AsYa TS: The Architect and The Corporate Golden Girl [Complete]

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

comment updated on pg 1

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@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Awesome!!

Love the way you write!!

Poor Zoya she has been through so much!!

Continue soon!! :)

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Interesting thread

Continue soon

😛

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

update soon please ... please please pretty pretty please

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

awweesooomee dear...!! cant w8 fr u to continue...! nd i feel real bad fr zoya...! smthing haz really big tym messed up her lyf.. hopefully asad manages to bring bak d old zoya..! Cud U plz plz plz plz 😳 pretty plz wid a cherry(nd whichever fruit u lyk) 😆 on d top PM me wen u update its 2nd part...!

nd asad miyaan nt bad wid ur knowledge about ladies fashion...!! I must say dis is truly one good way to propose nd convince a girl..! Juz lyk a way to a man's heart is thru his stomach, a way to woman's heart is ur brain IQ nd knowledge abt fashion nd nt to frget d bank balance..! 😆

Some confusing questions:

bt is dilshaad also suffering from smthing...? Cancer..?

nd here Dr.Raizada is...? dont worry i noe IPKKND cuz even i was a huge fan of arnav...! nd of course d mad yet chirpy Khushi S.R.

bt seriously Female Satan...??!!! Epic! 🤣 bt its gud cuz only she names him soo many bt he doesnt even do one in d serial..! so m glad u gave justice..!! 😆

bt d cute part was:"Why are women always so cryptic?" I said recalling hearing the same sentence from Humeira and Khushi."

bt poor asad having to bear so many whackings...!!

bt u writing, d way u described each nd every scene wid every detail... it seemed quite realistic...!! eageerly w8in fr d next update...

thnx

aashka

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

oh this is amazing
give us next part soon

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

LOVED IT THANX FOR THE PM AND EXCITED TO READ THE OTHER PART PLEASE UPDATE SOON😃

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lover1998

@lover1998

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

AWW OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE. Can I just say that I died and went to heaven when I read the update. It was superb. OMG I dunno how you can't like it. The flowers part was so cute and sweet. The hospital scene it was tooo gud. The kitchen scene was so cute and made me all happy just reading it. OMG I can't even explain it in words what the ferris wheel scene was like. And holy I think I have watched way too many crime shows cause I thought her fiance had like raped her or something. -_- Needless to say I feel really stupid right now but I'm happy that this wasn't the case this time. The diary entries...I can't even... they killed me. They were cute, romantic, light, funny and amazing at the same time. And aww I'm so happy with the end of this TS. Absolutely loved it. Great Job.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Oh, that was so so so BEAUTIFUL...I fell for this Asya and their lil family...Zara is so cute...That was beautiful...loved it...!!!! 😳

Hope you will continue writing...!!! 😊

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

This was awesome. Asad in this story was a real sweetheart. I loved him so much. Finally AsYa married and had such a cute family. 😊

Thanks for such a beautiful story.