One Shot : Sources of Light | TY Note: Page 15 - Page 5

Posted: 10 years ago
That was so beautiful Ana! I loved how serene the whole OS felt. Patience, time and love healed Khushi and although Arnav didn't deserve the second chance your writing made me feel like he did!!
Just sheer poetry when you write an OS filled with so much emotion & love. 

This just reminded me of the true essence of their love story, Khushi & Arnav = Hamesha ❤️
Posted: 10 years ago
loved it dear..
it was wonderful... and really beautiful.../
sometimes alot of words r not needed to convey wat ur heart speaks...
Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Ana that was simply fabulous...I loved this redemption of ASR. 
His apology to khushi was so genuine and heartfelt...and i am so happy that khushi didn't give in to him very easily but made him earn his forgiveness. As much as i love ASR i thought what he did to khushi on their wedding night was unforgivable...but off course khushi being khushi has to ultimately forgive the man who means everything to her. 

But she doesn't give in easily that's a sigh of relief as far as i am concerned...which made the whole terrace scene so damn fulfilling. 
Khushi's Don't go was just aww...and he stays back. 
Forgiveness asked, forgiveness earned and forgiveness given!

A beautiful OS and it deserves all the praises that come its way!
Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful, really really beautiful!!!!!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
First of all Hun a big congrats for achieving the fifth place rank for the OS contest,

The one shot was absolutely amazing and simply superb,

Love the fact your one shot was based on the redemption track, it's my favourite genre. 

I'm glad Khushi did not give in straight away and did ignore Arnav for two months,

The terrace part was so beautiful, finally accepting each other again. 

Written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM xx 
Edited by P4rveen12 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!  I real heart warmer...a total contrast to 'It's Complicated', which probably makes it stand out even more.
Loved it.

Posted: 10 years ago
Ananya,
You took up a scene that was most painful and where ASR was the meanest in IPK. But then Arnav realized his mistakes soon and struggles to rectify them. The path to forgiveness was so gradual, didn't realize when it happened but t was beautifully portrayed. Khushi must have been Devi Maiyya's favourite daughter for she has etched a beautiful soul in the name of Khushi for only she could forgive Arnav and not even making a show of it..!!

The terrace scene was beautiful so as the "Don't go". It spoke volumes..!!

Thank you for making the most awful track, memorable by rewriting it..!! 👏

Cheers
K
Posted: 10 years ago
Your love for writing one shots completely shines through with this one.
Not many can manage to tell an entire story within this limitation and you clearly marvel at it, not missing a single beat.
Arnav at his worst and back together with this silent yet strong Khushi portrayed perfectly.


Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful depiction of love, lovely piece

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