RAJAT ko bheja..?

ABHIJEET: haan, Steel kay jo Items Gifts kay tour pr diyey ja rahy hain, un mein Drugs hay, Steel kay Items ko Khokla (hollow) kr kay un mein LD-50, Liquad form mein bhari hay aur Items kay Internal side pr chotay chotay Holes hain jin kay through Drugs Pores say Jism mein ja raha hay...

DAYA: tou matlab, NITIN in Drugs Addicts ko Smuggle kr raha hay, kyunkay Us ka Basic dhanda tou Smuggling hee hay na...

ABHIJEET: Ohhh, My Gauuuddd... Tou ab...!

DAYA: Main NITIN ko utha sakta hun... is Bar mein Us ka aana jana hay, pr Boss, RAMAN pr kesay Hath daalo gay... ?

ABHIJEET: kya direct IB say contact karun..

DAYA: Faida Nahi, kyunkay abhi tak na GEORGE KOTRAY ka malum hua hay aur na MICHEAL GEAR ka aur Unhun nay tou In Do logun kay baary mein Inquiry ka kaha tha na...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, phir tou DCP say hee Baat karni paray gi, kyunkay ACP Sir koi Orders nahi day saktay, Main nay abhi SHERYA aur PUNKAJ ko bheja hay, soch raha hun, isi waqt DCP ko bhi lay kr wahan pohanch jaon, SALUNKHY Sir bhi hongay tou Items check hon gay aur Usi waqt Hum Office aur even RAMAN ki Steel ki Factory ko bhi Seal karwa lein gay...

DAYA: Good, chalo Theek hay... Main NITIN ko uthata hun aur Bureau kay aagy peechy chor deta hun, ta kay Usy Tum logun say milny mein Aasani ho aur haan Us ka Smuggling ka Dhanda bhi Kahan say chalta hay, ye bhi pata karta hun aur Us pr Hath bhi daalta hun

ABHIJEET (tease): kya kha raha hy aaj kal...

DAYA (ROFling Icon🤣): Tumhara Bheja...

He logged out, ABHIJEET instantly called PUNKAJ and told that if they did not receive the Gift, Stay there and PUNKAJ told that Office just started after Lunch hours... ABHIJEET told that Calm and dunt entered inside, He will joined them in Half an Hour...

He called SALUNKHY Sir and told to be at Bureau with His Forensic Kit and all those Equipments which was Necessory to check that LD-50 on Initial bases and He will sent NIKHIL for Helping Him...

After ended Call, He ordered NIKHIL to move to Forensic Lab and Helped SALUNKHY Sir, while He contacted directly to DCP and told that He wanted to Raid on Some Place but as ACP Sir Absence, Could He did it on His behalf... He knew DCP in Anger creating Fuss and telling Him so Many things like How dare U taking Orders in DCP presence and all and Same is Done so ABHIJEET presented that why not DCP be at Spot, DCP accepted and tell Him that He will be in given Address by ABHIJEET in 20 minutes... ABHIJEET smiles after cutting Call with murmur and order...

ABHIJEET (murmur): Kharos Buddhy, Hum Tujh say Zyada Sharp hain.. (to All) Chalo...

He met SALUNKHY and NIKHIL at Parking lot and all moved in Gaming Site Office, here met with SHERYA and PUNKAJ, Divided His Team in Segments and invaded them in Chaos with Gun to Seal Most Entering and Exit points... DCP joint them in 20 minutes and before His Joining, ABHIJEET and all already entered... Office staff tensed and Arguing about why CID presented there and Demanding to Check their Gift Items as they are so Casual... DCP to ABHIJEET...

DCP: haan kya baat hay Sr. Inspector ABHIJEET.?

ABHIJEET: Sir, Humein Shak hay kay yahan say Drugs Supply kiyey jaatay hain...

Management: kya, Dimagh theek hay aap loogun ka ya bina baat kay bus llzaam lagany ka Shauq hay (to DCP) Sir yahan sirf Un Participents ko Simple Steel kay Gifts Items diyey jaatay hain, jo Humari Gaming Site mein Games Win kartay hain... RAMAN SAXENA ki Compony say associated hain Hum log, kitna Bara Naam hy...

ABHIJEET (cutting): bus Naam hee Bara hay, Darshan Nhai aur Aap ko problem kiya hay, Aap humein Apnay Items check karwa dein.. abhi Doodh ka Doodh aor Paani ka Paani ho jayey ga, ya Humari Naukriyaan chali jayein gi ya Aap ka Office reh jayey ga.. (to DCP) kyun Sir..

DCP: soch lo ABHIJEET, agar Ilzaam Ghalat hua tou Tum bhi Apnay ACP ki tarah Ghar beth jao gay...

ABHIJEET (smirk): Mushkil hay Sir, kal Main nay Apni Kaam wali Bai ko Chutti dii hui hay...

When Team grasped the Comments, Smiles crept on their Lips... DCP ignores it in Anger and told to Management of Gaming Site as...

DCP (to management): haan haan kyun Nahi, arry dikha do In ko Apnay Items, (tease) baray Giyani Log hain ye...

SALUNKHY already established the Test Equipments and after Checking and Testing, the Positive Result totally Shocked DCP... He cant believe, and now ABHIJEET coming in Charge, complately Arrested Management to Employees,

Disconnecting All Communication Devices from Personal to Professional so Nobody contacted to RAMAN and Sealed the Place and on Extra Agitation of Team, DCP Pressurised and issued Orders to Call RAMAN SAXENA for Interrogation and also Backed ACP Suspension Order right now by Calling Him as...

DCP: ACP, foran Bureau pohancho...

ACP who was in Confuse state to have DCP call in His Personal number, but without much thinking, He preparing for Leaving either DCP remove His Security Officers from ACP House...

Team already went to RAMAN SAXENA Main Factory while DCP called RAMAN to reach at CID Bureau, during Journey, Here RAJAT who was with Team only as Backup, got a Call and after hearing DAYA Voice, He handed over the Cell to ABHIJEET silently, who First hear DAYA voice and with WAIT, signaled SACHIN to Stop the Vehicle and after Stopping, left the Vehicle and started...

ABHIJEET: haan ab bolo..?

DAYA: Boss, NITIN ky Call Records Nikalwayey thy...

ABHIJEET: haan, kyun.?

DAYA: kya is Number ki, 1276541...

ABHIJEET: Tu 5 minute Hold kr sakta hay...

DAYA: haan..

ABHIJEET taking out His Cell and Call SHERYA, who Picked Call and

ABHIJEET asked Her to send, NITIN Cell number having Call Records in File to His number through SMS, in a Minutes and ended the Call...

After a Minute, He got SMS and read NITIN number which Calling Records they were taken out as 125432, He join DAYA call now with...

ABHIJEET: Nahi, is Number ki Call Record nahi niklwayii hay...

DAYA: Khancha Sim hay, khair, Us nay RAJHISTAN, Highway kay through koi Consignment Delivery karnay ki Baat ki hay, Bar mein...

ABHIJEET: Main abhi RAJHISTAN POLICE ko khaber karta hun aur BSF walun ko bhi... koi bhi Heavy Duty Vehicle wahan say Pass Na karay...

DAYA: aur (after a second) Raid karwana hay kya..?

ABHIJEET: Tum bolo...

DAYA: haan, Address SMS krta hun isi Number pr... pr Boss, Police ko Bhejo... Main isi beech NITIN ko utha lun ga... wo abhi yahan Adhy Ghantay ruky ga...

ABHIJEET: Done...

He ended the Call and now taken Out His Cell and starting to Calling the Police Stations to give Orders to Raid in just 20 minutes in these Address SSMSing by DAYA in Next 5 minutes...

After that He again back to Vehicle and Returned ABHIJEET Cell with Signaling SACHIN to move on... here ACP already there who was Updated by ABHIJEET as He was still Curious about that Urgent Cancelation of Suspension Order by DCP...

Here Team reached just after few moments of DCP arrival in Bureau with SALUNKHY, SHERYA, NIKHIL and RAJAT... RAMAN entered with Rest Team with Teasing Glance and now ABHIJEET tell during Entering...

ABHIJEET: Aap ka Phone baj raha hay, Utha lein... shayed is kay baad Mauqa Nahi mily...

RAMAN (entering): kya hua CHITROLEY yahan kyun bulawaya, acha aik minute, Main Call sun lun...

DCP moved ahead and takes His Cell from Him and signaled Him to be Seated... RAMAN Tensed now but Sat, ACP takes Charge as...

ACP: Tumhein agly 15 minute mein Apny Dono Hidden Partners ko Yahan peesh karna hay... (to PANKAJ) PANKAJ, Stop Watch start karo...

RAMAN: lekin kyun..?

ABHIJEET (slapped over table shivers RAMAN and all and in Tough tone): is jagah Sawal karny ka Haq sirf Hum rakhtay hain.. (to PUNKAJ) haan PUNKAJ kitna Time reh gaya...?

PUNKAJ: Sir, 11 minutes...

RAMAN (rash to DCP): CHITROLEY Tum dekh rahy ho...

ABHIJEET (tease): HD print mein... (taking out His Gun and ask to ACP) Sir, may I...?

RAMAN shivered Badly and before DCP showed some angerness on this Attitude of any Officer during Interrogation... RAMAN started as Type Writer...

RAMAN: Mera Aik Partner abhi aa sakta hay aur Dusra Desh kay bahar hay..?

ACP: kaun say Desh mein, Number do, Email ID, Direct Hotline, Address... jaldi jaldi (to ABHIJEET) ABHIJEET Tayyar ho na Tum...

RAMAN (again): Wo abhi nahi aa sakta... Wo Beemaar hay...

ABHIJEET: wo Ventilator pr bhi ho tou chaly ga, Naam (placed Gun on His head with) Pata, Phone number, warna (threat in whisper) buht kum taqat lagti hay Trigger dabany mein...

RAMAN: Wo Mar gaya...

ABHIJEET (pushing trigger with): Qabar ka Pata...

RAMAN: pr Tum qabar say kesay...

ABHIJEET (hit slap now with): kaha na, yahan Poochna sirf Humara Kaam hay aur Batana Tumhara...

RAMAN: Us ki Gari ka Accident ho gaya tha aur wo Jal gaya tha, Us ki Laash nahi mil saki...

ACP (shock): kiya,, pr Humein tou Us ki Laash mil gayii hay...

RAMAN (stunned so Undelibrately): kesy, Usy tou Jala diya tha na...

ABHIJEET: haan haan, pr NITIN nay Tumhein Jhoot bola, saaly nay rakh hee liya na Hukum ka Ikka...

RAMAN (standup with anger): kiya, aisa nahi ho sakta..

ACP: aisa ho chukka hay RAMAN... NITIN Apna Munh khol chukka hay warna batao Tumharay Drugs kay Business ka Pata Humein kesy chalta aur wo MICHEAL GEAR...

RAMAN (complete Rash): NITIN bas***d, Tu nay Mujhy Cheat kiya aur aakhir tak bolta raha kay Wo Haar MICHEAL lay kr Mar gaya, Saaly kay pass Wo bhi hoga...

ACP and ABHIJEET exchanged glances with the Word HAAR, they got that PICTURE ABHI BAAQI HAY so again starting their Script without showing any Extra Emotions with...

ABHIJEET: aur kiya, Gadiyun ki Smuggling ka Dhanda, phir khud socha, bahar kay Deshun mein in Drug Addicts ko Bech deta hoga, Tumhara Business tou Kha hee gaya, bhala 71% kay baad Tum tou gayey...

RAMAN: koi Nahi, Wo kya samjhta hay, Main kya Pagal hun, aisay hee saaly kay naam Business kr dun ga aur Haar lay kr Wo karay ga kya, Bekaar hay, Asal Written Script tou Meray pass hay, Parhy ga Kesy aur phir Us Khazany...

Team takes a Big Sigh and this Sigh really realized RAMAN SAXENA that Now He really Caught badly, He looked at all and Quite...

Here a man coming inside, Badly Injured and within He started Shouting which Sprinkle Petrol over RAMAN who cant understand that He came from Outside, Not inside...

NITIN: Sir, abhi 15 minute pehlay FIN BAR say Nikaltay samy, Aik Aadmi Gun dikha kr Meri gari mein betha, Mujhy Loota aur itna Maara bhi, aap batein...

RAMAN (standup and started Beating Him with): Tu nay Mujhy Cheat kiya NITIN, saaly Tujhy chorun ga Nahi (Team enjoying)(NITIN trying to taking out himself from RAMAN hard grip who still engaged in) Tu Bik gaya na, Chaar Hath kha kr aur Tu nay aisa socha bhi kesay kay Main Tujhy akely wo Haar hazam karny dun ga... haan... Tu Parhy ga kesy Us ko... Wo Written Script sirf Meray paas hay, samjha, Meray Drugs ka Dhanda khool diya CID ko... aur Tu kya..

NITIN (Jerk Him with): kya, aur Tu mujhy pichlay Aik saal say Bewakoof bana raha hay kay Haar Bekaar hay aur MICHEAL ka Qatal bhi Bekaar gaya... haan aur Tu Bik gaya hoga is CID kay hath, Main tou abhi Bahar say aa raha...

RAMAN: aby Chal... Tu nay Sub Ugal...

RAMAN just Stopped to See a Person, He watched His Bar so many times and thinking about engaging Him in His Personal Body guard Platoon... DAYA came in and grabbed Both Necks and Threat...

DAYA: Hello (stress) Sir's...

ABHIJEET Relaxed, ACP Sooths and DCP Dejected... DAYA gives some Hard Slaps sat them on Confession chair and RAMAN and NITIN started as...

RAMAN: Main Drugs ka Dhanda pehlay say chalata tha, is Steel kay Business nay Mujhy kafi Faida diya, Family Business handed over hua tha tou itna Masla bhi Nhai hua aur koi Check bhi Nahi rakkha... wahein Merii Mulaqat NITIN say hui, Mujhy malum hua Wo Smuggling ka Dhanda karta hay, Gadiyun ki Smuggling...

Main Germany ek Business Consignment kay liyey gaya tha, wahein bhagtay bhagtay Mujhy MICHEAL GEAR mila, Usy German Govt nay Jilawatan kr diya tha aur Wo Panah ki talaash mein Bhaga Bhaga Phir raha tha...

Aik baar jub Police apny Kuttun kay sath Usy Dhoond rahi thi tou Wo Meri Gari mein Chup gaya, Main ek Business Meeting, BARLIN kay Buht baray Hotel mein attend kr raha tha, jub Gari chala kr Apny Hotel jany laga tou Wo pichli Seat say Bahar nikl aaya, Main usy pakarwa deta pr Us nay Mujhy wahan say saheh salamat niklwany pr Ek Qeemti Haar denayka Waada kiya, Wo Wohi lay kr Bhaag raha tha... Main ny Us Haar ki Ek Jhalak dekhi aur soch liya kay Usy kisi bhi Haal mein India laana hy...

NITIN (added): RAMAN nay Mujhy Phone kiya aur IRAN ki Sarhad tak kisi tarah Usy Chupta Chupata Fake Passport pr lay aaya aur Us ki Pehchan GEORGE KOTRAY kay Naam sy di, magar wahan kafi Sakht pehra tha aur isi wajah say RAMAN nay Mujhy ye Idea diya kay main Usy Container kay through Smuggle karwa lun... main nay Haan kr di kyunkay RAMAN nay Apny Business ka 25% Share Mujhy Offer kiya... Main Usy India lay aaya..

RAMAN: phir Main nay MICHEAL say Us Haar ki Demand ki, Us nay Wo Us waqt GERMANY kay Museum say Churaya tha jun Berlin Wall kay girnay ka Hangama chal raha tha... Wo ek Tracker tha aur Italy ki ELPOOM Peak ko cover kartay huay Un ko ek Laash mili jo kay kisi Baadshah ki Beti ki thi aur Usi kay galy mein ye Haar tha... Trackers kay beech Do Groups ban gayey, aik ka kehna tha kay isy Germany ki Govt ko day diya jayey ta kay Wo Italy ki Govt ko ye day day kyunkay Originally ye Un ki Amanat hy aur wo saaray Trackers Germany say belong kartay thy... aur Dusra Group keh raha tha kay Is Haar ko Beech kr aapus mein Paisay Baant liyey jayein jis mein MICHEAL bhi shamil tha... khair Govt ko wo Haar jama karny wala Group Jeet gaya aur Isy wahan ki Govt ko day diya gaya jis nay Kuch Dino kay liyey Is ko Museum mein rakkh aur wahein say MICHEAL nay isy Ura liya... (after a while) kisi ko Nahi malum tha kay Wo Haar ek Written Script say Lipta hua hay jis mein Khazany ka Naqsha hay aur wo Haar darasal us ki Chaabi hay... Dono Cheezein ek Dusray kay bina Incomplete theen... wahan MICHEAL nay wo Written Script chura liya pr Khazany tak pohanchnay kay liyey Usy Us Chabbi ki zarurat thi jo Us nay Churai aur Usy Jilawatan qarar day diya gaya kyunkay jub Us Trackers ki Team say Interrogate kiya gaya jo wahan gayii thi tou siwayey MICHEAL kay sub wahan thy, bus yehi Farar tha...

NITIN (added): MICHEAL nay Wo Haar tou RAMAN ko day diya magar SCRIPT wo hazam kr gaya, RAMAN ko malum tha kay SCRIPT kay bina Haar bekaar hay, isi beech Dono ky beech Hatha Pai hui aur MICHEAL ghalati say Aatishdaan mein gir gaya, wo Buht nashy mein tha, Bottel jo toot kr giri tou Wo aag mein Buri tarah Ghir gaya magar Usi waqt main nay Haar nazar bacha kr nikaal liya... RAMAN ko baad mein Us kay Saman ki Talaashi mein SCRIPT tou Mil gaya magar Usy malum tha kay Haar kay bina ye bekaar hay... khair haan, magar kyunkay Us Qatal ka Gawah main tha tou RAMAN ko 50% Meray Naam karna para aur jub main nay Usy Blackmail kiya kay SCRIPT bhi Meray hee pass hay tou 70% Mera...

DAYA (angry): aur Tum logun nay Usy Kaagzaat mein Zinda rakkha ta kay Tax Kum dena paray... hain na... (to ACP) Sir, NITIN ka Aik Consignment pakra gaya hay RAJHISTAN say...

ABHIJEET (rash to NITIN): aur Tum nay Bacchun ko Drug Addict bana kr Bahar kay Deshun mein Bechna start kr diya... haan..?

NITIN: haan Log Wegas, China, Thailand, Shikago wagairah mein Bari Maang hay in Bacchun ki, Wahan kay (smirk) Juwwa khanun mein...

ABHIJEET Slapped Him hardly, and DCP after Quietnes, signaled FREDDIE to take them away... ABHIJEET added to Both ACP and DCP with...

ABHIJEET: Sir, RAMAN ki Factory kay sath, NITIN ka RAJHISTAN mein ek Consignment bhi Pakra gaya hay aur is kay sath sath RAMAN kay saary Bars bhi Seal kr diyey gayey hain... Baaqi In logun ka Munh tou Khulawa hee lein gay Hum...

Both DCP and ACP nodded in Yes, while DCP Appologized with ACP Sir and Left the Bureau, here DAYA really feels Sad so Excused and tell ACP...

DAYA (to ACP): Sorry Sir, Meri wajah say aap ko...

ACP (pat on His Shoulder): Very Good Work DAYA, warna ye Network Pakra hee Nahi jata...

ABHIJEET: chorein Sir, itna bhi Acha work Nahi tha DAYA ka... (rash) Sahab nay Apny Finger Ring aur Badge ki Numaish tou kr di thi...

DAYA Shocked, Before He repeats the Same, ACP Sir asked the Same Query with Confusion as...

ACP: haan DAYA, akhir Tumhara Badge aur Finger Ring, chalo Finger Ring tou samjh aata hay pr Badge wahan ly jany ki kya Zarurat thi...

ABHIJEET: Sir, is mein DAYA aur FREDDY, Dono ki Ghalati hay, (FREDDY headdown) (ABHIJEET added again) DAYA ka Badge aur Finger Ring Jewelar kay pass tha, Us nay FREDDY ko Usy Pick karny ko kaha, magar FREDDY jub wahan gaya tou Jewelar nay kaha kay Wo saman koi ly gaya hay, ye samjha Main hun, magar is nay Mujh say poocha hee nahi...

DAYA (shock tone): tou kya Wo Hacker..?

ABHIJEET: DAYA, ye bata Tu nay RAMAN kay baaray mein Information kis say lii thi...?

DAYA: JOHN, wohi in sub ki Khabrein Achi tarah rakhta hay...

ABHIJEET: Excillent aur Sahab nay FREDDY ko Usi waqt Phone pr ye Kaha bhi hoga...

DAYA look at Him in Complete Shock... ABHIJEET really Pitty on Him as He got what He did, a Big Big Blunder... ABHIJEET added...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, Tumharay ek Phone Call nay Tumhein Buht Bura phanswaya tha, Wo Call JOHN nay bhi Suni, Us nay Tum say Paisay Khayey aur socha RAMAN ko kyun chor day...

ACP: magar ABHIJEET, DAYA tou Us Hacker ko Disguise mein mila hoga na...

ABHIJEET: haan Sir, pr JOHN nay jub RAMAN ko ye News dii tou Aadhi Pait mein rakh gaya aur Us nay sirf ye bataya kay jo Officer RAMAN kay Business kay baaray mein Jaankaari ly raha hay, Us ka Badge aur Finger Ring ye hay, RAMAN nay Us ki Vdo bana lii, yahan Hacker nay bhi DAYA ko Blackmail krnay ka socha tou RAMAN kay pass ja pohancha, RAMAN nay socha Aik Teer say Do Shikaar kr day... Us nay Us Hacker ko ye Vdo day diya kay isy Wo DCP kay saamny show kr day aur Investigation foran Ruk jayey...

ACP: aur Tumhein kesy pata chala.?

ABHIJEET: Sir, JOHN nay Finger Ring tou Utar liya pr Badge nikalna bhool gaya, jub Us nay meray jaany kay baad TAJ HOTEL kay Waiter ko Achi khasi TIP dii tou Mujhy Us kay Jaib mein Badge ki Jhalak dikh gayii thi...

DAYA: Sorry Yaar, wo Informer tha, Mujhy andaza Nahi tha Wo Mujhy hee Cheat kr jayey ga... (tense) wesay Tum nay wo Wapis lay liya na Us say...

ABHIJEET (harsh): Nahi, Sahab ki taraf say Main Usy wo Inaam mein day aaya hun...

DAYA Embarrass and Smiles... All look at each One with Naughtyness and ACP Sir Ordered NIKHIL as...

ACP (to NIKHIL): ROHIT ko lay aao..

NIKHIL brought ROHIT MISHRA who was looking Emabarrss, ACP Sir warned Him with...

ACP: Buht Buri baat hay ROHIT, ek Professional ho kr Tum nay aisa kiya, ek Officer ko Cheat karnay aur kahein na kahein Buray Kaam mein Sath deny kay Jurm mein yaqeenun kuch Saza tou Tumhein mily gi... lay jao isy...

NIKHIL takes Him away and all Dispersed, suddenly DAYA turn and ask RAJAT...

DAYA: RAJAT, aaj hee Dinner karwa do, kal kya pata koi Mera Bracelet bhi Na ly uray...

Everyone started Smiling and all moved to enjoying that Dinner given by RAJAT as His Farewell Dinner...

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Such an amazing story GD and Visrom👏
Truly fabulous Job👍🏼

Excellent⭐️

The title was mindblowing😆
I really liked the story because you included Rajat Sir as well
Thankyou very much for this lovely story😃

and Best Wishes for more stories





Edited by sheroo9000 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheroo9000


Such an amazing story GD and Visrom👏
Truly fabulous Job👍🏼

Excellent⭐️

The title was mindblowing😆
I really liked the story because you included Rajat Sir as well
Thankyou very much for this lovely story😃

and Best Wishes for more stories






Oye, Lier Lion...🤣
bus Ooper Ooper say Nazar daali aur Story pr Feedback day diya...😉😉
Kitni Gandi Baat hay...
Jao Katti...😈😈
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Originally posted by: gadhadada


Oye, Lier Lion...🤣
bus Ooper Ooper say Nazar daali aur Story pr Feedback day diya...😉😉
Kitni Gandi Baat hay...
Jao Katti...😈😈


arre nahin nahin😭
sach mein story parhi aur feedback diya😳
Katti hona achi baat nahin hoti😈
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Originally posted by: sheroo9000


arre nahin nahin😭
sach mein story parhi aur feedback diya😳
Katti hona achi baat nahin hoti😈


with 3G Speed...😲
Yani Lion also Inspired with CEETAH and drinking DEW...😉
kal tak tou sirf CEETAH hee peeta tha...😆
Ab say SHAIR bhi...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣

omg you actually gave that title! !!! main mazaak kar rahi thi...I thought you'll think of a better title. Anyway it's ok. FW style.


To everyone...I hate to see any writer saying they won't write any more stories. When GD said that I had an idea in mind and no time to write. so I decided to push her. I only gave plot. She wrote everything.
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haha😆
I was reading it while you were posting😊
mein tou ache bachon ki tarah sirf 28 bottles peeta hoon...😆
aur ye mat bhoolo ke Lion Popat ka Bhai hai😉😛
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Originally posted by: visrom

🤣

omg you actually gave that title! !!! main mazaak kar rahi thi...I thought you'll think of a better title. Anyway it's ok. FW style.


To everyone...I hate to see any writer saying they won't write any more stories. When GD said that I had an idea in mind and no time to write. so I decided to push her. I only gave plot. She wrote everything.



🤣 I thought Aap saheh mein Bol rahy ho...
😲😲😲 Itna Bara Dhoka...
Wo bhi GD Parrot kay sath...😉😉😉
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Originally posted by: sheroo9000

haha😆

I was reading it while you were posting😊
mein tou ache bachon ki tarah sirf 28 bottles peeta hoon...😆
aur ye mat bhoolo ke Lion Popat ka Bhai hai😉😛



😈
Bhaiyun ka Bhai...😉😆

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OMG..😲😲!! Even such great writers of our forum are inspired by FW in giving title to their story..🤣🤣.
Edited by ANGELICEYES - 11 years ago

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