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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow! I real heart warmer...a total contrast to 'It's Complicated', which probably makes it stand out even more.

Loved it.

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sonia_1

@sonia_1

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Beautifully written 👏

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Ananya,

You took up a scene that was most painful and where ASR was the meanest in IPK. But then Arnav realized his mistakes soon and struggles to rectify them. The path to forgiveness was so gradual, didn't realize when it happened but t was beautifully portrayed. Khushi must have been Devi Maiyya's favourite daughter for she has etched a beautiful soul in the name of Khushi for only she could forgive Arnav and not even making a show of it..!!

The terrace scene was beautiful so as the "Don't go". It spoke volumes..!!

Thank you for making the most awful track, memorable by rewriting it..!! 👏

Cheers

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Your love for writing one shots completely shines through with this one.

Not many can manage to tell an entire story within this limitation and you clearly marvel at it, not missing a single beat.

Arnav at his worst and back together with this silent yet strong Khushi portrayed perfectly.

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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

beautiful depiction of love, lovely piece

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

hats off to you for such a lovely os
you have penned down arnav's POV beautifully
one of the best os i hv ever read!

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myriads

@myriads

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

This was so Lovely .After the heartache & pain they had gone through ,life has given them a promise of hope & much more ...loved the way u put this across beautifully .This had such a calming effect.

Congrats Ana. Wish u many more accolades in future. 👏

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

it's absolutely stunning Ana..so beautiful ,so heartfelt & so warm ..loved it

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

that was really beautiful, u made me cry 😊 i love that arnav truly repented and tried to fix things as soon as he found out and that khushi took her time to forgive him, and i'm happy that their lovestory came back at the same place it had ended for arnav - the terrace. very moving and haunting and ultimately hopeful ,congrats on the award and ranking, u deserve it! 😛