OS: Iss raat ki...Chap 7 and epilogue pg 60 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Courtesy of the village gossip and horrible weather, we now have everyone in that house or headed towards that house. By everyone..

1. Mallika

2. Mansukhani

3.Dadlani

4. Ashutosh

5. Nidhi

6. Varadarajan

7. Detective

8. Ghanshyamdas

9 The guy in the boot of his car (Is it his driver?)

10. That other girl who heard Dadlani talking over the phone.

Have i covered everyone??

achcha hain achcha hain...you are building it up really well.

when is the next part??

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Wow Sagi, good moves ! 👏

So, the grills are of gold and it seems that every one is after the gold treasure inside the derelict house.. sound very interesting ! 😊

But will Ashni be on the same mission once they enter to take shelter here.. ?

Waiting to watch it ...

Good that all are inviting themselves here.. now even the detective is thinking of taking the voluntary retirement.. to seek for the gold.. 😛

Nicely woven.. ⭐️

Originally posted by: aardhan

Sagi, posted my review for chapter 2 on pg 31... take a look 😊

when you log in

And will post review for this latest chapter in a few minutes

Originally posted by: aardhan

Baap re Sagi... this has now turned into a treasure hunt! 😆 And then what, once they enter the house the story will change course again or what! wait and watch.

So rumors, whispers, eavesdropping, curiosity, greed, foolishness and in between all this a couple on HM desperate for a shelter for the night... nice progression, and you have an army of people marching towards the deserted house! 😃 that once deserted house is soon going to transform into a market-place! 😆

But waiting to read more... interestingly poised Sagi. 👏 You are maintaining a good amount of suspense... so many people heading towards the house and no one knows what or who they will encounter... 😉 Or whether the house hold answers to all their life's problems or if it will lead to problems 😆

Abhi I am running out of ideas for suspense. The only ideas are of horror. Comedy I think I have exhausted my quota

When is the next part?

I haven't yet started writing.

Originally posted by: s_danger

Dekha. ANd liked it very much.

Originally posted by: aardhan

I just realized that I was so sleepy I had made so many spelling errors... sorry about that. Hope it was still legible to you!

Perfectly, Aunty. Don't worry about that.

Chalo, I will be logging off soon, its almost midnight here... are we 12 hours apart? 😛

It is 1 pm here. So I guess...13 hours apart?

So, Sagi, have you been to the Indian shopping area many times... which restaurant do you like there?

I have not gone there much. I don't feel like either.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

In the months of October and November I wrote one story. It was not posted in the forum and sent directly for publishing. Print version is going to take some more time. But the Kindle version is out. Here is the link:

http://www.amazon.com/Bridge-Over-Chasm-Suvika-ebook/dp/B00HAL21VI/

Special thanks to Sagi (Sagarika). She designed the cover page for my book and also named it. Bangari,

And Jyothi, who put up with my countless phone calls and questions regarding architecture and interior designing. Buddy, for everything.

Loads of love,

Suvika.